Honkai: Star Rail: From the Start, I Have a Scoring Gun

What do you mean, alien mandrill??? Brothers, what do you say next?

The protagonist is the same as the original heroine, right?

Come on, author! Don't stop, if it doesn't work, I'll go get the inspection knife 😏

Author, if you stop updating, I will report you for an hour straight Of course, I just love your books so much. I just want you to be my exclusive author. As long as I kill other readers for you, it must be yes, hahahahahaha. "Readers who gradually become sicker after reading the author's book"

This book is very good, the plot is exciting and interesting, the story is colorful, the protagonist is forced to be seduced, it is the best of the book, the author also writes about six times a day, 10 or even 9 points of conscience, the readers are one by one, the person is beautiful (handsome), and the words are interesting and interesting. I really like the atmosphere here (hi) [Top post]

The advantages of this novel are: 1. The key points are highlighted, the details are appropriate, and the content is specific. 2. The article is elegant, smooth and coherent, especially the characters' language is humorous. 3. Use a lot of spoken language in daily life to make the article more natural and friendly. 4. Although it is a small matter, the author describes it vividly and vividly, and the indispensable touch of clarity at the end better highlights the theme of the article. 5. The content of this article is vivid and rich, the language is novel and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable. 6. The content of the article is novel, the structure is reasonable, smooth and coherent, and natural and accessible. 7. There are many noteworthy sentences in the whole text, which adds some literary interest to the article. The disadvantage is: updates are too slow!

I hope the author can check the article carefully. If you pull out the typos in it, you can piece it together into a long article. This will make people feel uncomfortable, just like the white radish you have been eating has been replaced by a carrot by someone else. I believe that many people must abandon books because of this, and this is completely avoidable. Many of the early reasons cannot be changed. I hope you can avoid them in the future. This is one of the few Star Iron fans that I can read to the end. Don't delay this book because of this small mistake. Also, didn't you write in the introduction that this is a story that constantly interacts with various female characters? (That's how it should be written) There are still relatively few interactions with female characters. Not enough! 😏 I still hope you can correct these typos so that they don't happen again in the future! Other issues, such as the pace being too fast, etc., I think are okay. My poison tolerance is relatively high. Okay, that's it, don't let me down.

Overall it's pretty good. This game just came out not long ago, and the author is quite proactive.

... How to say? Indescribable 5-star good rating, installment payment (crossed out) 5-star good rating!

It's okay. It's just that I feel uncomfortable looking at Estan. Let me change it. That's Daji's Da, not Tan.