Genshin Impact: I Don't Want to Transmigrate

I don't understand why you gave Lisa your mobile phone? Isn't there a photo of him and his family in it?

Generally speaking, it is manageable, but there are many small problems. Many places either do not comply with the timeline, or do not comply with the settings of Genshin Impact, or the actions of the protagonist are illogical. For example, in the timeline that the protagonist travels to, the Seven Saints Summons has not yet started to travel to Mondstadt. This will have to wait until the travelers arrive at Inazuma, and Inazuma no longer enforces the lock-down order. Then Yaedo's "Summon King" novel was exported to the Teyvat continent, which made the game popular, and people also played it in other countries. In terms of settings, Genshin Impact's official settings clearly state that Teyvat locals don't know what teleportation anchors do and how to use them (temporary anchors are not included) Finally, in terms of the logic of the protagonist's behavior, for example, it is necessary to set up that the protagonist has a wife and children before time travel, and then he has to have an affair in Teyvat, which is quite speechless. I don't know whether to call him a scumbag and heartless, or Lisa is stupid for inexplicably flirting with him despite knowing that he has a son. The witch lady is obviously not that good at love. Also, the protagonist has a son, and she is not a traveler. With a girl's body type, it would be embarrassing for a grown man to follow the children and call her Sister Lisa every day. For another example, the protagonist can't help but show off as soon as he has something. He is half-baked in Shennong's Materia Medica, the Book of Changes, etc. He is not a professional. He only understands a little about the structure of the human body by looking at paintings. A person who can't even understand the major systems of the human body is going to study things like Dantian Internal Strength. How can he rely on research? Am I looking for the power of thought? To be blunt, I also study art. I have studied painting, sketching, modeling, and special effects. Of course, I also understand some very basic things about the human body. But before I started working out, I had no idea how to exercise the muscles in the whole body and what movements to use to exercise them most efficiently. If you have not studied biology, many people may not realize that we humans have no way to directly cure a certain disease. Almost all treatment methods use various means to stimulate the body's immune system. The immune system and self-healing ability are all prerequisite knowledge required for in-depth study of the human body. People who watch martial arts movies will tell you that medicine and martial arts are not separated. To create a martial arts, you must have a complete understanding of your own body. Many masters are famous doctors, let alone internal powers. They are not only famous doctors, but the cases of using internal power to heal injuries are even more outrageous. According to simple speculation, it may involve fields such as neurology, capillary distribution, human endocrine system, etc. Or, the mobile phone was given to Lisa inexplicably. For the protagonist, this mobile phone is almost the biggest plug-in when he comes to another world. Not to mention those files, it also contains photos and videos of his family, etc. It is almost an anchor for his longing for his hometown and family. How can a father give away such an important thing casually? If you want to lend it to the other party for a while to study for a while, then I can understand and just give it away. Then the protagonist, a father, puts himself in the heart of his wife and son. Don't pay attention to it at all, okay? This kind of behavioral logic simply does not fit what the character should do.

Sha Diao, you have made so many good things, can you hold on? You didn't even find a backer, so you worked hard to get something good, and you weren't afraid that the doctor would do a guinea pig experiment on you.

Is it so outrageous to let someone else play with something as private as your mobile phone?

I sincerely suggest that the author just open another book. The data of this book is probably not very high. Or completely overhaul it. After all, there are many Genshin Impact fanfiction writers, and most readers can't wait to read one. With 330,000 words, almost half of it has negative reviews. Ratings are not displayed either. Unless the author makes major changes, it will be difficult for this book to shine again. Assumptions: All readers now go to Shuhuang Square to promote this book. Although this book has more traffic, the number of negative reviews will only increase. When the ratings are displayed, readers may not read it with such a low score and so many negative reviews. Of course, this is all based on the situation where the author does not make a living from his side job or his main job. If I wrote it for fun based on my own mood or preference, then I can't say anything else (I can only write 330,000 words based on my preference and mood. I also admire the author's perseverance).

Haha, 😏 Author, take a look at the comments I left for you on Chapter 93. What is outrageous? It looked really cool! However, some of the following remarks really confuse the poor people. Are you kidding a layman? [Turns lips] Open the Dantian first? How to use internal strength to directly cultivate Qi and blood? Are women's exercises the same as men's exercises? Go, author, you might as well try how to refine the yang energy in a man's blood first? 😄 Is it possible to be like a woman?????? 🤭

There are a lot of poison points: 1. It's okay if the catchphrase appears occasionally, but it's very offensive if it appears too often. 2. The first person to hug Zhongli when he saw him? Still want to expose Zhongli's identity?? Please, Zhongli originally wanted to hide his identity, right? 3. People in Teyvat, the teleportation anchor point, seem to be unable to use it. 4. Now that we have come to Teyvat, Teyvat is a real world for the protagonist. If you are injured, you will bleed, and if you bleed, you will die. In Teyvat, strength comes first after all. The protagonist has never thought about how to improve himself since he got the Eye of God, but he actually wants to live around???

This book is very strong. The author must be a knowledgeable and knowledgeable person. There are many characters that are described very appropriately and the details are quite good. The description is completely from a different point of view. I think the further the author writes, the more he feels that the protagonist cannot go back. Author, you really don't deserve praise! Everything I wrote in the front is fine, but why is it getting worse and worse in the end... Sigh, I don't want to complain anymore. If I don't want to write nonsense, I can just write nonsense and think of other things. But author, you understand that you also said that your ability is limited and some things can be moderate as much as possible? Really, I think what you wrote was good at the beginning, but originally a lot of people read it. Do you know why so few people read it? There are just a lot of poisonous points, and it can't even be called a minefield. You can completely get out of a completely different world from others. Genshin Impact fan fiction can basically be divided into systematic, reborn, harem, funny, and aboriginal. In time travel, you are special, but let's take it slow, okay? Let's slowly think about it, but it really doesn't work anymore. You can create a group and discuss with the group members how to write this paragraph, because there may be many details and ideas that you don't know. With the help of some colleagues, you can expand your thinking. That's my suggestion. I'm really tired. I originally wanted to read this book, but it ended up being useless.

It's not that bad. The specific score should be between 7.9 And 8.6. The protagonist's mouth is really funny. All in all, it's worth watching. The author's update speed is too slow. Five-star praise, please encourage me.

It was originally quite interesting, but after the protagonist met Sora, the setting changed and became nonsensical. From a later point of view, it had such a big impact even 500 years ago, and the 500 years later at the beginning of the novel is indeed the same as the game. I can only say that the setting has been greatly changed, and there is nothing interesting about it.