Wuxia Crossover: From the Start, I Have the Peerless Sword Casket and Become a Child of the Planes

I feel like I have a system, but I feel like I don't. I feel like I have medical skills, but I feel like I don't. I can't see it, so the summary is not good.

The level of people in Xiaoao is too high. They are on the same level as Invitation and Yan Nantian. They are talking nonsense. Even Zong Wu.

The writing is a bit messy. Secondly, the martial arts in Swordsman is very low, but the author has improved it too much. Swordsman is a world where no innates are available. As a result, the thirteen Taibos are all innate... Also, the protagonist's personality is not likeable, looks uncomfortable, and is too out of touch.

Shouldn't the theme of this kind of novel be about picking up the most beautiful girls, drinking the strongest wine, and being free and carefree? I didn't understand it halfway through reading it! I don't understand the purpose of the system's missions, and I don't understand the protagonist's goals either. It's not fun either.

The author's grasp of human nature is not enough, and the writing is messy. Although the author can give a higher score on the accident, the difference between leverage and resourcefulness is too much, the system is not used, the medical skills are just decoration, and the worldview is laid out in the same one-third of an acre, which shows that the author's heart is limited and his ability is limited. In the world of comprehensive martial arts, you have to have a big picture, the Qin Dynasty, the Tang Dynasty, the Song Dynasty, the Ming Dynasty, and Mongolia. Since these are written, why doesn't anyone come to eat the buns? If you want me to say that the Liu family should be destroyed, Liu Zhengfeng should die. When I watched Swordsman, I felt that he was nothing, and he didn't care about his wife, children, and children at all. The man named Qu also knew that he would not care anything about leaving a way out for his granddaughter. The whole family died. He deserves to die, and the Liu family's wife, children, and children also have to die. The rest of the Liu family has not grasped the human nature well enough, and the writing is messy. Although the author can give a higher score for the accident, the leverage and resourcefulness are too different. The system is not used, the medical skills are just decorations, and the world view is laid out in the same one-third of an acre in the end, which shows that the author's heart is limited and his ability is limited. In the world of comprehensive martial arts, you have to have a big picture, the Qin Dynasty, the Tang Dynasty, the Song Dynasty, the Ming Dynasty, and Mongolia. Since these are written, why doesn't anyone come to eat the buns? If you want me to say that the Liu family should be destroyed, Liu Zhengfeng should die. When I watched Swordsman, I felt that he was nothing, and he didn't care about his wife, children, and children at all. The man named Qu also knew that he would not care anything about leaving a way out for his granddaughter. The whole family died. He deserved to die, and the Liu family's wives, children, and children also had to die. Some of the useless ones also had to die, and the rest escaped with Liu Jing's secret help. Then take revenge. I think Liu Jing actually said directly that he, Liu Zhengfeng, will bear the consequences of his own sins. We are not people in the Jianghu. Jianghu is a matter for Jianghu people to understand. Don't include us orphans and widowed mothers. You and he can go and settle it wherever you go. We orphans and widowed mothers just want to live our own lives. Now that he has abandoned his wife and children for his own selfish desires, he has severed ties with us orphans and widowed mothers. Whether he is dead or alive has nothing to do with us. Of course, although he is not a good person or a good father, he is our father after all. As a son, the person who killed him cannot have done nothing. Afterwards, I will ask you for advice as a son. If I can beat you, you have to burn incense and worship. If you can't beat me, I will also fulfill my filial piety as a son. Use your hind legs to transfer people. . . Or be more domineering and use your identity as a miracle doctor to offer a reward. There will always be someone who can pay for his life in order to survive. . .

So watery,

The protagonist is the God of Gamblers, right? He bets every day, and even invites his crush to Yan Nan. It's hard to collapse, and he's choked to death with his shit.

The writing is messy, too weak, the character of the protagonist is not good, and there is no desire for people to read. Bad review.

The steps are too big

I really don't know how to put it into words. Look at the picture.