Fairy, Don't Do It!

Hahahaha, it made me laugh. This is the best novel I have read recently. The author's writing style is very good, and he is very detailed in the descriptions. The plot is compact, and the protagonist is a bit ridiculous but not too supervising. The text is ridiculous but still elegant, adding a little sweetness to make people feel It has endless aftertaste. I can only say that I will be hahaha and hehehe [shy] under the quilt in the middle of the night. It is kind of funny like the blue sea. Even though it has multiple heroines, the content in it is more loving (pure) than a single heroine. It is really a refreshing novel. I can only say that it is cool and absolutely wonderful! ! It's really not an ordinary multi-heroine. The relationship between the characters is much better than what I've seen before [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

It's good-looking and interesting. I don't think of other immortality novels where they either fight or find girls. This novel is not like that, at least not in the early stages. Most of them describe the protagonist's life in the sect. It's very interesting. You can see a sect that is different from other immortality novels. The elders and disciples mingle, and you can also see each elder earning a lot of money for winning people's heads. Every branch of the sect is fighting over the method of counting money, but it's not the kind of overt and covert fighting that kills other people's geniuses at every turn, but mocking the other side, but this kind of ridicule is not disgusting, it's more teasing and teasing, very interesting, typical of novels that are delayed by the title of the book. I won't regret it, I highly recommend it I feel like there's a bit of water in the back, very watery. I wrote a lot of chapters about a fight, but I haven't read it since I've been waiting for it for more than a month. I'm a bit speechless =_=. Now I just jump through it and it doesn't feel like we're together at all. I feel like the writing hasn't changed much, but I'm just not as interested as before. I don't know if it's my fault or the author's fault. The main storyline has not changed at all for dozens of chapters now, and the daily lives of the four masters and apprentices are very little. I don't know how long it will take to explain Master Slave Yin clearly, and why the protagonist has an impression of Qing An when he was a child. There are a lot of holes to dig, but I don't know how many can be filled, and I don't know how long it will take to fill them. I have no motivation to read, and I am a bit tired. The only thing that keeps me reading now is the daily life of the four masters and apprentices, ugh~

This feels like a very good entry in Tomato, why is the rating so low?

♡(*´∀｀*)(*´∀｀*)♡ Absolutely, the protagonist's aura is just right, at least it won't destroy my brain, the car speed is just right, and the plot is quite exciting. The highlight moment that impressed me the most: layers of snow on the branches and frost under my feet. ⁄(⁄ ⁄•⁄㉨⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄ (That's it [laughing]) Maybe it's related to this poem, maybe you can look it up |｡･㉨･)っ♡ Yang Ji's "Bodhisattva Man·The Moon Outside the Crystal Curtain" The moon is shining outside the crystal curtain, and there are layers of snow on the pear branches. The flowers and the moon are blurred, and I have no desire to look through the window. The moonlight is dark tonight, and all pear blossoms are white. The flowers also smile at Chang'e, making him full of spring scenery. Like to watch

A very good daily novel about cultivating immortals, which is humorous and imaginative. There are almost no conflicts in the whole text. The main plot is about daily life such as going to class, picking up girls, reading newspapers, shopping, etc. The male protagonist has a great imagination and is very capable of committing suicide. He always makes readers laugh and cry. The writing is beautiful, similar to Qiong Ming's writing style but more down-to-earth, which makes people's eyes bright. The character descriptions are unconventional, especially the description of the first meeting with the master is very amazing. As for the shortcomings, the relationship developed too fast. The two senior sisters gave up after less than ten chapters. It was enough that the master had not been together for a few days and met a few times. It felt that the process was not natural and smooth enough.

Weird or not, I feel like my brain is going in and out, and I can't throw it away. The emotional scenes are a bit weird, and there is a sense of inexplicability, but, this pig's foot life is ideal, and the silly and cute senior sister can still be used. Master, too, has the feeling that when a silly senior sister grows up, she may be a little bit smart, but unfortunately she will still be mostly stupid. Just Funny article with a bit of sex appeal. The label is, ideal life. This sect has this style. It's rare. I can only say that the sect created by the author is not bad, and it is suitable. If you want to call it a stupid family,

This book is a source of joy. The last time I read it this cheerfully was in the first sequence, and the writing style is also fresh and refined. The only pain point is that the main plot is too slow (I don't care). As for the poisonous points they say, for me who have read the Four Great Evil Books and the Record of the Qiongming Goddess and have been reading for ten years, this is just watering down.

