Why Are You Crying with Me If You Just Mentioned Heli?

Come, the author reads with me: I solemnly swear: From today on, I will never read it again. Drama, no travel, no illness, I will not play games, no hydrology, strict Self-disciplined, cherish time like gold, perseverance, struggle and hard work, advocating First-class, strive to create brilliance, take pleasure in coding, steel will be refined a hundred times, worthy of reading Those who are worthy of their youth and their future. As an author, I Solemn oath: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author, and the code words are mine My vocation is my boundless potential and I am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently and I am black The keyboard in darkness, the guard on the Great Wall of Internet, I voluntarily sacrifice my life Dedicated to code words, it is like this every day and every night.

It's very good. It doesn't use ordinary modules to write, and the character creation is very good [I learned it]

I haven't read much, so I'm here to comment on chapter 17. I think it's okay. Unlike other time-traveling movies where the male protagonist belittles the male and female protagonists when they become male partners, and the male and female protagonists are almost reduced to villains. This one at least is not demeaned because of a hostile relationship. Although the female protagonist has a grudge against his nominal wife, she has nothing to do with the male protagonist.

It's not bad. I really like this kind of book where men wear women. I like the plot of the heroine changing for the hero. The original heroine is okay. It's not impossible to have two heroines in this book, but I still like Yan. I prefer the single heroine.

It's very good. Whether it's the heroine or the hero, many of the characters' personalities are very well created. The plot can't be stopped at all after reading one chapter. I personally prefer sweet stories that are more focused and don't like harems. I think it's very good. The author should update it soon. I I am very much looking forward to the following plot. I hope the author can add a little bit of immortality and martial arts and publish a second book. I can wait until this one is finished. I am very much looking forward to it. I have been reading this kind of article for a long time as a boy. In addition, the author's dialogue is also very interesting. I strongly recommend that you read it. I really recommend that the author add a little bit of martial arts and martial arts, and then after watching the interview for a long time, this kind of dialogue and plot will become boring. Of course, I believe in the author's great writing style.

It looks good, I don't need a eunuch, I hope it's just a princess and a heroine

I have read about fifty chapters and read a lot of book reviews. I personally like this book very much. Many book friends want to have a single female protagonist, but I personally feel that it is unrealistic. In this kind of novel, the protagonist basically must ascend to the throne and proclaim himself emperor in the end, so it feels that it is basically impossible to have a single female protagonist.

This book is very well written, and the characters are well-drawn. Although it cannot be compared with those top tycoons, it can be seen that the author still has a certain level. Keep at it, don't be led away, if it doesn't work, change the platform, I support you

It seems okay so far, and there aren't many books with male-female settings.

Five stars, but I hope there are two heroines, one is an interesting soul who has traveled to the past, and it's not bad to have chickens and dogs jumping around every day, and the other is brought in by eight-carriage sedan, so be kind to her...

I think it's pretty good. At least the first fifty chapters are quite to my liking. I personally hope for the rest to have a single female protagonist. After all, the author's emotional drama is a bit inconsistent, and he treats the princess well, and handles the plots of other women very well.

I really don't want to poke it, there could be more emotional interaction between the male and female protagonists, after all, I love watching this [Like][Like][Like] Personally, I still prefer a single female protagonist. After all, judging from the current plot, the current female protagonist has let go of the original male protagonist and likes the current male protagonist, and the current female protagonist can even give her dowry to the current male protagonist. It would be really ridiculous if a harem was created just for the sake of the aura of the original heroine or the financial and powerful background of other female supporting characters. Isn't a woman's sincerity inferior to these? If you have a harem just for the sake of power or something, then what the male protagonist is wearing is too trashy. Not to mention that this is ancient times, parents do not allow monogamy, and the current male protagonist can not sleep with the current female protagonist because of his own modern ideological bottom line. So, is monogamy not the modern ideological bottom line? [Roll eyes][roll eyes][roll eyes]

It has great potential, the subject matter is novel, and it is different from what I have seen before. It is also a change of taste. However, I feel that it is still a little flawed, that is, the protagonist's role is less. I suggest that the protagonist can be strengthened. I feel a little bad, my opponents are all defeated, what should I write next?

What a great book. I'm sure it's a pure female video. The taste is so authentic. Looking at the heroic speech of the male protagonist, I am really touched. He has made a huge contribution to the equality of all people. This book should be reserved for you who are more deserving! [Crying] As follows: Gu Chen said: "But you should also think about it. Miss Jiang is the youngest daughter of her father-in-law. Just because of her status, she cannot get the approval of the Duke and others. But you are different. Even though you were born late, your mother was appointed by the Duke for your father, so after you were born, all the family elders loved and valued you." "You may think that she took away your father, but if you think about it from another perspective, you also took away many things that belonged to her." After reading the male protagonist's outrageous speech, I think it can be condensed into one sentence: "Putting aside the facts, are you not wrong?"

