Heavens************

I wrote it, just give me five stars to encourage myself [laughing]

In fact, I quite like this genre, and the author's writing style is not bad, but there is a common problem that new writers often make (although I don't know if the author is a novice), and that is that he likes to enjoy himself. Some new writers will get excited because of the ideas in their minds when writing, and then they will get excited when writing. There may be two situations. One is that the writing is off-track, and they rush forward on the road that deviates from the theme. The other is that the writing is embarrassing, and they rush all the way on the road that moves themselves and embarrasses the readers. This article actually has both. The situation in the former is not too serious. The author saved some of the characters after they went astray. The situation in the latter is more serious. He may not be able to be rescued due to various reasons. Some of the plots are a bit awkward or abrupt, and readers are not very able to relate to them.

A good book that was delayed by ratings. The author's imagination is very rich, and there is no demotion in the plot. Full marks are given. I hope the author can keep writing. I will keep following up. [Thinking] [Learned] [Learned] [Learned] [Learned] [Learned] [Learned] [Learned]

It feels pretty good, come on I feel that I should still write about the martial arts of Dragon and Snake. The martial arts will not conflict with any system. In essence, it is just a way to control oneself, and reaching the Danjin also involves questioning one's heart, which will improve the state of mind. There is so little to write about in this world, and Ren Tingting must train her to reach the human level. In the era of war and chaos, you can rest assured that people around you do not have martial arts skills, and there is still one person who can master all the eight magical skills. For example, if you have perfect skills and practice with both hands, you can definitely get them with a little time. The author can write about ghosts, but you can't just use the reason that you were afraid of ghosts to keep writing, otherwise it will be suspected of delaying the progress.

Please recommend, do you guys have any similar novels?

Highly recommended to everyone, a very good novel

How can I put it? The more you watch it, the more you feel it. The more you watch it, the more exciting it is. It just makes you feel good no matter how you watch it. For someone like me who is too lazy to use my brain, it is simply perfect. Let's start with two people for love!

The writing is informative and interesting, not the kind of mindless and cool writing.

Come on, author! I'm optimistic about you!

Not enough! ! Update soon! ! ! (╯‵□′)╯┴─┴

This book is very good.

Well written, five stars support

Give it a five-star rating and give it a kiss [KISS]

Why is Mao's rating so low [eating melon]

The author pays great attention to the details of the story, the plot arrangement is very smooth, and it is very enjoyable to watch.

Come on, the author wrote very well [like][like][like][learned][learned][learned]

Yes, the skill description is very exciting.

Suits my taste

Come on, does the author consider Jin Guang?

It's okay, it looks pretty cool. I just want the author to update it more. [Sending my heartfelt thanks]

Come on, I believe you will get better and better

The writing is good, I hope the author will write better and better.

This book is very popular with me. I hope you will keep up the good work and update it diligently while ensuring the quality.

Very interesting! Big cheers for the author!

I'm very satisfied with this book

Not bad, I think it's quite realistic

Come on author, it's very interesting [like]

Come on, come on, come on

I feel good. I support you [blowing kiss] I can't stand it if it's written about a foreign country. Let's wait until you return to your country to read it. It's awkward to read now.

Can continue to maintain