Disciple, Feel Free to Fly! Take the Responsibility for Yourself If Anything Happens!

So well written! The characters written by the author are all loving, which is rare in online novels. Moreover, the author has his own ideas and routines but is not clichéd. In my eyes, it has surpassed most Tomato novels by a long way. Sometimes I even doubt that I am reading a published novel and hope that the author can continue writing. I couldn't help but offer Tomato's first reward, please update it oooooooo~ (By the way, there are currently five reminders for the latest chapter, and there are exactly five book reviews, and they are all from the previous one. It's so pitiful. When will such a beautiful novel be recommended)

The writing is good, the story theme is interesting, and most importantly, the logic is pretty good. Small suggestion: Since it is a group portrait narration, the character events can be described in more detail, and the rhythm of the group portrait can be slower. After all, one of the highlights of the group portrait is the perspectives, personalities, and events of all parties. Compared with the single-line brainless protagonist who is pushed in waves, the details of all aspects are more important, more foreshadowing can be set, and the progress can be slow. There can be more descriptions of unit plays. If you can hold on, you can write a single unit play as a complete novel. The original subject matter of group portraits is not considered popular, and more attention is paid to details. If we follow the traditional single-protagonist recommendation without thinking, some readers of group portraits will be lost. PPS: The style may not match well with Tomato, but this style doesn't seem to be mainstream anywhere now. Maybe some more traditional paid platforms will be better.

Very good. It's very interesting and beautiful, and the characters are all three-dimensional. I'm also surprised that the second apprentice is a female. I thought this article would be classified as a male video, and the protagonists are all male. Both the male and female characters have their shining points, they are great (lack of words) All in all, it's very beautiful. You'll know it once you've seen it.

Why is the rating so low? I copied it from another book. It's so good-looking and has no CP! (The considerate author will also write a side story based on the readers' CPs, I'll blanch the angel ()) I felt great after reading the first story. In fact, I think this format can be used as a unit drama. Write more, write more, it's not enough... I didn't dare to read the second story. I felt like I was missing one piece, ugh... But when I think of Xiaobai still lying at the bottom of the mountain, I feel so pitiful. I'll continue watching when I wake up😴 I really can't understand why the score is so low. The writing is all logical and not greasy. The characters have their own characteristics. The motives and results of the entire action are logical. The parts that should be light-hearted and funny are also very fun. The only shortcoming is that it's too short (I'll make up my review after I've read the whole thing)

It has a completely different feel than the previous one. I can only say that the author's writing style is really good.

Ah! Very attractive! Too short ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! That is to say, is it possible that I will wake up tomorrow and see that this book has updated 100 chapters [grievance]

I cried, my cp was so bad that I didn't cry, but [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] I finally found a good-looking one, and it's gone like this. It's such a pity. I silently wiped away my tears. I'd better go find a book. Author, in fact, you wrote really well. You can say it's curiosity. This book has really entered my heart, and it will really become my regret [almost crying] [almost crying]. Say your final farewell, author. I am very happy to meet you and the characters you wrote!

[Hold face][Hold face] When I discovered this book, I realized that the author had cheated me. The reading experience so far is quite good. The author has a good grasp of the pacing, laying out foreshadowing but picking it up quickly, without being too draggy. It's cool but not mindless, and the main characters are all well drawn. The writing method of shifting the main perspective is also very novel. You can experience the growth and interaction of different characters. The depiction of the entire continent and the background of the story will gradually become more complete as different characters are unlocked. I hope that I can wait until the author comes back to fill in the gaps in my lifetime.

I finished this novel in one breath. The subject matter is really good, and there are a lot of foreshadowings. The author must fill in the holes. The plot is also very attractive, interlocking, and there are always new forces emerging that make people's eyes shine. The characters are also very full, making people feel more immersed in the story. This is my first time reading a plot-oriented novel. I don't know what is good, but if you can show off it, I believe it will be good. Come on! Stable update, sure to take off (๑> <๑)

It's good-looking. Each apprentice has his own character. He's a little sick, but not seriously ill. I like it very much. It's to my liking. Every story is wonderful. I won't get tired of reading it in one go. I can feel it. The writing is quite good. I finished reading it in one go. It's very interesting. I look forward to the follow-up plot!

