That Man, That Sword, That Spear

The idea is very good. I haven't read many fantasy novels, so I don't understand it very well. Let me comment a little. 1. The name Chen Xinyi is not suitable for fantasy novels. 2. The father's identity is revealed a little early. 3. There can be more descriptions of appearance, so readers can have more room for imagination. For example, the image of an old man wearing tattered clothes and a gray face. Come out, Chen Xinyi is the same, for example, the light purple tube top is decorated with three-dimensional lotus patterns, and the wavy stripes and white patterns can be seen on the sleeves, creating a cute image. Because it doesn't give people a deserted feeling when they first appear, so it is not suitable for clothes mainly in blue. The stereotype makes me think Chen Xinyi is the image of a junior sister💕If you don't like it, don't criticize

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Came from Douyin, pretty good😏😏