See my favorite masterpiece so far! Se Se is just right, the emotions are gentle and delicate, coupled with the daily comedy and romantic comedy, it is so cool! Although I am cultivating immortality, the world view is very simple and it really gave me new ideas. I was really impressed by this book.

The author's writing is so good, it's about cultivating immortality, it's funny, it's romantic, it has everything. Let's talk about the cultivation of immortality first. The protagonist has top-notch talents. Don't look at others who have more than 200 chapters. The total training time may only be a few chapters, but they improve quickly! In more than two hundred chapters, the protagonist has already begun to practice at the entry level of cultivation set by the author. It's really too fast. Let's talk about the romance part. There are three female protagonists in this book. One is silly and sweet, and the other has attributes that are a bit like a tomboy. The first two are the protagonist's senior sisters and the other is the protagonist's master. Moreover, at the beginning, it is said that the master has a slave mark on his face. I have been reading for so long and there are so many chapters and I haven't seen an explanation. It can be seen that the author is fudging. The writing is so deep that I must have written a very long outline. [Smirking] [Blowing a kiss] The last part is the funny part. At least of the more than two hundred chapters I have read, excluding romance and immortality, I can say that 80% or even 90% are the same funny content. "It's so interesting" and it makes me "laugh" every time. Moreover, the progress of this book is very slow. It can take more than a month to complete more than one hundred chapters, and they are all "interesting" and funny. Let's talk about the label of this book. Although the label does not have daily life, and the author did not mention in the plot that this book is mainly about daily life, it is all about daily life, which gave me a big "surprise" and I like it very much [laughs]. Come and review it with me! [Laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Very good-looking, no system, no brainless time travel story, and also very fast cars, good-looking, highly recommended

It's a good read and perfectly fits the book I want to read. I just like this kind of daily life, where I interact a lot with senior sisters [shy] I feel like what I like to watch is not the main plot, but these daily interactions, which are much better than the killing and killing in other stories, full marks!

The plot is funny, the writing is not bad, and the male protagonist is normal. This kind of novel is basically rare to see on Tomato now. Especially the male protagonist and plot are very good on Tomato. (To be honest, I feel that tomato fantasy novels will be dominated by self-interested novels. After the male protagonist travels through time, he will be like a murderous kid. Those novels will only read bad jokes every day and are self-consciously humorous)

This book is really good, especially the description of Lu Bu's fight with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan. Hundreds of people gathered together in the battle, but Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If Nuoshou hadn't used an outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six-fold strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang Tutu said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes are so immersive, and the character descriptions are spot on!

It's a good book, the content is well designed, the protagonist is a bit mean but doesn't look artificial, the writing is refreshing and doesn't make people feel embarrassed, the character's demeanor is also very well created, and the emotional line is advanced without making people feel abrupt. In short, I can feel that it is a quality book from the front, and I hope it will not collapse later.

It was very interesting to watch. When I saw the 300-round battle between Lu Bu and his beloved Dong Zhuo, my blood boiled with excitement. If Tiga hadn't pulled out the AK47 at the end and Zhao Yun had a passionate exchange of fire with Superman in Florida, Thanos almost lost. In the end, he pulled out the AK47. The hypnotic machine controlled the Hulk and he tried to turn the tide of the war and lived a happy life without shame. The child he gave birth to seduced Fang Yuan during the fateful battle. It also led to an increase in gasoline prices and allowed Cthulhu to be revived in advance to benefit the world. This made the Garden Baby Unbearable, Ragnarok came down with thunder. In order to resist Ragnarok, Madara started the infinite moon reading. In the infinite moon reading, Sun Wukong and Kakarot had a battle between the real and fake Monkey King, which broke this dream. Luna Ye was furious and used miracles to fight with you. The Heavenly Armor started a century war, interrupted the world's confinement, and caused the revival of spiritual energy. The dinosaurs became extinct. Emperor Big Big Wolf couldn't stand it anymore, so he went to the sea to sell leather shoes with Poseidon... This is probably the plot, which expresses the author's homesickness. Highly recommended [angry]

