Rebirth***********

The author didn't seem to know exactly how to write this kind of article about chasing her husband in the crematorium, which gave people a feeling of being stuck between pleasure and displeasure. Su Yue's subsequent regrets were not reflected much, even after adding the setting of rebirth, as if rebirth had no impact on her at all. Furthermore, according to the previous description, Su Yue was married and lived with her husband for a period of time, so there is a high probability that she is a second-hand person. Even if she is reborn, it will be like a stab in the reader's heart. And the part about applying for college entrance examination, 710 points? 720 Points? Emotional writers seem to be very unfamiliar with college entrance examination scores. This score may be able to grab the top prize, but are everyone there a little too calm? Even a casual supporting character is over 650. Could it be that the full score of the world view is 1000? The most important thing is, since they are all reborn, and Su Yue still committed suicide and came back, why does she still feel that the protagonist feels sorry for her? It is really uncomfortable to watch. I wanted to give it two stars, but I thought it was difficult to code, so four stars are an encouragement.

The writing is okay, but the male protagonist was so full of love in his previous life that he lost all his dignity [smile]

I'll give five stars to the novel I wrote. I read the comments and some people said that Chapter 31 was a little bit toxic. I'd like to apologize. I wrote it when I was in Yang at that time and my head was a little dizzy. I changed it again. Thank you for your opinions.

The writing is okay, please encourage me.

The plot is okay, but the overall pace is very fast. It feels like everyone is speeding up the plot.

It's still very interesting. Before rebirth, the man chases the woman and licks the dog. After the rebirth, the woman chases the man and regrets it. In the usual routine, a double life is also added. I feel it is quite novel and the writing is also very good.

I wrote the first half of my life, hey

This is the most enjoyable book about rebirth that I have ever read, bar none.

The plot of this novel is still very good, but why are there two chapters that cannot be connected, and there are some places that cannot be connected to the next chapter.

The writing is pretty good, keep up the good work

Indeed, it is one of the few novels that combines multiple genres

It's very well written. Didn't the author talk about twins? Why is the heroine not reborn?

Pretty good

To be honest, it's not bad, so I'll give it five stars [Chigua]

It's a pity that the scale of the work is not large, but the work was cut in half.

It's okay in all aspects, but Su Yao can't go back and do the dirty work again. He can't stand those Japanese routines, so it's better to pull him out and torture him from time to time.

Let's shorten Su Yue's plot a bit. There is no need to keep exposing the wounds. It's time to let it go. Let's elaborate more on the future plans and development of the hero and heroine, as well as every detail of their lives.