Big Fish: Entering the Human World at the Beginning

I hope book friends will give you more comments, thank you [sending heartfelt wishes]

In fact, the author's writing is okay. My suggestion is to increase the sense of immersion. Maybe you can try to write the troubles of students and office workers, or you can make the writing more interesting. It is a bit like prose. You can read other authors' novels for reference. If the author reads this comment, I hope he can reply to me. The writing is indeed good, but it may not be suitable for some people, but for me, it is still a good work.

Sister, don't you want it? It's a pity

Not enough, totally not enough

The writing is very good. What you want is to be free and do whatever you want. Come on with pleasure. Come on.

Dude, you are so handsome.

Very interesting, the subject matter is novel

Good-looking, very good-looking.

As long as the flow of the heavens does not lead to collapse, it is a good book

Big cheers for the author!

Very good, just a little lacking

I feel like the author knows how to cut it [Thinking]

Come on, come on, come on, come on

It looks pretty good after letting yourself go\(//∇//)\

Is this a harem?

It feels good, except for the plot of the title

Various kinds of sutures