The Thunder Is Rolling at the Beginning, and the Mobile Phone Mutates to Become an Immortal

A new book sets sail, an indomitable wave!

Nice! Come on, author!

Very good looking very good looking

Come on 💪, the story is clear, the structure is novel, not the Holy Mother, the world view is real, the characters have souls, the author is great, Aoli, if it breaks, I will send you the blade, please go to the palace, how to write a multi-word comment for the first time [top post]

Not bad, the author will update it quickly. How dare you take a rest like this? Go check it out @ Keep up the good work, author!

Kuoyi hopes to say goodbye to Our Lady

Don't mess with women when cultivating immortals

Update quickly, the snail is almost catching up with you, come on, come on, come on

Not bad. There are some poisonous points in the early stage! The writing behind it is quite good. Currently 300,000 words. The front may dissuade some readers. When I read the back part, I felt a little bit refreshed. I hope the author will work hard. The more you write, the better!

The rating shouldn't be so low.

Riding fast, swallowing jujube in a hurry, Take jujube pills, so it's over.

It's pretty good, but the real world is too weak.

More updates! If we continue to write according to this quality, as well as the issue of the female protagonist, we can develop a set of dual cultivation techniques in the game, and then we can write more female protagonists in reality.

The concept is good, but the writing is average. Especially when it comes to the two women, it is a bit immature. I can ignore it and still read it. The main character is pretty useless. He can't win even if he's higher than other people. I won't watch it anymore.

Upgrades are fast before and after

It's not bad, but I think it's a bit inferior. I don't dare to fight monsters that are one or two levels higher than me.

Every family, every family, Nana, you are my birthday

It's non-toxic, feel free to watch it, it's okay, good luck to the author

Good, good, good, good

Very well written and well received

It looks good, and you can dig into it.

Everyone gives me five stars

Not bad, come on author [like]

Come on, good writing

Not bad, keep up the good work, author

The author writes very well, keep up the good work!

I hope there will be two female protagonists, after all, the previous one was half a year old Come on, don't be affected by the comments. The two heroines are good, and the protagonist is not a eunuch.

It's okay,,, why is the rating so low?

It's not bad. It's not easy to live as an author. I give it five stars.

Not bad, but it seems to have derailed from the Earth later.