Collapse of Iron: a Journey of Evil Starting from the Black Tower

Brothers, I can't do it anymore. I've been tired from work for the past two days and now I'm very sleepy. Today's update progress: 17,000, I'm sleeping, I'm sleeping, 2023.5.13 Today's progress: 16730. 2023.5.14

Come on, author, but don't mess up the timeline. The timeline of Jingliu's battle against Jingyuan and the train to Xianzhou are almost 800 years apart, so the protagonist of this book should have jumped the timeline.

The relationship in the previous mirror flow progressed too fast. After regaining sanity, he directly fell in love with the protagonist. It is better to add a setting that the mirror flow cannot be too far away from the protagonist. If you are too far away, you will lose your mind. This seems more reasonable.

The writing is good, the progress is a bit fast, it can be slower, otherwise the game will update a plot every year, and you will be eunuch if you quickly write the current plot. Write about each other's daily routines, and make fun of each other's daily life in order to do evil in the system, such as designing some plots to make the other party look embarrassed and gain evil points, or directly dress up like No. 6 And directly go to the streets to kill gangsters, and then fight wits with the guards because they are masked, and then ask the protagonist group to stage a drama of catching themselves. The love line needs to be longer, otherwise it will be too abrupt. I am not opposed to the harem [face-covering], but I see each of the women posting too quickly. One second they are strangers, and the next second they meet you, they immediately fall in love with you. It feels very dramatic [face-covering] Creation is not easy, 5-star praise is given [like][like]

Come on, come on, come on, come on

@ I give you five stars, I just want to ask when I will rush into the mirror [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

The protagonist is really tortured, very tortured, really "all good things are done"

Author, I advise you not to stop updating. If you keep writing like this, the rating will be 8.8 Or above. Come on.

Resurrection, my author!

Author, I gave you five stars. Can I request three updates a day? [Sinister smile]

Lolicon, right? There are five stars.

Very good fanfic, but the pace is a bit too fast?

The protagonist of this book is so carefree and arrogant, but at the beginning, he is short and weak, just like a certain author [laughing]

If there are some things that don't work well, I personally would like to continue watching Five Stars and leave it behind.

Vandalizing public property casually? Gu Yan, the dominating star god, has five seconds to reach the battlefield [laughing evilly]

It's a very good book, it's a bit fun to deliberately mess up.

Come on, can you accept Fu Hua? White silk ice cream, fragrant and soft, hehe~

Come on, author, author Niubi

My operator cheated

It looks good, but mass production is insufficient [laughter]

Fast forward directly to Yan Qing, who has been holding back her anger and seeks out the "good master" to vent her anger. The protagonist is going to stir up the cute lolita system [laughter]

It's great. I finally found a good book.

The writing is very good. Even if I have never played Star Dome Railway, I feel good about it.

Author, are you embarrassed to sleep? Just these two chapters, are you embarrassed to sleep?

Just for this picture, I give you five stars.

Come on come on come on come on

It looks good and the plot is very interesting [Sending my heart to you]

Youxi is very beautiful

Infinitely close to reality... A hammer

Five stars must be five stars.