Time Travel, Heaven Asks Me for a Favor

The novel is funny and interesting, just wait for the second senior brother to start the involution [eat melon] I think this book is very different from most of Tomato's cool articles. 1. The overall progress is slow, and there are still many foreshadowings that have not been explained, making the reading a bit confusing. The overall plot advances slowly, but I personally like this kind of slow advancement and the feeling of answers. When you see the answers, you will feel like it is like this. 2. The protagonist is quite useless and different from what I imagined. I thought there would be cheats, eye-opening scripts, and system blessings, but there was nothing. The plot didn't develop as I expected, and I'm really looking forward to what he can become in the later stages of his own involution. 3. The writing style is quite special, I don't know whether to praise or criticize it. In some places, the comedy felt rather stiff. Indeed, there was a moment in the early stages when it shouldn't have been lighthearted and it was forced to be funny. It has been slightly improved in the future, and I hope the author will make some improvements based on everyone's complaints. Overall, I think the article is pretty good and the rating is not so low. And it's different from Tomato's usual routine, so you can check it out.

Grab a seat while there aren't many people around. Looking forward to the resurrection of the original owner [crying] Of course, but don't shout, "Resurrection, my second senior brother" [laughing evilly] [laughing]

Regarding the title of the book, it is said that the second senior brother has begun to involve, but seeing that he has not yet involuted [punch out] But if the author wants to write this type of novel, he should not write about the protagonist being bad at the beginning, and then make all kinds of jokes and jokes. He should show that the protagonist has his own thoughts and then write more seriously, because so many settings are added later, and if you write with so many settings, I can only say that the author should I can't hold it, and the more I read, the more tired I will be. I either write it to be entertaining and funny to the end, and add some involution content, or I write the protagonist thinking about not being so stupid. The protagonist is so stupid that I don't know what his advantages are. Why did God choose him? Isn't he just an ordinary person? [Think]

It's a bit too tedious, unfolds a bit slowly, and sometimes the whole chapter is superfluous and has too many words.

Very well written. Please update soon. Anyway, I like the two protagonists very much, and the supporting characters are also very vivid. I can even see everyone's face. It doesn't matter if some people criticize it, there will always be some criticism for new books. Update soon ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah

It's a pity that the original owner sent it

I think this book is pretty good, but I don't know why the rating is so low.

It's very funny, and the descriptions of the pictures are vivid. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

One chapter every day, give me four stars first!

Really very beautiful

The author sees that you are a bit tired writing a book, so I will give you five stars.

Not bad, not bad, not bad, it doesn't matter

On the five-star seam, the author should not be ignorant of praise [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Come on, I'll watch you write

If you can see it, I'll give it five stars.

Kavin, let me knock, you can't afford it, right?

Okay, it's very well written.

Not bad, personal feeling

It feels pretty good, the protagonist is a bit like a growth type

Ah! ! ! This is the kind of book I've always wanted to read. There's never been a book that satisfies me so much.

The writing is quite good, the plot is a bit off-topic, but it still has the same style. Good luck, author.

Can see. Can see. Not bad writing. Calm your mind. You can still see it

Okay, much better than some bad writing

A very good book, I think. Well, sure.

[Sending Hearts] It's very beautiful. Why is the rating so low? [Sending Hearts]

Not bad, it will become okay in the future. It deserves praise. If it can maintain the current situation, it will be 8.0 Or above.

It's still pretty good

Quite exciting! I hope the author will add more chapters, it's not enough to read! ! ! (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡

The writing is particularly beautiful. I feel that the introduction and the title of the book are not worthy of such an excellent plot [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

It's so pretty, my dog's tail doesn't even have curls when I look at it! The fish you raise don't need to change the water, the tank is full of water!