It's very interesting and interesting, but it's too short and I haven't even finished it yet. But it's relatively new. It comes from the previous book, so cheers😊.

It's very well written. I guess it's because I didn't recommend it so no one read it, so I didn't rate it. It's a pity. The writing is also pretty good, and the plot isn't too exaggerated or illogical. Maybe the author hasn't persisted long enough, and it seems that long articles are easier to recommend.

No, how did this end? I originally planned to keep it for a few days, but I checked the sale price today and saw it finished! [Wronged]

I haven't finished reading the story of the first apprentice yet. It feels a bit like reading a martial arts novel. In my impression, martial arts novels usually have a main line that has nothing to do with love. Even if there is a love plot, it usually doesn't take up too much text. The main plot of the first apprentice is to solve the dilemma of identity exchange, which is a hook that can catch me as a reader. I've finished watching it, it's great! I have read all three of the author's books and have followed them. I like the style of serious dramas. It's great to be able to write in a serious drama style that makes people want to read on.

It's rare to see this type of book on Tomato compared to other fast-paced and stalk-intensive books. Indeed, Tomato may rarely receive traffic, but it's really good to read. I hope the author can finish this book in the future and give them a good time in the story.

People who gave up because of their names can give it a try, and they won't lose money by investing in it. It's good-looking, good-looking, it's from the previous one, it was still being serialized when I saw it, and I didn't expect it to be so addictive [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]. The description is very delicate. Is this subject really niche? I quite like it. It has the feeling of a key holding everything together. When I read it, I felt that time passed so quickly. It's rare that I didn't have the thought of abandoning the article [like] [like] [like]. I feel that the main tone is relaxed, funny with a little bit of sadness, that feeling of labor pain, oh my, it's so hard to describe, Si Tingbai was influenced by others, and now it affects others.

It's really beautiful. I hope the author can come back and continue to gather seven apprentices [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

Very pretty hahaha

It's beautiful, but it's a pity that I haven't finished it yet.

It's a pity that the update has been discontinued [crying] Followed from the author "Workers", the author's rhythm is very good, the concise narrative style is coupled with humor from time to time, and some supporting characters will also repeatedly introduce their identities to help readers remember I'm sorry I got to know you so late [I'm about to cry] I see that the author only has three works. Did he change the platform?

After reading it, I am still not satisfied. Alas, it is a pity that such a good book was abandoned by the author because no one cared about it. The author's writing style is very good, and the plot concept is better. I never read romance online books, but I finished reading Dafu's book overnight. It's a pity that I didn't finish this one.

It's a very interesting novel, but it's not finished [I almost cried] Fortunately, the author wrote an outline for me to think about, otherwise I would really cry [laughing]

The writing is really good, the writing style is good, and the plot is not bad either!

A good story. The short length made me cry twice. The author is quite good at writing. It's a pity that the popularity is not enough, so I got stuck... Fortunately, I wrote out the settings so I can make up my own mind... Next, let's look for the author's new book [Thoughts]

The subject matter is very novel. Among the many fairy tales, this book stood out to me. The plot is compact and the logic is rigorous. More importantly, each character has his own story and inner truth. There is no forced CP, no BE or HE for the sake of the plot. Everything is done naturally. This is a true group portrait novel.

It's really beautiful, but it's not enough. Please write more, please [cry][cry][cry]

From the previous book, I read it in one go and found that there are only more than 20 chapters. The author greatly [please update](ง •̀_•́)ง

Very beautiful, very beautiful The author's writing style is really good, there is no problem with the plot logic, and it is not sloppy at all. You won't lose money if you invest in it. There is no CP, but you can make it yourself. Show them all to me! ! ! !

It's well written, but it's a pity. I just had it done after seeing it on a recommendation. I hope I can get good results next time.

Ouch, the Queen quits, the author quits writing, wait for the next book~