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[Shy] I want to write well. It cannot be unfinished, eunuch, collapsed, filled with holes, written in a way that is not beautiful, and cannot be written without empathy.

Come on~ I mean, always support my baby🌹🌹

I like it, please give it a thumbs up from the author. It's super pretty, but it's time to keep it ready. I'll be busy for a while now, so wait for me.

Great write up! This is the first time I have read a book about a woman abusing a man. Fortunately, there is a psychological description, otherwise I would have scolded the heroine to death [laughing]. In reality, the fifteenth day of the first lunar month is when the moon is at its roundest. I hope the author can reflect this setting in the book (this is just my personal opinion, it doesn't matter if I don't write it, don't criticize me)

I love the size of the stream so much that I open it both ways. Must be five stars [laughs] Like it very much. Great love.

Well, I feel very sad after reading this novel. The plot of this novel feels a bit like Xue Pinggui and Wang Baochuan. Xue Pinggui and Wang Baochuan fell in love, but because of the obstruction of Wang Baochuan's family, there was a gap between them. They are still two love-minded people. The same is true for the male and female protagonists of this article. , But Ran Ran is much more likable than Wang Baochuan, and is a bit like Hua Qiangu. Everyone knows that Hua Qiangu loves Bai Zihua, but they don't know that Bai Zihua also loves Hua Qiangu but refuses to say it. Even if Hua Qiangu is possessed by the devil, he will not let go and really hurt Bai Zihua. In the end, Bai Zihua falls into madness for the person he loves. Overall, I like this work better, but in the later part, I am still torturing Gu Yue rather than torturing Xue Ran. I tortured Gu Yue's body in the first part, and tortured Gu Yue's heart in the second part. Xue Ran won very thoroughly. Even if she died, she let herself stay in Gu Yue's heart forever. Gu Yue lost so completely. He was hurt by his beloved, but he still couldn't bear to do it. In the end, it became a pain in his heart forever. If you ask me, it would be better to write a sweet story so that Gu Yue's defeat is not too miserable. If Gu Yue wants to win, he can only win if he dies in front of Xue Ran, but with his character, he should not be able to win. Even if he is injured completely and becomes a heart of cold iron, he can still remain kind and free everyone in the prison. Overall, the writing is still very good, and the female video article really shocked me a bit.

Super nice. Coming from the Tomb of the Phoenix God, all the books are very beautiful. I will always pay attention to you, [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] Please write a dozen books.

The various foreshadowings and reversals in the plot are very good, and the grievances and grievances intertwined between generations are well conceived. The only thing that makes me uncomfortable is that the lovers are tortured to death. I really don't want Gu Yue to abuse Ran Ran too harshly. After all, he is the one who will be sad and regret later, because the source of all evil is Gu Yue's tribe, who first killed Ran Ran's mother, and then caused Ran Ran to suffer in childhood. Furthermore, Ran Ran tortured Gu Yue in order to protect him. In summary, Gu Yue has been kept in the dark and does not know that Ran Ran's mother and Ran Ran's tragic childhood were harmed by her own tribe, and Ran Ran tortured herself in order to save her own life. And Ran Ran didn't know about the feud, but she pushed herself into danger in order to protect the descendants of the feud. She also endured heartache and tortured her sweetheart. In the end, she would be tortured because her sweetheart had been tortured before. Both of them were very pitiful. They obviously loved each other to the extreme, but they wanted to kill each other. Generally speaking, the author's way of writing the sword is too powerful, but the sword also contains the ultimate sugar. It is really sad and sad. I didn't dare to read it deeply. I just skipped to read it. But even so, after understanding the general content of the plot, I still cried. The eyes are red and swollen, and the tears are flowing. This kind of abuse is accompanied by the ultimate love. No one is wrong. It makes people want to be angry or cry. Just for this writing style and ideas, it is not an exaggeration to give 100 stars. It really makes people dare not watch it, but also want to watch it. I don't dare to watch it, because I will be tortured by the previous plot and cry uncontrollably. But I want to watch it because I want to see the reconciliation in the end, the result of love that breaks through countless hardships. Give the author a big thumbs up, [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry] Five stars is the limit of a book review, not the limit of my love for this book

The author's writing style is excellent, and he vividly writes about two characters who are drifting apart because of love. The introduction of various characters' relationships makes people deeply understand their stories. The emotions are rich and colorful, so as to achieve the purpose of allowing readers to go deep into it and achieve immersive reading. This also shows that the author's writing style is extraordinary. I dare, everyone gives it full marks. I give DaDa five stars, not because DaDa is only worth five stars, but because the upper limit is only five stars. Shout with me: DaDa is awesome! ! ! (There are no bells and whistles in this article, just my full feelings for Daman (≧∇≦)/)

Very 👍🏻, I haven't seen a book that moved me for a long time, but this book has very strong emotions, but the proportion of body abuse in the plot is too large. It would be better if the proportion of psychological emotions is increased. If you read too much pure body abuse, you will not feel it (it seems that you can't say this, I can only say that it cannot move people's hearts). I hope that body abuse serves the plot or develops feelings, not abuse for the sake of abuse.

