My Online Romance with the Top-Ranked Viewer Went Wrong

It's really good-looking, and the emotions are described very delicately. Recommended reading. Sometimes it feels not very coherent and a bit out of context. This may be due to the conversion process between most of the game scenes and reality. The author writes well in capital letters, and the description of the game scenes is also easy to understand. It is true that game slang is used in many places. I feel that the majority of the audience for this article may be women, and it may be better to have a label or something. There is a sentence about meeting in school (it would be much better to add the words from the game here). Because Wen Yi is a college student, sometimes his mind can't turn around and he feels that there is no such scene. It is very good and recommended reading.

It took me a while to finish reading this book, emm, how can I put it, the plot is indeed very similar to AWM. First of all, the turning point is too sudden. For example, you were talking one second and playing a game the next. The turning point is so unexpected that people are not prepared. I suggest the author make some iconic things at the turning point to make it easier to understand. Of course, this is just a suggestion. The author can write whatever he wants, and I don't mean to say anything bad. Secondly, because it is e-sports, there are many special terms. People who don't understand these may be confused, but I personally don't think it particularly affects reading. Ps: I have played the mobile game Chicken Fight before and learned a little about the game system, so I was not particularly confused when I read the article, so I felt that it was not particularly affecting. Finally, the characters are well drawn, and each person's personality traits are very distinct, and they are like an independent individual. Also, although the training review is very difficult, the living atmosphere in the base is very warm. Overall it's okay

It's a very novel setting. I can figure it out very quickly and there's no delay at all. Shou's story activities are a bit like those of a Korean comic.

It was okay, the first and middle stages were quite funny, but the plot in the later stages was too long to watch. Yangshen was so coquettish in the early stage and was so good at self-defeating. There was a reason why Wen Yi didn't accept Yangshen's confession at the beginning. Yangshen had put too many vests on himself, which made people look forward to how Yangshen would fall off his horse. For a bully like Wu Di, "I bully him because I like him", "I want to drag him to hell so that he has no one to rely on, so that I can redeem him as a savior" This kind of thinking is really suffocating! Even though Wen Yi was bullied, sexually harassed and owed huge debts on campus, he was able to get into a major with high scores in a key university and play e-sports really well!

The content is not procrastinating, and the love between Chen Yang, who does not hide his love, and Wen Yi, who is particularly sincere in his feelings, is well written. For Wen Yi, Chen Yang is his salvation, and for Chen Yang, Wen Yi is his treasure. Wen Yi's childhood pain was healed by Chen Yang. If you like short stories, you can go for it! The cute and lovable Wen Yi and the flirty Chen Yang, although the story is not amazing, you can't help but read it [top post]

Any day you like is a good day 5.13[Cool]

Read it carefully and evaluate it. I think this is a story that shouldn't be missed by people who like e-sports and sweet articles. The e-sports related parts feel very professional. I haven't played much, so I won't comment too much. I feel that the author looks like an e-sports expert [laughing] In terms of emotions, although it has always been quite sweet and there is nothing very sad (except for Wen Yi's experience), it always gives me a feeling that it is not as exciting as the game part. It may also be that everyone has different acceptance of ways to express feelings. I always felt that some of the things they did before they got together were a bit childish, but they got better after they got together. I understand that Wen Yi seems to have been immersed in his own world when it comes to dealing with relationships because of his previous experiences, forgetting to care about whether Chen Yang would be sad. But it is precisely this that makes me feel a little inconsistent. As a person who has experienced big storms, when facing his own sun, he should be afraid to approach it but not willing to hurt it, instead of first giving people a little hope and then ruthlessly rejecting it. The above only represents my personal views. The most important thing is that the story is still good-looking, the writing style is also very good, and the supporting characters in the article are also very cute. The score of less than 8 is definitely low. I hope it will break 9 soon, come on!

It's okay, but it looks like Manman's "AWM" and the character design is "similar". I wonder if the author is a fan? Or CX? ? ? Anyway, I finished reading it. The writing is quite good. It really looks like some parts, and the sentences are almost the same [star] Anyway, it looks good.

It's very sweet and beautiful. What I like the most is that Chen Yang can express his love to Wen Yi straightforwardly and quickly, breaking the previous very slow progress of the plot. That kind of plot makes people anxious while watching it. This novel is very comfortable to read. The settings of the male protagonist are very good, highly recommended

I haven't read an e-sports article for a long time. The subject matter is very novel and the characters are good. Life is already very bitter. Let's read some sweet love to recharge your batteries. The extra chapter filled my regrets. It was really difficult for Wen Yi when he was young.