I Have Tips for Horror Games in My Head

The writing is great ~ I love it so much (⌯︎¤̴̶̷̀ω¤̴̶̷́)✧︎~ I particularly like the couple Ling Zheng. I fell in love with her at the beginning, but what makes me happiest is that my wife allowed me to fall in love with her as I wished ≧∇≦ I'm super excited, okay? Finally, I confess to the author (I really like you so much, I love you so much)

Reasons for the five-star rating 1. I was a novice in writing at the beginning, but gradually matured. 2. Tolerance to newcomers 3. I like the character (it is recommended to make a sexy accent at the beginning and smooth it out later, otherwise it will be too explicit at the beginning and too conservative later) 4. I have also tried writing novels, but I know it is difficult to persist. 5. Novel themes reading suggestions 1. Have less dialogue (although the dialogue is enough to make up for the word count) and write more plot 2. Thriller games should have a bit of a struggle, rather than just poking with a knife to gain experience points. 3. It is recommended to let the protagonist think alone (don't think half way, Wei 0 will make trouble) 4. It is recommended that the following plot should not be the same as before, but should use some TV dramas and the like, and less, so as to keep the writing style fresh. Appear unique

I really like the interaction between Wei Zheng and Wei Ling haha. Very well written! I hope you don't give up, I'm looking forward to it! ! !

I have finished reading a story about two male protagonists who are brothers. The two male protagonists are twins. The content of the horror game is not eye-catching. Maybe I have read too much. I always feel that the difficulty of the game in this article is very low and the decryption difficulty is not enough. Moreover, this book does not seem to focus on games. The author is more about us. The story highlights the secrets of the two male protagonists, so the difficulty of the game is not very high. However, the foreshadowing of the male protagonist's secret feels a bit uninteresting. It may be that the article is a bit short, so I didn't grasp it well. But overall, the article does not have too many poisonous points. If you like to read this category, I recommend it.

Not bad, I saw the helplessness of the parents of Wei Zheng and Wei Ling. Fate played a fatal joke on their children, but they couldn't compete with the arrangement of fate. Fortunately, although the two brothers were separated for many reincarnations, the younger brother still had his own body in the end. Although fate was cruel, it also gave a glimmer of hope. Cherish your current life. When you are not satisfied, you wonder if fate is playing tricks on you. Good luck will be waiting for you at the next corner. [Send heart][Send heart]

It's so beautiful! The author will update it quickly. I can't get enough of it [Love] [Love]

This book is not bad. The interaction between Wei Zheng and Wei Ling is really cute [shy]. Although they are pseudo-double male protagonists, they really interact well. It's just that the ending at the end is a bit sudden and a little hard to understand, but everything else is good.

Wow, that's great, hehehehe, super exciting, wonderful ヾ(Ő∀Ő๑)ﾉIt's so annoying [Like] I support you very much, keep working hard, but the chapters are a bit short, I haven't watched Yin yet [Like]((o(´∀｀)o)) cheering ✧＼ ٩(눈౪눈)و //✧Come on, hey ☆.｡.:*(Hee´Д`hee).｡.:*☆ Come on for you! ! ! ! ! ! ☆ * . ☆ . ∧＿∧∩* ☆ * ☆ (∀)/ . . ⊂ ノ* ☆ ☆ * (つ ノ .☆ (ノ

Like! The copy is not particularly long, which is suitable for impatient people like me. The NPCs in the dungeon have the ability to think independently. To be honest, I think such a dungeon is more interesting. No one knows what the characters in the dungeon will do, and the characters will not act rigidly like a program. It feels more real, which I like. Then the character of the protagonist is also very interesting. He is a smart person but sometimes a little funny and sometimes a little crazy. I also whispered that Wei Zheng and Wei Ling are very close to each other (regardless of cpcb) and they like this kind of long-term companionship.

It's delicious. I thought it was Narcissus, but it turned out to be orthopedic, but it's still delicious. The ambiguous atmosphere is really well written. Wei Ling really relies on his brother, the two little ones are so cute Well, I'm getting ready for the second brush.

