[White-Haired Girl] [Urban Superpowers] [Light Novel] [Dual Plotlines, Dual Protagonists] [Pure Love and Healing] [One-on-One Romance Showdown] [Deadly Secret Identities]
An ordinary music-loving boy is warmhearted and talented, but poverty and the pressures of life have him down on his luck.
A dangerous girl with supernatural powers is a master strategist who can sweep all before her, yet longs for an ordinary, peaceful life.
His talent is buried by capital, while her abilities are held hostage by justice. Both want to set down their burdens and find a new way of life.
Then, on a stormy night when a typhoon rages, the girl on the run meets the boy in dire straits, as if their two worlds have unexpectedly collided.
From then on, the boy escapes his bleak life and pursues his dreams, while the girl breaks free from fate's oppression and finds happiness. Together, they embark on a journey of mutual redemption.
Thanks for the support, the newbie is on the road, the key is persistence
Well, I can tell from the book that the author really wants to write well, but unfortunately I can see that he lacks experience. The main reason is that he feels a little rushed. In fact, you can consider waiting for the male protagonist's character to be completed before letting the female protagonist meet the male protagonist. Moreover, the female protagonist posted it too quickly. During the test, you can add some details. For example, add a gesture for the female protagonist to cast a spell or attack where the male protagonist cannot see it, and then add a trap that the female protagonist has arranged in the male protagonist's home. It's easy to kill people and silence them. After all, I have killed them before. It can't be all about hope. There must be someone to call the police. Otherwise, it stands to reason that the guys in the laboratory should have news. After all, it concerns all the superpowers in the country. The country should pay attention to it. Unless it is an unofficial organization, I can't stand it anymore. After all, my ability to withstand pressure is really weak. I can only give so much advice. Finally, I will give a four-star support to the author. In fact, the subject matter is good, but it's a pity that the beginning is not good, so the author can consider writing it again later, and then re-read the book. It should be able to attract many people. After all, it should not be difficult to write a good book if you are motivated. Come on, author.
A treasure book! 🥰🥰🥰 All sugar and no knife, loli is the best!
It feels ok, author, come on, keep at it, it should become popular
Very good. The plot is excellent, the setting is novel, the rhythm is well grasped, and there are no big problems with the characters. It is just that the plot is too flat and even has some emotional decline. There is a feeling of a shield hero. The negative emotions have accumulated enough and are ready to be vented, but they suddenly wither. There are problems with the description of some trivial matters in specific reality, especially the country. In terms of dealing with the general trend (but it is an imaginary world after all, so it is probably no problem). However, the fate used in the job agency can consider special job positions such as arbiter, pretender, and observer, and the upper limit of abilities can be raised a little higher, such as city explosion, surface explosion, and conceptual level abilities. I am very much looking forward to it. Hurry up and get it.
Not bad. I want to ask, is it a single heroine? This kind of book is suitable for a single female protagonist
The heroine in Lange said she is good at negotiating with blue eyes. Is she a dual personality? But in normal times, the transformation seems natural, as if it is related to emotions, and it doesn't look like a dual personality. If it is one person, why is it divided into "you and me"?
Like it, hope for more 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
I think "maybe I can't stand mindless novels". I think [many details and characters are not well thought out] and the writing style needs to be improved, but it is indeed a good novel. The author still needs to practice Don't get me wrong, I just want to comment, even if you don't like it
So far, it's quite interesting. It captures the helplessness of the awakened ones, and there are also quite a lot of daily posts about the male and female protagonists, which are very sweet. I hope the author will continue to work hard and update soon🥰😘