Come on, come on, I hope more and more people will watch it and the content will become sweeter and sweeter

It's pretty good and perfectly fits the label written by the author. The daily warmth, senior sister and master are all given for free, and there are plenty of laughs. It's just that Master's "slave" seal is not good. Even if the ending is explained, he still doesn't respond. Next time there is such a plot, I suggest you make an explanation at the end of the chapter where it first appears to avoid misunderstanding. If you explain in a loud voice, someone will inevitably be unavoidable. Think more

It feels great, it's so easy and funny every day and I love it. The characters are very three-dimensional and distinctive. The supporting characters have few descriptions but are very impressive and three-dimensional. I am quite satisfied that the level of improvement is very slow. It means that I can continue to write longer without ending in 200 chapters, and it is also more realistic. Some of the interactive plots are fascinatingly described, full of pictures, and use stories to illustrate things, making people want to stop. I hope that the author can continue to maintain the current writing style and storytelling, write more and longer, and don't end it unfinished. Don't be knocked down by Shen He, and don't omit some plots just because Shen He is in the way. I also hope that the author can create a group so that everyone can make suggestions for fighting against Shen He, and can encourage, cheer, and communicate with the author. Save money: Everyday is great! Master and sister are great! ! ! White silk is great! Author NB! ! Come on, author! ! ! [Sending Hearts]

The writing style is very good, both elegant and popular. When it comes to elegance, the writing is really very detailed. The environment is not as superficial as other novels such as "Driving". It has a kind of hazy beauty. The characters of the three heroines are all unique. My favorite is the master. It is really exciting. The description is amazing. In terms of appearance, the author's writing is also very comfortable. There are no other praises like others. Starting from the environment and clothes, it is a very comfortable novel. It would be better if there is no review. I want to read the unabridged version. I want to read the book to the end. If you create another novel group, please bring me one. I need tickets for the author, otherwise others will not cherish it.

First of all, the author's writing style is very clean, without the excessive and obscene descriptions of most fantasy, so it is very comfortable to read. Then the plot also has funny parts and serious spiritual practice parts, and the two parts can be coherent. It's too watery. It's only been a few days since the 100-chapter timeline, and the whole time it's just the protagonist playing tricks. It doesn't mean that there must be some major catastrophe that pushes people along, but you can't spend nearly a hundred chapters just playing tricks and making no progress. The master's slave mark was quite disgusting at first, but it's hard to say that the protagonist had it just to protect his master. But Le Linqing is really cute, I like it.

It's clogs. (Note: The wooden clogs originated in China and are a type of footwear worn by the Han Dynasty. Don't use the Japanese to replace the Chinese.) Just this sentence, full marks, and the plot is also good. If you can watch it, this type of humor is considered the most popular type on Tomato.

It's super beautiful [love] [love] [love], the funny plot is witty and interesting, the interaction between the brothers and sisters is sweet and endearing, and there are many foreshadowings in the writing. The settings of the realm, the three supreme secrets, and the alchemy pavilion are innovative [like] [like] [like] The author keeps up the good work [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

It's a good book, the writing is fluent, and the characterization is okay. Although it feels like it's a bit well-written, like he should do it, but it feels like it's just to emphasize his character. The plot is smooth, and you don't feel cerebral palsy. The emotional description is not brainless, there is a certain logic. It is very comfortable at first glance. It can be said that this book can kill 70% of tomatoes. Tomatoes are a top crop.

