Pirate********

The writing is a bit messy, and it's different from traditional blind boxes. The protagonist has no ability, loves to go out, and can't hold his own place. Even if he is invincible in a store, it's okay. If he can't beat a bear with Kamui or Amaterasu, he can't just suck the space in. I can't stand it after reading more than ten chapters.

This novel of yours is copied from someone else's, right? The previous ones have been completed, so how many of your previous novels are you copied from others?

I also laughed after reading dozens of chapters. Tyrant Bear will kill the protagonist as soon as he sees it. You are the one who kills the Straw Hats. You see, the name is Tyrant Bear and he is a tyrant who kills people on sight, right? I'm laughing so hard [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

It's a bad batch. You haven't read One Piece yet and you're writing a fanfic about One Piece. The tyrant Bear comes up and wants to kill the protagonist and Luffy and his gang. You can just write about Garp beating Ace, Luffy and a dragon to death. It's a direct ending.

Phew, pissing with laughter! !

Same as the other one, just change the name of the protagonist

It's pure garbage and it doesn't even come back with Invincible food.

A weakling like a bastard went to sell cans! This is a pirate, do I need to spend money to buy something?

Not to mention, the main character is too cool

Haha, I don't want to say it

You're both good and fun-loving, but a Shichibukai would be useless and you're still jumping around

Very few comments, everyone understands

Very good, keep up the good work

Bad review, I don't know what I'm writing about.

Selling cans is not like selling cans, and fighting is not like fighting. It's just a different look. It's so ugly that I'm speechless. Do you know why there are so many words but no rating yet? Just because of the food.

It's so beautiful, it deserves two stars.

Licking Luffy is too much

Have you seen One Piece?

Abstract. . .

Too many typos

Not bad, give it 12 stars

Poisonous. . . . .

Good idea but poor writing skills~…

Where is the jar? 🤔

I don't know what to say, so please avoid the trap.

The protagonist is so weak and still sells cans

Was Oda stabbed? ?

No logic, just do whatever you want

I don't know why, I don't know what it means, I can't understand, I'm a bookworm of ten years.

Well written, you deserve one star review, the plot is messy