This ending really shocked me for a moment … But 00 He and Xiao Zheng are so cute, I am completely attracted to them both! This is about " player " A story about actively entering the game and relying on special prompts to get through the levels. The overall rhythm is getting better and better, and every unit is memorable! I especially like two parts: one reshapes a classic character, breaks away from the traditional plot, and allows her to take a more independent path; the other depicts a makeshift team —— After experiencing some unsatisfactory teammates, the way this group of people trust and support each other is particularly precious. I sincerely hope that they can all have a peaceful and warm life in the future. The writing is smooth and natural, and humorous. If I have to say it, the sentences are a bit strange and sometimes too lengthy. But it looks easy, because Xiao Zheng is so strong, so it's pretty cool to see him follow g They had fun fighting each other with wits and courage. This is a short and concise article. It was originally meant to kill time, but I didn't expect that it will become more and more interesting as I read it later! The two of you are so good at eating. 00 As the younger brother, he is more fond of teasing his elder brother, but the secret crush on him is really coming. . Xiao Zheng is very handsome. When I mentioned this, I thought that we all seemed to be about the same age. When the other three children (Xiao He, Button, and A Jing) all called Wei Big Brother, I realized that they were not the same age (!) The two brothers just support each other and love each other! Talking about the ending, there was not enough foreshadowing and it was a bit confusing, but the author is very sincere and knows that his writing skills would rather give a hasty ending than discontinue the story. At the end, the extra chapter even teased himself a little, and the extra chapter is super sweet. All in all, it's a great book as the first one I read in the new year! I wish you good health and all the best. Looking forward to the new work! Happy New Year! Thank you for bringing such a warm book and two babies! See you again one day! He is his only flaw and the most reliable "tip" behind him. They are noisy, but they are each other's best teammates.

It's very interesting to watch, and the interaction between Wei Ling and Wei Zheng is also very interesting.

Wei Ling and Wei Zheng love each other very much! I love this so much! I think your writing is very good, please don't give up! By the way, author, you are really good. Very few people can write about A Chinese Ghost Story [Sending my heart]

It's well written, but I don't know why no one reads it.

Are Wei Zheng and Wei Ling a couple? [Laughing evilly]

There are some shortcomings (it's just rough), but overall it's pretty good, especially the orthopedics, which I love to death [shy] If one day, the author, your writing ability becomes stronger, it would be great if you are willing to revise and refine it [Thinking] Come on

How could I not give high marks to these two brothers for being so cute? Only then did I realize that this novel was written in 2023. The ending was too hasty and ended before I could finish reading it, and it was a bit confusing. I hope the two brothers will always be happy in the book [blowing kiss] [almost crying]

The progress is fast, but as a new author, the writing is very good, pseudo-double male protagonist, orthopedics, recommended

It's particularly beautiful, although now I can't figure out what Wei Ling means by "we" [eating melon] [eating melon] [eating melon]

Come on, come on, come on, author! [Sending Hearts] Also, I would like to ask quietly, is Wei Zheng superior to Wei Ling? And orthopedics?

I like this book very much, but is the ending a bit hasty and outrageous? Why isn't the ending very sweet, very sweet? But in general, the two of them were really sweet when they played the game a few times before. Why can't they be together like a couple? But overall it's still very good-looking. Except for the ending, which is a bit unfinished, this article is very exciting and highly recommended.

The subject matter is novel and the author has worked hard. Come on

It's so cool. I haven't met such a good person for a long time. The two of them are like a couple [shy]

It's beautiful. It's very beautiful. The author is great. I really like this book. I'd like to ask quietly, is Wei Ling the Ling I thought of? [Shy][shy]

Very nice! When I saw the plot in the Zombie Town laboratory in the middle of the night, it really gave me a little headache! Also, it was really fun ( ˶´⚰︎`˵ ). But when I saw chapter 87, I thought there were many more, but it turns out that this book only seems to have more than 100 chapters...

This book is quite nice. There is an elder brother Wei Zheng and a younger brother Wei Ling. It should be family affection rather than love, but it may also be orthopedics. The plot is a bit short and a bit vague in some places, but it's still quite exciting and enjoyable to watch. This book can be read in your spare time, it is very good.

I advise you not to read this book, otherwise you will fall in love with it! The author's writing is really beautiful!

I thought it was Narcissus, but I didn't expect it to be Orthopedics. The first chapter is a bit rough, but the middle is great, and the ending is a bit hasty, and I still have more to say!

There are no big mistakes, but I feel that the progress has accelerated a bit in the later period. Logically speaking, this type of genre can write at least more than 150 chapters, but the plot is still good｡:.ﾟヽ(*´∀`)ﾉﾟ.:｡

Funny and good looking hehe