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Invincible Shuangwen is very beautiful

It is not easy for the author to write a book, but he deliberately did not copy Whitebeard in the early stage, and kept suppressing the protagonist, and some forced hot-blooded comedy. I hope to see better works next time

It is recommended that the protagonist lock Blackbeard in the sea tower stone cage and beat him every day when he is in a good mood and when he is in a bad mood (after all, one of the side effects of the Dark Fruit is doubling the pain) By the way, the same will happen when you meet Momonosuke in the future.

Give it to me, are you knocking it in? I am very passionate about it. No matter whether you are reasonable or not, it will be over [punch out][punch out]

The details are very well written, and there are many scenes that are very burning. For example, the scene where Su Mu is fighting on the top is very shocking to me. There are also some places that are very sensational. Whitebeard's line "one piece" really exists. It almost made me cry. Five stars, it must be five stars.

It looks good so far, but there are too few pirates and ships now, and many of the protagonists are alone on the ship. I hope there can be many female protagonists, which would be better. What does the author think?

Can I join Luffy's fifth gear, which is God Nika form?

Is there a possibility that the protagonist lied to outsiders about the fruit exchange, and said internally that the protagonist used the exchange fruit to exchange for the ability of Brook's Underworld Fruit? Then wouldn't the protagonist say "I really have expired, but I was resurrected again" [sneaky laugh]

It's fun, especially the God's Hand, but why not copy Suo Da's moves and get three good knives by the way?

Turnips and greens, everyone has their own preferences. Although I didn't start with "East China Sea", I still like it very much. It's true that the protagonist's strength is "invincible", but his "mentality" is just a "blank piece of paper" and he doesn't understand "conspiracies". He has to go through "severe beatings from society" before he can grow into a truly "strong man". It's a pity, the update has been stopped.

Isn't Hand of God the copying ability of Greedy Wolf in September Sky of Stealing Stars? There seems to be a 10-minute limit, and it can only be used three times a day. If you start with the original Hand of God, your combat power will not collapse so much.

I have looked for a lot of pirate-themed novels, and this one is relatively better than those. Many of them use Nami, the Robin Queen, and do not reflect the nature of the companion. This one embodies the companion more perfectly. I love so much. Come on, author.

Before beating the aunt, find an uninhabited island to improve the strength of all members.

For Ace's sake, I'll give you five stars!

I beg you, please update a few more pictures. The author greatly [likes][likes][likes][likes][likes][likes]

Why does the system copy rubber fruit? When this book was written, Nika had already been released, right?

If Whitebeard's internal organs are replaced with the surgical fruit ability, will Whitebeard still be shocked by the fruit's ability?

Very nice! ! ! But... I have a small request. Can the author give more information? Just a little will do. [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry] Also, I think it's good not to have a female protagonist. Of course, if the author wants to add one, I hope it will be a single female protagonist. (A little idea of ​​my own)

As wide as it is, there is something

The content is good, very interesting

My dreams come true, such as hoping that Ace is alive and the three brothers meet again

Is it a single heroine or multiple stars? The author seems to like Nami very much. If there are more, I hope to include Nami and Robin @ I have a soft spot for meat.

It's really good, keep up the good work, author!

It's very interesting and worth recommending. I hope the author will update it more often.

Come on, author, I'm just going to criticize you for daring to scold Yun Xiaogui [like][like]

The writing at the top is good. I hope it won't be too weak in the later stage. I have read many articles that are very weak in the later stage. Come on💪!

Hurry up buddy.

Wow, it was the third update yesterday. I hope I will continue to work hard today. I hope the protagonist can fish, do tasks, tease and tease the ladies, and be invincible at the beginning. The navy and other parts will not be able to survive without strengthening them. The strengthening means that the male protagonist does not take action, so just pretend that I didn't say it.

I hope Jarhead will be given the identity of Ace's younger brother or younger sister, and then the system will make a prank saying it has side effects, and the host affects too many causes and effects, so it will make the host a little lolita for three years (if it doesn't work, forget it)

The rating is a bit low because updates are slow, but it's quite nice [sending my heart]