Take Over********

Very satisfied. Don't upgrade so fast. In fact, you can write more about reality. You can develop into super gods and achieve technological achievements.

7000 Old bookworms said: I think the author writes about the city, and the writing is very good. I like the protagonist with an urban character, and the pirate one is a little bit interesting. If the author can write about the city, he will definitely be popular. Trust me, my vision will not be wrong [Thinking][Thinking]

Very good, please update more, this is enough for anyone to read. I like how the protagonist feels so lucid in this world

It's pretty good, pretty realistic, pretty good, please update it soon [eating melon]

Very good. After reading so much, I finally found something I was more interested in.

Very interesting, a rare intellectual novel. A good novel, I am looking for a similar pirate novel.

Hold on steady and don't wander around. The pirate part is okay, but the city is a bit chaotic. The main line should be clearer, including cultivation, biology, technology, politics, and business. If cultivation is the main line, the supporting lines should be expressed clearly, and the equipment, drugs, and The ancient books are all about taking the initiative, not passively participating, and systematically summarizing the cultivation methods, cooperating with the officials to disseminate them, and developing the diversity, light, dark, Hua, Dan, Gang, Zhengjin-Ming, Soft Jin-Dark, Hard and Soft-Hua, Dongxuan-Dan, and the levels should be clearer The so-called concentration, concentration, and cave are not clear to what level they are aimed at.

The writing is very good, and the three views are very upright. It is just not in line with the "obvious" moral standards, but it is very true. The only bad thing is that it likes to preach and talks too much. I suspect you are in trouble [laughing evilly] Pirates is well written, Douluo is a mess of answers.

Hello author, your novel has a good idea, but the emotional aspects are average, and overall it is good. I hope you can keep writing. After all, you can't even stick to one novel, and you can't organize your writing experience. You will give up on other novels because of grades or gossip. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, you will choose to write vaguely. If you don't know, learn to overcome it. Read more other novels of the same type to organize and learn. This novel is very good. I hope you can come back and keep writing. Come on! ! ! How should I put it? The original theme of this novel was double penetration. Now the reality feels like it has been abandoned by the author, and it has no own characteristics. I think the realistic plot also has characteristics. In short, now this novel just feels like it doesn't have the same style as before, and its own characteristics seem to have been cut off by the author.

Let me ask, does this book have a female protagonist or not?

This is the first time I've seen this kind of setting in Zhen Ta Ma, and it's amazing. The protagonist's character is also very interesting [smile][smile]. One word is awesome, two words are awesome, three words are awesome, four words are very awesome, and five words are so awesome💥

I don't understand: Why is this score so low 7.9? The author wrote what I dreamed of - absolute sanity And it's not a system article for the general public, (not that it's not good, but with the system, it's like getting something for nothing. It's like working and getting paid...) (I've read Chapter 14 so far) Also, the author writes that the main character doesn't like women very much because among rich people, he feels like he's in a high position and is in a miserable state. In my case, it's "coming out of the mire but not stained" (the poor guy's excuse) ... After seeing 112, his image in my mind is gone forever. Unexpected, but reasonable

66666666 It's absolutely fine, just don't fly.

The author's writing is quite good, but I think the progress of your One Piece world is either to open the world, or to be completed at 80.9 Million words. Sorry, I didn't read the title of the book when I commented, it is indeed the book

The protagonist in the book has his own personality and will not change himself because of outsiders. He is working hard to strengthen his own goal from beginning to end. The author will update soon. Finally, there is a rational Douluo Dalu. This is the first novel I have read, and I still hope to have a more objective evaluation.

After reaching the peak of the martial arts system, which direction does the author intend for the protagonist to develop? Is it the Dragon Ball's Qi or the cultivation of immortality? The author has two choices. Either the pluralistic system of the cosmic worldview, or the immortality system of the prehistoric worldview!

You can't write such a good book without a certain amount of life experience. A score lower than 9 is simply an insult to the author. What did the guy who gave the low score think? [Awkward laugh] The world of One Piece is explained very clearly, the combat power system is written perfectly, and the world view is summarized well. I like the character of the protagonist very much [smile]

Not bad, worth watching. After reading the comments, some people said that the Douluo written by the author is licking the protagonist...[Thinking] As a spectator, I think the author's evaluation of the protagonist group is "fair". As for licking, it's just a normal transaction [I understand] The author seems to like to write some big principles in the article. I suggest the author try to write as little as possible. The big truth is chicken soup. It is better to drink less chicken soup [please taste it carefully]

Overall, it's quite exciting. The protagonist kills decisively and does whatever it takes to achieve his goals. He is relatively slow and slow when it doesn't affect himself. Of course, there are some flaws, but the flaws are not hidden. It's worth watching.

I can only say that you have found your own way in writing, and you have written your own ideas while respecting the existing literature and settings of the original work.

Hey, I saw the article about the destruction of history island. It was so insightful that I deserve a five-star review! !

It's okay, at least the pirate writing is pretty good, just write less about the city.

The character of the protagonist is very to my liking. The three views are the most ideal. The words spoken by the protagonist are also very good, but the emotions are still a bit off. This will make the protagonist seem more verbose. My suggestion for the urban chapter is to use less words. It is best to involve less on the national level. Please write more copies. Keep up the good work, author!

It's very good-looking, different from other Pirates fics, and very realistic.

The writing is very real, a cool novel that is not like a cool novel.

666666666, Good-looking, good-looking, super good-looking. I just like the protagonist's sobriety in this world.

Nice looking and very reasonable

Very good, good luck to the author!

Not bad, well written

Five-star rating٩(•̤̀ᵕ•̤́๑)💪Come on