Ye Luoli: the Moonrise Is Bright, My Heart Is Quiet

Original me: The title of the book is nice Later me: superficial me [laughing evilly] The brushwork is gentle. The characters are unpretentious, and the contrast brings out the essence. Fresh and smooth writing

I love the main character so much, he has such a good character, especially when Prince Water wants to spit out the elixir to Wang Mo, he presses it back, which made me laugh to death. The interaction between the protagonist and Pangpang is also very loving, and the protagonist's personality is so cute! ! ! .°ʚ(*´꒳`*)ɞ°.! ! Ψ(｀∀´)Ψ I really love glutinous rice balls, oh oh oh! So much love! The author's writing style also has an ancient charm, which makes it very interesting to read. The elixir that the clear water gave to Wang Mo was pushed back in Chapter 50

The author is so good. I really like Xiaoxiao and Pang Zun's CP. It's so easy to comment on. But I have to say that you are really good at writing [facepalm][facepalm]. I really love and hate you. My dear, in order to make up for the young heart that was hurt by your poor writing, it's not too much to write a few more chapters, right? [Shy][shy] Come on, author, I believe you can complete the important task of ten updates a day [code hold] [code hold] [working on draft] [working on draft] So pretty! !

It's really great. The interaction between the protagonist and Pang Zun is really sweet, and I think the relationship between the protagonist and other people is handled very well. Now I just need to eat dog food with peace of mind [sneaky laugh] [sent heart]

I think the chapter in Ye Luoli is the best. The subtle movements between the two protagonists are very sweet, which really poked me, and I also like the plot. I really don't like heartthrobs, micro-thrillers are okay. I prefer the love between two people, rather than a single arrow. This article fits this point. I hope the protagonists can have a sweet relationship with each other in the future. I feel like there shouldn't be much for the two saint-level fairies to be abused in battle [Chigua] Anyway, this article is still very interesting, I recommend it!

The author will give you a lot of support. The plot is good and the story is good to watch [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] The author greatly praised the score

I like it. It looks very interesting. When I first watched it, I thought CP was Li Hui [face covering]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, especially the pair of Pang Zun [shy][shy][shy] Good-looking and good-looking, overwhelming points [shy][shy][shy]

Oh my god, my god, it's so beautiful. Please give me a lot of support for the author to update it. I hope the CP will be changed to Dharma King [Shy] (taking by force). The writing is very good, the plot is very good, and the two male protagonists are also very similar to my taste. I hope you will give me a lot of help and update it!

It's very good-looking, the plot is very smooth, and the CP is pretty good. The character design of the protagonist is not too OOC. They are very sweet to get along with, and there are no major problems. In particular, the love brain of Prince Water has been cured. Looks quite comfortable Big cheers for the author! 💪^ω^

Come on, author, I'm looking forward to the plot more and more. I hope to see Little Moon being blackened by the Dharma King's forcible contract hahh

It's really super good-looking. I really like Fatty and Tangyuan [Adoration]. It's really good-looking. So will the author update another book? I remembered that I have another mobile phone. Using this mobile phone also gives the author extra points, so I shouldn't need to press it, right? This spell is really much better than that of the protagonist group. I really like the phrase "cold moonlight, long autumn moon, bright moonlight at the beginning of the month, full moon and rebirth, ode to the bright moon" ahhhhhh I really like this [blowing kiss]! ! ! Can the author do a crossover with his next book?，，，，，（），，[][] Then again, Tang Yuan and Pang Pang seem to have only done this once, right? Has anyone written it? Want to see [send heart]

The writing is beautiful and very fluent. Big support to the author. (The above are serious comments) (screaming) (distorted) ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] (dark crawling) (crawling) (twisting) (darkly rolling) violently crawling) (eerie growl) (crawling) (split) (walk ashore) (twist) (spasm) (squirm (twisted walking) (attack regardless of target) ah ah ❤️❤️❤️The author writes so well ~ I am your dog🐶😚😚😚😌😌😌😌😌😍😍😍😍😍

Fellow Ye Luoli, eh, very pretty I saw it on the list. I was a little curious, so I clicked on it and saw the latest in one go. It was very smooth to read. The relationship between the fairies in Wonderland was also handled well. There are no surprises so far. Luxiao and Pangpang are so sweet that they kill me——

I was amazed by the author's writing style. Suddenly I felt like I was illiterate~＼(`Δ')/It was very poetic, and the insertion of poems turned out to have such an effect~I was suddenly enlightened. The psychological description of Gui Gui in front of me is so cute~ I understand it when Gui Gui and Pang Pang Tiantian (*´I`*) have it, cough cough. Also, I would like to whisper a little bb, can the extra story be about Gui Gui and others... (Risking one's life to contribute) I feel like it... [I understand]

It's very interesting, and it's the top Ye Luoli fanfic I've ever read. The protagonist is very beautiful and sassy, ​​and has her own pursuits. She's not a virgin. The author's writing style is also very good. The whole story is touching and attractive.