It's a very interesting concept. I've read a book on Tomato that has a clearer framework. It's the best one I've seen so far in terms of dealing with the harem. Although the description of the character's personality and emotional lines is not straightforward or I don't go out of my way to describe it too much. Personally, I appreciate the Husband-Chasing Crematorium more in this regard. That's not to say That book is better than this one. On the contrary, this one is much better than that one. But the characteristic of that book is that it focuses on describing the changes in each relationship and the atmosphere of the scene where we get along, so that work touched me deeply. This one is generally more cheerful, with detailed descriptions of various ways of cultivating immortals. At the end, I felt like I had really read something. For example, when you see a certain place in the back, you can reach a consensus with the author through the previous description. You can understand the laughter the author wants to create or the purpose he wants to achieve without the author having to express it. This is a must for those famous novels, even a novel that is as white as Douluo Continent and Breaking the Sky can do it. , But it is a famous novel after all. Many works on Tomato cannot even do this. On the Tomato platform, the author has already won, but the results may not be very good. It is like throwing a scalpel at a construction site, which is also said to be covered in dust. I hope the author will not be fooled by the results. The author's narrative and driving skills are excellent.

Apart from the lack of updates, I think there are no other shortcomings (maybe I didn't find them out). The daily life is very interesting. I hope the author can stick to it. Never, never, never be a eunuch! ! ! !

The plot development is good. The emotional portrayal is excellent. The only thing I want to complain about is that I feel a little uncomfortable (it varies from person to person). The protagonist used Qianqiu Jue to travel back to the ancient era of immortal cultivation, and found an apprentice, Shitou. Shitou himself became the "True Lord Who Treads the Sea and Slays the Dragon." Later, in the peaceful times, people thought that there was nothing wrong with the dragon itself, so they changed it to "The True Lord Who Treads the Sea and Controls the Dragon." Next is the point where I feel uncomfortable. The previous article has been mentioning "The True Lord Who Walks on the Sea and Controls the Dragon". I once thought that this was the name that the protagonist would earn in the future. But judging from the recent plot, it seems that if modern monks want to raise their cultivation level above Dongzhen, they need the status (jinzo) of monks in ancient times? So the protagonist may end up inheriting the account (person) of his apprentice? You may have doubts, and it depends on what the author writes later. Of course, it's possible that it's my understanding. But I just see something wrong in this aspect. Because I "personally think" that the protagonist should create his own personality (at least not to get a successor as an apprentice). Of course I still have to watch it, after all, I feel quite comfortable watching the plot.

I just saw the senior sister appear and comment on what she has read and share her personal views. At first glance, the title of the book thought that it was Tao Tao Shi. The plot before entering the sect was not procrastinating. It was exciting and attracted people to continue reading. The setting of cultivating immortals was also interesting. In the end, I won Le Linqing (Miss Linqing is the best!!!). After entering the sect, most of the daily life at the beginning was to open a new map service for the sect, mixed with some similar to the starting point of "Who asked him to cultivate immortality", Lu Yang (who was born with low spiritual roots) was clever and clever, and the plot was interesting to watch. It wasn't until I became a star-gazing fish that I started to let myself go. I started doing weird things just for the sake of being funny, which can be considered a poisonous point. All right! It's acceptable, but if there are too many descriptions, it's easy to forget the main plot, and it will feel fragmented (actually, I'm quite curious about the story between the master and the protagonist, but it's too routine). The senior sister appeared and was described as an unreasonable lunatic. Maybe I didn't get the character the author wanted to describe. Finally, I want to say that Sese's writing is really good, please work harder! ! ! ! !

There is basically no main line, but the daily descriptions are very delicate and do not appear greasy and redundant. The character descriptions are extremely vivid and the characterization is very successful. The writing style is very good, and the characters can be fully fleshed out naturally without any artificiality and appear very natural.

Setting of supporting characters in the 3-star sect and 1-star car and car. But except for some plots in the early stage, everything becomes very routine later on. Daily life is not a problem. The problem is that I have buried a lot of pitfalls. I have been cooking in the sect, which is very procrastinating. So it is perfectly fine to jump from chapter to chapter in the book. I don't worry about not understanding what I missed. This is the problem.

Quick update! Can't sleep at night! Especially the sect daily chapters are vivid and interesting Looking at Le Yao, Jian Wei and Mi Cai, I was so excited that I came over to take a breather.