Creating the Supernatural Through a Career

The writing is very good, but I would like to ask the author if this book does not have a female protagonist. The protagonist is very much a genius in extraordinary aspects. From the current point of view, the protagonist is the first extraordinary person, a pioneer, and a pioneer.

Nice! There is no heroine, the spiritual energy is revived, the golden elixir of the Zifu, and the Taoist text. First of all, there is indeed no heroine, and then the background of this book is that there is a Galactic Parliament in the Milky Way, and then the Galactic Parliament sends a career panel to the living planet, and after obtaining the career panel, you can deduce your own extraordinary career path. The talent of the protagonist is to awaken a clone and the talent of space at the beginning. Because the clone can infinite trial and error, the first derivation is also the most powerful. Some people complained that later in the book, there was a clone and he cooperated with the country, but in fact, the protagonist was soon promoted to the realm of Daoji. In short, he was a humanoid self-propelled nuclear bomb. At this time, he began to contact the Galaxy Council. He later became the Purple Mansion quite quickly. Now he is preparing to seek the golden elixir.

I think the writing is pretty good, but there is a big shortcoming: developing subordinates can be done in the middle and later stages. In the early stage, it can only be said to collect information and provide support. If you want to train subordinates and waste time, you are not afraid of leaving or rebelling. Moreover, you should focus on professional awakening and matching to accelerate your own cultivation, and look for professional stones secondly. In such a huge country, The resources and information in front of big machines are simply not as good as others. Your advantage is that you can know the conditions for awakening a profession. Use this advantage to accelerate your own strength. Do not awaken just any profession. Especially now, it is really a waste of time to awaken to any financial profession. In this world change, money may become waste paper at any time. As for the emotional line, if you don't write it at the beginning, don't write it in the early stage because it's easy to get disgusted if you don't grasp it well.

The Daoji monk system is simply amazing! Supermodel, really supermodel, crushing the traditional immortal cultivation system, reaching the golden elixir realm, it is not only a star-level combat power, it is already comparable to the galaxy! 👍👍👍

The resurrection of the spiritual energy, the incarnation (has a self, there is only one at the moment, I hope there will be one in the future, up to three otherwise it will collapse), the first batch of extraordinary beings, the Xuanjian, It's not a big problem, it's just that the data, techniques, and Qi are explained too clearly.

It's pretty good, similar to the extraordinary exploration flow of the original Seeker. Note that I said the Transcendent Exploration stream, not something like the original Seeker. But it's pretty good. It's only about sixty chapters now, so I look forward to the follow-up. I have only read chapter 20 now, so the reading time is less than thirty minutes. Mainly because I like this kind of extraordinary exploration flow.

I have read a few chapters of this book for now, all from the website, and I have something to say. After reading a few chapters, I can almost confirm that it is most likely a newcomer, or someone who has written books before but has not achieved any results. There is no need to describe some plots in the book in detail. This is an important ability of the author. If you don't understand or understand a little bit, you should avoid the important points. Since you know that it is your weakness, you should just mention it in one sentence, and don't expose your shortcomings with forceful descriptions. In addition, there is a data problem that newcomers can easily encounter. Except for the famous data streams, such as Super Mechanic, the data in most books expands rapidly, which will lead to an extreme sense of fragmentation in the middle and later stages of the book, making the reader's sense of unreality even more serious. Seeing the numbers is like floating in the sky, making me want to laugh 🤦 🤦 The data in this book are relatively cautious and conservative for the time being, and I hope it can be maintained in the future. Furthermore, there are many things that do not need to be explained from beginning to end as to why they are done, what are the benefits and consequences of doing so, etc. If you write all the subsequent plots and follow this development, you are spoiling yourself. If you don't write it like this, it will be easy to have misaligned expectations (some readers accept your spoilers and want to see such spoilers, but if you don't write them, misalignment occurs). Keep watching, I hope it will be better in the future 😜😜

Author, you are the Wild Boar King. I have read several chapters of hunting wild boars. It's a bit tasteless to eat, and it's a pity to throw it away. Either hunting wild boars or mice, I watched it from over 50 years old to over 70 chapters. The content is all about hunting wild boars and rats. Are you a Free Controller? Staring at animals

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Your pen and ink have a natural charm. The narrative has ups and downs, opening and closing in a coherent manner; The layout is exquisite, the grass and snakes are gray lines, and the pulse is thousands of miles away. When writing about people, they have both form and spirit, and are ready to come out; The artistic conception of imitating scenery is far-reaching, as if you are actually there. The diction is clear but not frivolous, the plot is tortuous but not confusing. It's both emotional and logical, and gripping. With a roll in hand, I forget about food and sleep, Covering the book and meditating, the aftertaste is endless. It's really a wonderful pen that brings flowers to life, and a masterpiece is made by nature!