I saw the latest chapter 52, let me just say a few words. The logic in this novel is difficult to understand, and it would be very uncomfortable to read it with your brain. The rest are all classic internet settings and routines, which are quite enjoyable. Book friends who haven't read it yet don't need to dissuade them from reading this book review. This is not my intention. I just hope that the author can think more when writing the book, make a good outline, draw a character mind map to clarify the logic, and strive to improve the quality of the novel. Here is a five-star review. I hope the author can work hard and everything goes well on his writing journey!

This book is really good. It's rare for me to read a novel from beginning to end. Although I don't know why the rating is not too high. Generally speaking, there is nothing toxic about it. The emotional scenes between the protagonist and the heroine are okay. It's a pretty good book, at least for now [Adoration]

It's okay, she's pretty good-looking, she's probably a single girl, right? Well, now it seems most readers want a harem. I don't know what the author thinks.

It's very exciting. The original female protagonist traveled through time, while the villain male protagonist was reborn through time travel. She has one more rebirth than the original female protagonist. The type of this book is for female readers, so it must have brought the original female protagonist's thoughts (that is, modern thoughts) into the book, even though the genre is female channel. Yes, but it also meets my needs, because it is not entirely for women. Let's put it this way, as you continue reading, you will feel that this book is really good. Although its results are not very good, maybe the wife of the villain hero who just married is still thinking about other men? But it will be much better later on. You see, the wife of the villain hero was forced to marry the villain hero. She was supposed to like the original hero. There is no reading point in the back, but there is a paragraph that is not very comfortable to read, which is the paragraph I mentioned. She is still thinking about other men (thought about it for a while, because she found that the villain hero is very good to her, and now she has become a little spoiled wife). Generally speaking, I definitely recommend this to those who like female videos. Once you read it, you will feel very good. Okay, the author will update soon~

It's very interesting. In addition to the original male protagonist deviating from the original book's setting, the original female protagonist and the current villain heroine still conform to the original book's setting, which is not easy. Nowadays, the heroine does not become a heroine but follows the routine of female videos. It's just that the original heroine is not given any space, she has no soul. Look at the author, he is very carefree, loves small money, occasionally shows off, complains about men, has medical skills, but lacks space [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] The advantage is that the male protagonist has just traveled through time and has lost his virginity with modern straight male thinking. Now the female protagonist uses ancient thinking and feels insulted. I thought the male protagonist was a scumbag at first. But I still understand it. Now the female protagonist doesn't like the male protagonist in the book because she accepted her fate but was unwilling to do so. The male protagonist's straight behavior gave the female protagonist a choice. Although the outcome of ancient society will not change, the female protagonist still let go of her obsession, just like the three-year-old me who had to cross the water weed by herself. Because of this, the heroine now feels that accepting her fate is her choice rather than being forced, which gives the hero and heroine the psychology to fall in love reasonably. The design is good, but I'm not sure if it was intentional by the author. The shortcoming is that the original male protagonist's character design was really ruined. However, this should be forced for the plot. It did not maintain the original book character like the female protagonists, so I was not surprised. You should know that the heroine of the female time travel channel does not make posts, but usually forcibly darkens the original hero and heroine, and then makes a more powerful man. Looking forward to the follow-up plot! Come on!

Come on, good writing! [Please update] Since it is a female channel, it is reasonable for our female villain Jiang Heyan to admit the wrong person back then, right? Maybe our current protagonist Gu Chen saved him back then, but he did good deeds without leaving his name and secretly left, and was taken advantage of by King Jin. [Laughing][laughing] It's okay, but I don't know if it's a male or female video. I'm so fascinated by it.

Finally I saw a harem drama that is not mindless Come on, as long as it doesn't collapse, this book will be a hit

Okay, okay, very nice. When I read the title of the book, I thought that Jiang Heyan and Gu Chen would have to wait a long time for the plot to develop before they could have feelings for each other. Unexpectedly, they slowly accepted each other at the beginning of the book, which looked quite sweet. There is nothing to say about other plot developments, they are all very good. Gu Tianming's deviation from the setting of the original novel is really eye-catching. Now it seems that Yun King Gu Che is not simple either. Is he also a time traveler? [Eating Melon]

This kind of writing seems quite novel, and the plot is also very smooth. The only drawback is that the author's writing style is not very good, and his writing power is slightly lacking, so many places look stiff and abrupt. Of course, I believe this situation will improve over time. Let's wait and see. For now, it's pretty good. It really disgusts me. In what age do you still play kidnapping? I couldn't bear the poison and read more than seventy chapters. This book is poisonous, run away, sisters.

