Mortal Cultivation of Immortality: Starting from a Broken Book

This degree is very well grasped, and the writing is fluent. It is a very standard fantasy novel, with strong writing skills, clear plot expression, and logical integration. The feeling behind perfection, what's missing?

This is a very well written book and the author writes fluently. Light and dark lines interweave. The concept is very novel and the language dialogue is quite skillful. Come on, author!

It can be seen from between the lines that the author has experienced a lot, but the writing style is still a little immature, the scenes and characters depicted are not full and detailed enough, the logical framework is acceptable, and the conflicts are reasonably arranged, but there are still a few who are not thoughtful enough. I look forward to your progress.

It makes people want to read it, a good fantasy novel

It's not that it's super good-looking, but it's extremely good-looking. Let's continue to promote it! ★★★★★★Six-star quality👏👏👏

The author's writing is quite exciting, the protagonist has constant opportunities, and his level of advancement is extremely fast. It's just that the article is a bit slow in some places. After all, it's just to get more words and make more money.

This book is very good-looking, the content is exciting, and it is worth reading.

The writing is good, I hope the storyline will become more and more exciting and the fighting style will become more decisive in the future!

I have always heard that Chapter 1658 is very exciting, with clear layers and wonderful content. It is a very good book. It's a pity that Wang Qi's family members are not involved in the battle between gods and demons in the God Realm. After the victory of the battle in the God's Sales Realm, Wang Qi will send a few people from the God King Realm or go to the fairy world to pick up his family or spread the news (after receiving it, he will improve his strength in Wang Qi's mine). After his strength has improved, it will be exciting to participate in the battle between gods and demons in other realms of the God Realm. After his family arrives, Wang Qi will make arrangements and he will participate in the war first. It is really a pity that Wang Qi's family will not participate in the battle between gods and demons now.

This version of A Mortal's Journey to Immortality is more wonderfully written than other versions [Like]

The story is good, the introduction is good, the protagonist is affectionate, has twists and turns, not too twists and turns, it is a happy book, although there are some unreasonable plots, such as the protagonist has cultivated the power of chaos, but still has to transform into immortal power when he reaches the divine world, the power of chaos is the power of the entire space...

It's very engaging to watch, the writing is smooth and the plot is reasonable.

The content is ok and the plot is ok. The protagonist ascends to the realm of God Emperor and God Sovereign and then traverses the God Realm and then the entire world of Zhutian. There are now nearly 1,600 chapters, and more than a thousand chapters can be written. It is a very good book,,,,

After reading only a few chapters, the system actually asked me to give a star rating. I think it's okay. The characters are well expressed. There's nothing exaggerated or obscene yet. It feels gradual. I've been a bookworm for many years and it's hard to find a book I like. I hope I can finish this book.

It's a very good novel... The protagonist grows up step by step from a village... The path to immortality slowly*͈ᴗ͈ˬᴗ͈ෆ

My personal feelings after reading more than 600 chapters: The book is generally well written. But after watching it, I lost much interest, and it still felt like it lacked passion. If you want to read something bland, books are quite suitable. Come on, author, I hope I can read your good books next time.

Very good, thank the author! I haven't seen such an excellent novel in a long time! Very good novel! ! I am an old bookworm, so I would like to give the author some advice: ① Don't pay too much attention to the negative comments of a small group of people. ②Explode when inspiration comes, and use it steadily in normal times! One day you too will become a famous author!

It's super low-profile, but it gives you a way to work hard. The novel is a fairy tale for adults. The grassroots counterattack can make people have more expectations. The author has captured the readers' hearts! Looking forward to more excitement.

The whole book is very good. I will read it from the beginning again when I have some free time. It is indeed a good book with positive energy.

Fascinating and worth watching.

The layers are clear, the content is novel, and it's not the same. You won't want to give up after reading it. Come on!

I have recently watched several movies with scores ranging from 8.8 To 9.2. Some of them fell asleep while watching them. It was either because the language was wordy or the descriptions missed the point, or the story was bland and the protagonist had no direction. I think this book is well written. First, the description is not wordy and almost appropriate. 2. The story is compact and coherent, with little nonsense. 3 There is no sentimentality, the protagonist's worldview is pretty good, and he has enough humanity. 4. The protagonist has an aura and doesn't feel aggrieved to watch. There is also a feeling that it can be improved. The protagonist has enough writing and ink, and the supporting roles have also been appropriately strengthened.

It's pretty good. The logic is relatively smooth and I can read it.

No foul language, no violent killings. The author is upright and this article is worth reading!

I like it, the story is relatively compact. .

Well written and worth reading. There are fights and fights, but there is also love and justice. It's a pleasure to read, unlike other novels that get more frustrating the longer you read them!

The story is wonderful and the structure is compact. Worth a look

The content is very novel, link by link. Fascinating and long-lasting!

A rare online novel, The plot of the story is clear and the characters have distinct personalities. The author has a very good cultural heritage, There is no other novel's eagerness for quick success and quick profit for the sake of traffic.

It's very rare to find a long novel, it's great