Behemoth Planet

As the first novel I wrote, my goal is to reach 1 million, so give yourself a boost first, there are still 2/3 [currently working on the manuscript][currently on the manuscript][currently on the manuscript][angry][angry][angry][angry] After reading for such a long time, everyone said that the first person reader is uncomfortable. I estimate that after 1.5 Million words, I may go through a major change and write in the third person. Try to see if I can write it well. Then I will also write a real battle, and I will summarize the previous 1.5 Million words. I can start reading directly from there.

The subject matter can be first person or less, preferably

The subject matter is good, but it's a bit uncomfortable and uncomfortable.

This book is really good, but there are too few people who rated it. Each chapter has a lot of words and is not bloated. The protagonist is also well set. Unlike some protagonists who rush straight into the game without thinking, there is no force to kill or send someone to die. It becomes stronger in a methodical and step-by-step manner. If you like to read refreshing stories, I suggest you consider it. The pace is slow, but the compact logic is more reasonable, but the person pronouns are easy to misunderstand.

I practiced alone for three months, but the result was that I was not practicing as fast as others [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

The first person is so uncomfortable, not only the pig's feet are in first person, but also the supporting characters who appear from time to time are also in first person. . . The subject matter is very good, but my brain hurts when I read it.

The content belongs to the beast-control category, the subject matter is good, and the layout is broad, but the ending is too hasty. There is more that can be written. I think about the adventures in other continents, the collision of creatures from all eras, the exchanges between humans in outer space, and the collision of wisdom between humans and various races under the aura. It is a bit regretful.

This author is really powerful, one chapter has ten thousand words

Not bad, come on! But is it okay to make the protagonist a little selfish?

I quite like reading this type of book.

Come on, author, it's very interesting. If possible, I hope to see the ending.

Good looking, a large version of the wilderness survival profession with a way to become stronger

It's a relatively novel setting, but the author estimates that Shi's first book is not that smooth, and there are some errors and confusing logic and character names in the book. I hope the author will work hard

The farming and material hoarding plots are both very interesting, I like them. The characters are pretty good and funny, but sometimes the plot is too fast, and it feels like it's just passing by, which is a bit uninspiring.

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At least it's better than what I wrote [Chigua]

It looks more comfortable

Good guy, good guy is awesome