The Fallen, Aloof Immortal Lord Struggles to Survive Day After Day

[Shy] I want to write well. It cannot be unfinished, eunuch, collapsed, filled with holes, written in a way that is not beautiful, and cannot be written without empathy.

Come on~ I mean, always support my baby🌹🌹

Great write up! This is the first time I have read a book about a woman abusing a man. Fortunately, there is a psychological description, otherwise I would have scolded the heroine to death [laughing]. In reality, the fifteenth day of the first lunar month is when the moon is at its roundest. I hope the author can reflect this setting in the book (this is just my personal opinion, it doesn't matter if I don't write it, don't criticize me)

I like it, please give it a thumbs up from the author. It's super pretty, but it's time to keep it ready. I'll be busy for a while now, so wait for me.

I love the size of the stream so much that I open it both ways. Must be five stars [laughs] Like it very much. Great love.

Well, I feel very sad after reading this novel. The plot of this novel feels a bit like Xue Pinggui and Wang Baochuan. Xue Pinggui and Wang Baochuan fell in love, but because of the obstruction of Wang Baochuan's family, there was a gap between them. They are still two love-minded people. The same is true for the male and female protagonists of this article. , But Ran Ran is much more likable than Wang Baochuan, and is a bit like Hua Qiangu. Everyone knows that Hua Qiangu loves Bai Zihua, but they don't know that Bai Zihua also loves Hua Qiangu but refuses to say it. Even if Hua Qiangu is possessed by the devil, he will not let go and really hurt Bai Zihua. In the end, Bai Zihua falls into madness for the person he loves. Overall, I like this work better, but in the later part, I am still torturing Gu Yue rather than torturing Xue Ran. I tortured Gu Yue's body in the first part, and tortured Gu Yue's heart in the second part. Xue Ran won very thoroughly. Even if she died, she let herself stay in Gu Yue's heart forever. Gu Yue lost so completely. He was hurt by his beloved, but he still couldn't bear to do it. In the end, it became a pain in his heart forever. If you ask me, it would be better to write a sweet story so that Gu Yue's defeat is not too miserable. If Gu Yue wants to win, he can only win if he dies in front of Xue Ran, but with his character, he should not be able to win. Even if he is injured completely and becomes a heart of cold iron, he can still remain kind and free everyone in the prison. Overall, the writing is still very good, and the female video article really shocked me a bit.

The various foreshadowings and reversals in the plot are very good, and the grievances and grievances intertwined between generations are well conceived. The only thing that makes me uncomfortable is that the lovers are tortured to death. I really don't want Gu Yue to abuse Ran Ran too harshly. After all, he is the one who will be sad and regret later, because the source of all evil is Gu Yue's tribe, who first killed Ran Ran's mother, and then caused Ran Ran to suffer in childhood. Furthermore, Ran Ran tortured Gu Yue in order to protect him. In summary, Gu Yue has been kept in the dark and does not know that Ran Ran's mother and Ran Ran's tragic childhood were harmed by her own tribe, and Ran Ran tortured herself in order to save her own life. And Ran Ran didn't know about the feud, but she pushed herself into danger in order to protect the descendants of the feud. She also endured heartache and tortured her sweetheart. In the end, she would be tortured because her sweetheart had been tortured before. Both of them were very pitiful. They obviously loved each other to the extreme, but they wanted to kill each other. Generally speaking, the author's way of writing the sword is too powerful, but the sword also contains the ultimate sugar. It is really sad and sad. I didn't dare to read it deeply. I just skipped to read it. But even so, after understanding the general content of the plot, I still cried. The eyes are red and swollen, and the tears are flowing. This kind of abuse is accompanied by the ultimate love. No one is wrong. It makes people want to be angry or cry. Just for this writing style and ideas, it is not an exaggeration to give 100 stars. It really makes people dare not watch it, but also want to watch it. I don't dare to watch it, because I will be tortured by the previous plot and cry uncontrollably. But I want to watch it because I want to see the reconciliation in the end, the result of love that breaks through countless hardships. Give the author a big thumbs up, [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry] Five stars is the limit of a book review, not the limit of my love for this book

The author's writing style is excellent, and he vividly writes about two characters who are drifting apart because of love. The introduction of various characters' relationships makes people deeply understand their stories. The emotions are rich and colorful, so as to achieve the purpose of allowing readers to go deep into it and achieve immersive reading. This also shows that the author's writing style is extraordinary. I dare, everyone gives it full marks. I give DaDa five stars, not because DaDa is only worth five stars, but because the upper limit is only five stars. Shout with me: DaDa is awesome! ! ! (There are no bells and whistles in this article, just my full feelings for Daman (≧∇≦)/)

Super nice. Coming from the Tomb of the Phoenix God, all the books are very beautiful. I will always pay attention to you, [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] Please write a dozen books.

The writing is excellent, and the character creation is great. The emotional handling of the male and female protagonists is super delicate. It is rare to see such an excellent sadomasochistic novel. Sure enough, the prerequisite for a sadomasochistic novel to make people feel sad is love. The plot is a bit sadistic for the sake of sadism, but it does not appear to be deliberate in the author's excellent writing (I don't think torturing for the sake of being sadistic is a shortcoming). This kind of sadomasochistic novel in which the male and female protagonists are almost equal in personality and love but torture each other is really hard to watch.