It's really good-looking, give me some points First of all, I have always had problems when watching anime. The first one is that when Feiling disappeared, although Zina and them were not in the same elementary school, why did they never see each other after that? Just like losing the fairy, there is no use value. The second one is that the ice princess has almost disappeared. Why is the prince so kind to someone he meets for the first time, and would rather give the elixir to someone than his sister. The third one is really strange. Logically speaking, the spells of humans and fairies should be the same. Even if they are different, they should be from the same source. But the only ones who seem to have some connection are Jianpeng, Gao Taiming and Mo Sha. Others are like replicas of some of the great fairies' spells. But after reading this novel, there is no doubt about it. It is really well written and smooth, and the protagonist is not brainless. Then the two of them are also very sweet [like][like][like]

It is relatively new. The early stage is in the wonderland before the plot begins. So far, it seems that I have a good relationship with the Ice Princess, Yan Jue, Meng Yi, and the Fire Lord, and I also have some friendship with Li Hui. Compared to the protagonist group, the male protagonist prefers Wen Qian, Feng Yinsha, and Gao Taiming. CP Pang Zun, but I think the emotional line is flat. Pang Zun fell in love with the protagonist at first sight. The protagonist likes to call himself Gui Gui, so Gui Gui, I am a bit kind-hearted.

It's very interesting. This is the second Ye Luoli fanfic that I found interesting. Come on, author! 😍😍😍

So beautiful! It's so awesome to fall into Pang Xin's CP! I feel that if I watch them for a long time, I might get diabetes. This makes me sick every day, and I have to be a light bulb to watch these two people mess around! I think I need to find a boyfriend instead of a best friend to accompany me! (Because you are underage and cannot find a boyfriend)

Yes, yes, the author's writing style is very good, and the description of the environment and characters are very beautiful. Many of the sentences in it can be directly used in compositions. Finally, I hope the author will update it soon [Sending my heart]

It's so beautiful. I've followed more than 50 photos until now. I really like it. It's the first time I read Ye Luoli's article. I didn't expect it to be so good. I hope the author will update it more. Two chapters are really not enough [crazy]

The content is exciting and the plot is interlocking! ! ! ! The protagonist is not a bad guy! ! ! Strong, but not invincible! ! ! Most importantly, I really like the character of the protagonist! ! ! The protagonist's CP is Pang Zun! ! Princess Meng and Fire Spirit Master were also cleared! ! The only one who is miserable here is Mandola! ! !

Beautiful, really beautiful. Tangyuan has a good relationship with all the fairies. Also helped many people. It's like white moonlight here. Pang Zun also changed. A good wife and a good husband, travel together in the fairyland and the human world. This is something I've seen in many Ye Luoli fanfics that suits me very well. Really great to watch.

Not a noob, the writing and plot are very good, concise and concise but the development of things is not abrupt. The content is rich, the plot is reasonable, the writing is smooth, and it fits the character.

It's quite interesting [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking] There is no Virgin Heart, and the protagonist and Pangpang are very close to each other [crazy][crazy][crazy] The author, please give it a try ^0^~ I am looking forward to the following plot

I love them both so much, they are so sweet [Adoration] I like Tangyuan's character so much (●°u°●) "Shadow Beauty The author is so talented. I didn't understand some of them, so I just searched them [shy] Good reviews, I like to see this kind of stuff, I will recommend more in the future✨

The male protagonist is so cute! The space was distorted, and a graceful laurel tree appeared on the flawless white jade plate. The imagined pain did not appear: What am I? Fine! ! ! After sensing the surroundings, he found that yes, he was still on the Taiyin Star: "Gui Gui, I am really blessed and blessed.

It's good to read, but it's a small drawback when borrowing the natal spiritual weapon and immortal power at the beginning. But this also depends on personal feelings. I think it's okay, but many comments are complaining. I've read the first few chapters, and the more I read later, the more interesting it becomes. I hope the author will update it ten times a day.

A little different, two stories. The moon and Pangpang are really close to each other. In the words of Princess Meng, the moon is a glutinous rice ball stuffed with sesame seeds. The moon and the king of the world really feel like chasing their wives in the crematorium. Fortunately, the final ending is still good.