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I am giving five stars because your previous writing is very good, the plot is exciting, the writing is good, and I am very tolerant of most novels. But I want to remind you, don't write too many plots about other worlds. To be honest, it's very annoying. The key is that you don't know what world you are writing about, which will affect the viewing experience. [Rolls eyes] Since this is a book about Genshin Impact, the focus should be on Teyvat. You now have more chapters in the second world than in the main world [smiles] These are the current suggestions. If you see the author, please remember to reply, otherwise I will change the one-star rating [smile][smile][smile] @wilde

The old rule is to give yourself a five-star shameless first [Thinking][Thinking]

Traveling through the world takes a bit long, and it can be finished in about 20 pictures. The time traveling is even longer than the previous main story.

It's okay, but a little off topic. I think it would be better if it was changed to something like "Genshin Impact: Paimonless Journey to All Realms" [Thinking]

It's good to watch, but if I remember correctly, this should be a Genshin Impact fanfic. The other worlds are so long that I almost forgot that this is a Genshin Impact fanfic.

The writing style of a very good author is still good. I have read another book by the author before, but unfortunately it was finished hastily due to the author's health. I hope this book can persist [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

There are too many other worlds. . . .

Isn't this a Genshin Impact fan?

Come on! I'm optimistic about you

There are too many other worlds. Currently, it is 90% other worlds and 10% Genshin Impact. It has been changed to 40 other worlds and 60 Genshin Impact, which is about the same. .

Sorry, I haven't seen Dragon Nest, so I don't have a sense of it.

Um, author, how many chapters do you plan to write in that magical world? It's a bit long. Already completely off topic

The content is good, but maybe it was submitted to the wrong category. This one should be the type of traveling through the heavens.

Should you write about Genshin Impact or about a different story? . .

Not bad, just a little missing

Fortunately, I feel like the plot of Dragon Nest is a bit long.

Teyvat Continent: Let the world forget me

This is the first Paimon-free novel that I have personally read, and the plot and ideas are pretty good. The plot of "Dragon Nest" is okay, but it doesn't fit well with the title of the book. It might be better if there is more space in Teyvat later on.

The author is optimistic about you, 😀 Come on!

Emmmm If you want to watch Genshin Impact, don't watch your other world. I gave up. When will I write Genshin Impact?

Author, keep up the good work!

The book is good, but did the author get too excited?

It's really okay, but the world of Dragon Nest is too long, and a world like Dragon Nest is too eccentric. I haven't watched Dragon Nest yet.

At the age of 17. I met the author I wanted to protect for the 152nd time. It's a pity.

A little embarrassing, but the ideas and subject matter are good, and there are no obstacles. I give it five stars.

The beginning is smooth, and the length of the sub-world is normal. Write at your own pace and don't get carried away.

Come on, your writing is still quite good.

It's a bit interesting to write

Four points first, then change it later if it looks better

Well, how should I put it, it's still pretty good.