The Original God Has Become a Five-Clawed Golden Dragon!

I am very serious about creating a perfect novel

This book is quite good if you stick with it until the end. However, the protagonist has some bloody violence in the early stage, which will dissuade some readers. This is why the rating of this book cannot be improved. For example: in The Monster Project, the protagonist suffocated the genius Wei Dongyao and some animals. What impressed me most was that the protagonist seemed to strangle King Jiji, and Jiji's eyes popped out. Although I like bloody and violent books (whispering under my breath), besides! Author, I don't ask you to write 30,000 words a day, I just ask for two more chapters!

After reading these chapters, I looked solemn, bowed my head deeply, silently turned off my phone, stood up, opened the refrigerator, took out a bottle of 1982 collector's edition Sprite, held it tightly in my hand, and slowly walked to the window. The scenery outside the window was a bit dim, just like my current mood, heavy, very heavy, gradually Gradually, it started to rain lightly in the gray sky outside. Why, my vision was blurred. I don't know whether it was me crying or the rain was getting heavier. It might be both. My mood became even more melancholy. I could no longer suppress the emotions in my heart. I opened the window and shouted to the outside: Who am I looking down on in just a few chapters?

Come on, update, come on, update. The protagonist is a bit cruel in other worlds. He slaughtered all the residents of Bikini and killed Tian Tianwei and Dongdong Yao. It feels a bit cruel. I hope the logistics can be changed a little, at least not to kill people. Of course, except for the Japanese and the enemies. What's great is that this book is a Genshin Impact themed book, so the plots of Genshin Impact should be written in more other novels. Most of them, except for the early stage, are about the souls of other worlds. There are too few plots, which deviates from the theme of your novel. You can only give four stars on this point. No reader should criticize me. This is what he deserves. After all, there are too few plots of Genshin Impact.

This book may have been written by you according to your own ideas. However, you express your killings and cruelties that cannot be expressed in our world, and you express them in the world of novels. You want all living beings to appreciate your thoughts and everything about you, but you don't know that no one will necessarily like you. Different stances are different, and what you see is different from what all sentient beings can resist. The reason is because your negative energy is the conscience and good roots of all living beings. You should bear your own things that are not allowed. Don't have illusions about the outside world. Don't think about letting the outside world bear everything about you. I hope you can discover your good roots from this. At least don't express your negative energy first. After all, no one will bear your negative energy for you. They will only ridicule you.

It looks good, but I have a question. Mora is made from the flesh and blood of Morax, and Morax is also a dragon. If you don't get a taste of the blood, it will rise.

Keep up the good work, come on!

It's really good-looking. Boys are following the evolutionary path. After traveling through the heavens, you collect bloodline values ​​in the collection of the heavens, but it is a bit like fighting the sword. First, you continue to evolve, and then you get a level in the python that is about to become a dragon. After reaching the ninth level, you get a bloodline concentration! ! ! ! ! But! ! ! ! ! ! The author is really writing seriously, the plot is not fake and the plot is also very interesting, such as going to Ip Man's era, killing Japanese, and going to Zhang Wuji's early stage of brewing... In short, it is very interesting. The only drawback is! ! ! ! ! ! Updates are too slow! ! ! ! ! ! Just one day! ! ! ! One! ! ! ! Chapter I hope everyone will click more to generate electricity for love, otherwise the author will...: Said: I'm hungry again, and I'm so beautiful that I can't eat it [smile] [smile] [smile]. Bah bah bah Otherwise the author will cry. Of course, the author is interested in posting a photo. I will definitely compete with the author: No matter how beautiful I am, who should I show it to?

Very good but too short Disgusting. It was pretty good at first. I gave you five stars. But a sentence in Chapter 82 made me vomit. I moved it. I changed it to one star before moving it.

The protagonist wants to evolve into a five-clawed golden dragon in Teyvat. I guess by then... The adventurer pointed at a slime and stammered: This is a legendary monster. I can't stand watching the rest of it. I don't know what's going on, but it smells like Water Margin.

It's very interesting. Come on, I'll keep an eye on you, but I only read it for free... After thinking about it, it's not good to go whoring for free, so I plan to throw this book of yours into the book world.

Is this still a one-woman novel? [Eat melon]

Come on, don't mess up

The writing is pretty good. How could the protagonist travel to low martial arts or even the ordinary world to learn? Next time I will write a book about Pangu being reborn to play basketball.

Looks good but a bit short

Very nice, but the word count is a bit short

The author works hard! You must work hard! Don't lose your temper! Be inspirational! You have to be inspirational! Otherwise, I wouldn't be able to read such a good book!

The book is a good book, and it's fun to read, but the author is too short, so it was a little fun to read when I first came here, but not at all later on. Although it's still good to read, I'll give it a 5-star review, encourage it, and keep reading more.

If you update this little, who will read it? The book friend next door saw it and thought we had no books to read? Update 100 chapters for me, 100 chapters a day!

Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this

Very good, but short, so short

Very pretty [Come on]

So far, this book is pretty good

Just a reminder, the sky in Teyvat is fake. It is a false sky. There is no real sun, moon and starry sky. However, the reading pace is brisk but not rushed, and the connection is good, which is very good. Please update quickly, dog head author

It's pretty good, but the word count is a bit short.

This is a short and powerful book

There are many world views, the logic is also very good, and the writing style is also very good. Come on!

Although it didn't look good in the early stages, Anti-Japanese War is really good-looking.

I like the subject matter very much, it is coherent and smooth. This novel is worth reading.

It's a masterpiece that will ruin your childhood, but I think your anti-Japanese writing is good, so I'll give you four stars.