"Commander, tens of thousands of zombies are coming towards us from the front!"
Huang Pengyu said nonchalantly, "Then crush them!"
(This is the first book for a newcomer, I hope readers will like it)
Reader comments
I hope you all will support me!
I know there is something wrong with my book, but no readers have pointed it out to me. I really want to know where my problem lies? If readers of my book read the problems in my book, they can speak out boldly. If there are mistakes, they must be corrected. Otherwise, they will not be able to grow. I hope everyone will criticize me.
I think it's okay. It would be better if I could revise it and delete or change the bad parts. It seems like I'm a newbie, so I'll give the author a five-star rating.
I hope you all will support me! I know there is something wrong with my book, but no readers have pointed it out to me. I really want to know where my problem lies? If readers of my book read the problems in my book, they can speak out boldly. If there are mistakes, they must be corrected. Otherwise, they will not be able to grow. I hope everyone will criticize me.
I think it's okay. It would be better if I could revise it and delete or change the bad parts. It seems like I'm a newbie, so I'll give the author a five-star rating.