Chasing the Male Idol with a Script in Hand

The description is simple and concise, and the pace is quite fast. It is a bit like a plot summary, but the story is quite complete. The protagonist and supporting characters are all very good. The relationship between the male and female protagonists has a long-lasting relationship, which is plain and happy. There are always surprises in short stories. The author should pay attention to the paragraphing. A long paragraph can be divided into several paragraphs in other novels. As a novel, and a whole page can be read on a mobile phone, it is only one or two paragraphs. It is difficult to absorb the story information, and it also makes me dizzy. If I hadn't read the few chapters and persisted, I really couldn't read it. It's so big Long paragraphs are very difficult to read. I have seen such paragraphs in several books. I feel like it is torture to keep reading. Most of the time I give up. Fortunately, this book has shorter paragraphs at the end. Moreover, the dialogue between the heroine and the main character in the article occasionally contains some modern vocabulary, but it is okay.

Despite the short word count, the plot is complete. The plot is very compact and develops quickly. Those who like short stories can enjoy it. But there are some plots that are not very detailed. I like to avoid pitfalls in all the details [smile][smile]

Alas, if no one comments, I will comment on myself, [shy], come on, try to finish the first book [currently in progress]

Short cookie, very good! I like to read this kind of novels where the heroine takes the initiative but is not the main heroine. It's cute and lovable, and the plot progresses quickly. It's a common problem with short stories. The ending is so hasty that I can't bear to let it go... I still want to read it!

The characters and plot are actually okay, but the first issue is the segmentation. I think it gets much better later on. Another thing is that if this is an ancient proverb, it is recommended to use some ancient words and expressions. Also, the characters' behavior and words need to be slightly combined with the ancient background. Otherwise, what is the difference between it and modern times, and it is easy for readers to feel disconnected. Maybe this does require some effort, I hope you will continue to work hard💪

Woohoo, why is it so small? It's not enough. I love the love between Beiyuan and Nansheng

Very nice! I really like the heroine design. I like her character of bravely pursuing love

I like this ending. Falling in love will give you a blessing and give him a happy childhood. This is such a super love.

It's very beautiful, and you won't lose money if you invest in it! !

Not bad, I really like the heroine's character!

Very good-looking, the heroine has a good personality, and she pursues love boldly

Pretty good, I like it anyway

Very nice, plain but very sweet [blowing kiss]

Although the author's writing style is a bit immature, it is very real and very to my liking. The author is great, please continue to work hard! I also like reading this type of novels.