Elf: I'm Xiaoxia, the Water Pokémon Master.

A very good book, very nice (*^▽^*)! !

It's well written. It doesn't follow the original plot. The characters have their own stories.

This book is really great, keep up the good work [sending my heart]

Creative as always and very well written!

It's a rare Pokémon story with no CP from the female protagonist's perspective. Although it's a man wearing a female character, the original male component is not high, and it's mainly from the female protagonist's perspective. It's great! There are really too few Pokémon fandoms with female trainers and no male protagonists. Come on, author! Water, too watery, an Evergreen Pokémon Center can water so many chapters, I have no patience to chase it, I will wait until I have accumulated a hundred chapters to read it. I really hope you can improve it. It's too watery. You can refer to other Pokémon fans to get a grasp of the progress.

The good thing is: both the characters and personalities are well created, the character's speech characteristics at certain times and the conversations between some family members are very good, and the emotional scenes are very delicate without feeling boring. The shortcomings are: apart from the numbness of my scalp when I saw the large number of elf analysis, there are some small flaws in the skills and elf points qualifications. The qualifications are still a bit boring. The elf analysis in several chapters repeatedly mentions that it gives people the feeling of looking down on an elf with poor individual value. It lacks the so-called fetters of the love for elf, just to become a water master, and there are many genetic skills and self-created skills that are more interesting. If you don't like it, you can just quit it. Overall, it is good.

I think we can follow the plot, and of course we can make changes. If you want to become the world's number one water master, how can you stay home all the time? You must travel.

I hope there is no CP. Don't add a male protagonist or a female protagonist halfway. The current career path is very good. If you suddenly add that kind of emotional line, it will feel weird. I can't accept CP. Mainly because there are some novels where the plot starts to decline just because a female protagonist or male protagonist is suddenly added halfway. The emotional line is weird, and the main line of the novel is also dragged down by the emotional line. Plus, reading the author's novels, I understand the author. The author's brain is dominated by reason rather than emotion, and the description of emotions is not particularly delicate. If the author is not 80% sure about this aspect, don't add it hastily. After all, the purpose of adding emotional lines in a novel is to attract more readers and add highlights to the novel. If it is not well written, it will have the opposite effect. No matter how well you write the main plot, it will be dragged down by the emotional line. In the end, the author should give it a boost! Don't put too much pressure on yourself, and take good care of your health. I have seen some authors put themselves in the hospital because of unhealthy daily life and irregular work and rest. The most serious one suffered from a brain tumor. Therefore, the author is a big man with a big body, so he must take good care of his health! Of course, I'm just afraid that the author will stop updating due to health reasons one day. I don't care about you. Let me say important things three times. Good health is the most important! Good health is the most important thing! Good health is the most important thing!

When will the second part be released? I really want to see it [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry ][Almost crying][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post]

There are very few Pokémon novels in which the protagonists are female, do not fall in love, and are only related to Pokémon. Too few of them are related to Pokémon. I quite like Xiaoxia in this novel, and it is not very similar to the original plot. Many of them are the author's own ideas, which are very innovative.

It looks good, it looks good. I hope that in the future, mythical beasts will not be on the streets and can be conquered casually. I always feel that they are no longer called mythical beasts.

If the elder brother doesn't want to update, just say so. Why bother to deal with the younger brother so casually? It seems that the younger brother is being sentimental. That's right. The elder brother is weak and needs more rest. The younger brother is urging the elder brother like this. It is the younger brother's fault. It hurts the elder brother's body and makes the younger brother feel distressed.

The content is a bit sparse. Just one elf and characters can be introduced in one chapter. The plot progress is a bit slow. I look forward to more updates. Will there be Qiuqiu sea lion and Lulili in the later stage? They are both very good-looking. Finally, there will be a Lugia cub, hahahahaha

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, why is it unfinished? The details of raising elves are well controlled and described, and the daily life is also very warm. It does not reflect the main line too much, but I can totally do it! Big update soon, wake up! There is no update today! [What] [What] [What] [What] Why did it end so suddenly? , Stopped suddenly [almost crying], it's fake

Is it possible that Baobao will release a second part? Will I be convinced when I see Lugia on the cover? Didn't Ho-oh say it's very suitable for Lugia before?

Overall, it's not bad. I think the low rating is definitely related to too much popular science, whether it's training, selection, etc. It's too detailed and it's easy for people to feel that the word count is too low. However, I am an omnivore, so I personally like it.

That is Xiaoxia's growth process, which may be a little slow. What we are saying is that we still have four years to reach adulthood, can we speed it up a little bit? Now Xiaoxia is basically training elves to upgrade their levels every day. Although the contents are different, they are basically the same. But it's still very interesting, but the pace is a bit slower. Your writing is very good [crying][crying][crying], I really like reading it, really. This is my suggestion. If the author says that he has saved the manuscript, then treat it as if I didn't say it and there is no need to change it.

Conclusion: People who have never played the game and know little about it can watch it. Suitable for those new to Pokémon literature. Laoyoutiao ran away quickly, no need to stop~ (so I ran away too)

It's super good-looking. It's much prettier than those cheating ones [blowing kiss] In the future, a croaking frog will be arranged for the heroine! Really cool and cute! If the wall is cracked, I suggest you make some arrangements [Adoration]

This book is super exciting, male to female. And he regards Pokémon as a friend and comrade-in-arms. All in all, he is very good and has the motivation to continue reading. It's just that the tricks and his analysis are a bit too heavy, but it's innocuous. For example, he excluded so-and-so because of its attributes? Not bad actually. I hope the author will work hard! Comparison

Not bad, but he feels really uncomfortable that the update is finished in the middle. Is there any follow-up?

Nice! It's just that, eh, it's not enough to watch?

This book is quite good, but I feel that the author was a bit skimpy on the word count when publishing the chapters because there are some worldview and level introductions in the chapters. These things do not need to take up part of the chapter, but the plot is quite exciting. I give it four stars.

It's quite good. It's a very good fanfic and one of the few that I can read. The author must not stop updating. If you stop updating, I will have one less fanfic to read. It's so difficult to find a fanfic to read [crying][crying][crying]

It's great. Overall, my feelings about this book are considered casual! I don't know how to describe it, but I'm quite willing to watch it from the beginning to the end, just non-stop. But I really want to see him grow. To be honest, I really want to see what it's like when he touches the main line? [Laughing] Ahem, the data is written very well, but I have a request [shy]. I hope there can be more plot? I really want to watch the plot quickly, and I also really want to watch her grow up quickly [crying] So, I'll update you more and more [hint]

A very good novel, no matter from any aspect, it is excellent. The only shortcoming is that there are too few. The author should work hard and write more. B+ potential level 40 is over? How are the limits of potential divided?

How did it end? I thought I would go to various regions to compete in competitions or inherit gyms.

A very good article, but the author is too short.

The author probably doesn't need to write some small details, it will become cumbersome! I wait for two chapters every day and can't see any interesting content. I just repeat what I said before. Please give the author a look at me and take some opinions. I am following this book very seriously. I hope it will get better and better.

This is the first time I see an author who draws comics in a novel, and it's so powerful. In addition, those who talk about water, I feel that this is the author's own characteristics, and you wouldn't be able to write it if it were another person. Very well written, keep it up [Love]