No! The promised single heroine! Open a harem again! This is the eighth book I have read. Is this it again? I feel like quitting. "Why do I like reading novels? Because the love in the book is single-minded, either pure to the extreme, or loving to the extreme. Because of that kind of love, I can't envy it. I envy the blatant partiality and desperate love for each other in the book" [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

It's pretty good for Tomato, how can I put it~ [Rolls eyes] The character descriptions are all good, and the overall look is smooth without many flaws or pitfalls. Hmm... [Working on draft] This novel doesn't have a lot of fighting and intrigue, like a bowl of preserved egg and lean meat porridge... [Note] Gu Chen, Jiang Heyan, and her sister heroine (preserved egg), Gu Che and his twelfth brother are affectionate (lean meat), Nangong Yue, Gu Tianming, etc. Are all embellished with green onions. I thought Nangong Yue would be with Gu Chen, but he was not included in the harem. Unfortunately... This character is quite good. The shortcoming may be that it is too short. I remember that it mentioned the cultivation level before, but it did not extend in this aspect. Gu Chen's personal guard is only at level 4 or 5. You can try to expand this aspect to see if it gets longer. Speaking of which, it seems that the guard also has a role. When I saw it, I thought he was going to add a guard's emotional scene. Fortunately, he didn't continue to write it. I secretly mentioned that this is good, and it doesn't steal the protagonist's role. The second thing is that the sugar can be slightly sweeter. Every time I see these two people spreading sugar, I just sprinkle it for a while, taste the sweetness, and then it becomes boring. Who knows this feeling? [You taste carefully]

It's very good. Whether it's the female protagonist or the male protagonist, many of the characters' personalities are well developed. The plot can't be stopped after reading just one chapter. I personally prefer sweet stories that are more focused and don't like harems. I think it's very good. The author will update it soon. I am very much looking forward to the following plot. I hope the author can add a little bit of immortality and martial arts and publish a second book. I can wait until this one is finished. I am very much looking forward to it. I have been reading this kind of article for a long time as a boy. In addition, the author's dialogue is also very interesting. I strongly recommend that you read it.

Maybe it's God's perspective. I know who the male and female protagonists are, and I always hope that the male and female protagonists are sweet from beginning to end, so I express my displeasure with some of the behaviors of the male and female protagonists. Some teachers in the comment area may think that the emotional line is too fast [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] I originally thought this article was 1v1, but when I saw the middle, I felt more and more wrong. In the end, I made a big move and accepted the original heroine into a 1v2 [awkward laugh] [awkward laugh] [awkward laugh] Teachers who can't accept it should be careful. Anyway, the writing is okay, just don't read it with your brain [laugh][laugh][laugh]

The story line is comfortable and reasonable, and although there are some minor flaws, they have no real impact. The author is well versed in the principle of saying less and making fewer mistakes. Many unnecessary parts are omitted when possible, so the reading fluency is very good. The sweetness of the story is also good, and the description of the female characters is also very good. It is a rare book with excellent reading experience for Tomato.

Overall, it's good. The writing is okay. The emotional lines are not particularly delicate, but they are also very logical. The main reason for this book is that the plot is not very clear. Half of the book is mainly about emotions, and the other half is a little bit of everything, but nothing like it. The writing of the palace battle is too superficial and cannot compare to the great masters. There is no need to force it. In Zhengye, I feel that the protagonist does not do much. He mainly relies on soldiers to block and water to cover up the plot to advance the plot. Overall, it's pretty good. What I mentioned are basically a few flaws. I hope the author will continue to improve his writing style.

I feel that the original work should be set as follows: the ninth prince married Jiang Heyan just to win over the Duke of Zhen, and ignored Jiang Heyan and had no feelings for him. Only in this way would Jiang Heyan continue to have feelings for the sixth prince. Otherwise, as Jiang Heyan showed later, how could he develop into the boss of the original work? To be honest, this book really doesn't have any major poisonous points, but the most feared thing about a book is not the poisonous points but the boredom. I skipped the second half of the book because the major contradictions were almost resolved in a third of the text. I thought at the time that the protagonist would have all the advantages in fighting for the throne so quickly. What to write next? As expected, there is no content that people are looking forward to, and there is a lot of water. However, the author is trying his best to fill in the holes and also gives an ending, which is good