The writing is excellent, and the character creation is great. The emotional handling of the male and female protagonists is super delicate. It is rare to see such an excellent sadomasochistic novel. Sure enough, the prerequisite for a sadomasochistic novel to make people feel sad is love. The plot is a bit sadistic for the sake of sadism, but it does not appear to be deliberate in the author's excellent writing (I don't think torturing for the sake of being sadistic is a shortcoming). This kind of sadomasochistic novel in which the male and female protagonists are almost equal in personality and love but torture each other is really hard to watch.

I'm so impressed that the author can drive this car so fast [laughing and crying]! Moreover, the characters of the male and female protagonists are not broken from the beginning to the end, especially the psychological description of the male protagonist, and other shortcomings are ignored and ignored!

The author really likes this book. I like it so much. I love the woman who abuses the man. [Adoration] [Adoration]

Like it! I like the male protagonist to know the truth early and be able to serve the female protagonist willingly. The male protagonist has no counterattacks throughout the whole process, which I love very much! The main theme is a mindless abuser. I didn't understand the new Emperor who appeared in recent chapters, so I hope it doesn't disturb the relationship between the male and female protagonists!

Very good, I like it very much. Very nice, please keep up the good work. It's super, super pretty, but too little.

Oh my God, this choice of words and sentences, the lines between the words are full of the feeling of an ancient Mary Sue novel costing 5 yuan. It is like dreaming back to ten years ago. It has been a long, long time since I have seen this extremely artificial word "". Author... Come on...

The female protagonist is really cruel on the surface, but she is really kind to the male protagonist. There are many places where she is so ugly that she makes me cry. The author's writing is very good, it is the best one I have ever read. Two people who obviously love each other cannot be together, but they have to love and kill each other through hatred. Cry well woo woo woo Great recommendation! ! ! ! [Top post][top post][top post]

It's the first time I've seen such a bitter article on Tomato [Shy] Come on more [Blow a kiss]

This contrast is so interesting, but the heroine is so cruel to the hero, will the hero forgive the heroine in the future? Is the ending of this he or be?

Alas, the female protagonist is too kind to the male protagonist... I feel more and more that the female protagonist is the one who is being abused. She has done too much for the male protagonist, and even does not hesitate to turn herself into that image in front of her lover. She has taken on these notoriety. In fact, it is to protect him. The male protagonist still doesn't know anything. I hope that the male protagonist will not retaliate in the future.

Oh my god, after accidentally reading a novel about female protagonists, I found that my XP has become weird, and when I see a woman, I want to call her sister. . . . Woo woo woo woo XX

This is the best article I've ever read on Tomato. It's already the second time I've read it, but it was really sad when I read it in the dead of night, and my heart ached. The author is so awesome, I really want to cry [cry] [cry] [cry] Please comfort [almost crying]

The big books are always beautiful. Happy New Year [blowing kiss]

Oh my God, when I clicked it, I thought it was mindless abuse, but then after reading a few chapters, I found that it was not the case. The author wrote the emotional changes very delicately, which made people feel emotional. Hehe, if you abuse the male protagonist in the front, can you write about abusing the female protagonist in the back? I love yandere girls so much! Strong recommendation

I must torture the heroine later

It was indeed abusive at first and made me feel heartbroken, but I also understood that the heroine did not understand love, but later the misunderstanding was solved. Although there was a feud and resentment, she still loved the other person. The ending was beautiful, and the past was like a dream. Hum hum, let me add one more comment, it's a pity for my handsome and charming Demon Lord! [Cover face]

I just went to school and ended up not looking at my phone for a few weeks. I really followed it for a long time and I couldn't let it go when it ended. I was really worried about Be at first. After all, A Ran and A Yue had a blood feud and were really tortured and cried every day. Fortunately, they were together in the end, but I still cried. Their first wedding began their lifelong entanglement. Ayue fell into the abyss, and Aran was forced to bully her lover. Fortunately, the second wedding opened up their future happiness.

It's pretty good, I just hope that I don't abuse the heroine in the later stages [Sending my heart]

No matter how big the stream is, I will always support you! ! ! I love Xi Shui Da's sadistic stories so much! ! ! ! Xi Shui Da's writing is as good as ever! ! ! ! !

Beautifully written in big letters! I hope to get more updates, come on, get a raise, don't let it go unfinished, and give up (ŐдŐ๑)