Azure: Commander's Past

In fact, to be honest, your book can be written as a daily sweet article. I don't think the previous things are necessary. It might be better if it is written as a daily sweet article in the port area.

I think this book is an improvement over the author's last book. It inherits the advantages of the previous book. This book is very easy to read. It gets rid of the small problem of not being able to break sentences (but it suffers from the big problem of breaking sentences, which is sad). The character creation is relatively simple (after all, it is only a short story of more than 300,000 words). The transition is also not very skillful and rather abrupt (in the middle period). But if you have played the game Azur Lane, then this book is a rare piece of casual fan fiction. Unlike other novels, you will have a little regret after reading it. After reading this novel, you will feel satisfied (it also shows in disguise that the author hopes to improve the story line. For example, add some extras) Suggestions to the author: 1 (optional) enrich the story line (for example, add some battles, strategies.) 2 (Heavy) The character of the protagonist is not rich enough, I don't need to say more about the specifics 3 (heavy) The transition is smoother (advance the timeline) There are two places in this novel where the timeline (can't remember where) advances too fast Summary: As a daily fan fiction, this novel is of relatively high quality. Friends who are short of reading can read it. The plot content of more than 300,000 words is relatively compact (either on the way to fishing for a ship girl). Don't use your brain when reading it, and don't criticize the author.

I am a military commander and not good at speaking. Sir, you have a great talent. Five yesterday and seven today, I should reward you five⭐️

Worth reading: Invincible "returns to the beginning" to find his mother-in-law transformation (ship girl + siren in all camps) Blue Commander's article

The author wants to be exposed 100 times 100 times The author is very smooth and truthful

In fact, I felt a little confused after reading it. The interweaving of the timeline made me a little confused. Just like the last few endings, I didn't know why Su Cheng left. But it is indeed a book worth reading if you also play Azur Lane.

Chase me all the way, the needle won't poke me

I think this book is very good to read ("Although there is still a lot to say, I won't say it until it's finished." Actually, I don't want him to finish it)

Ten or even nine points is good (appreciation)

What a sweet plot.

Not enough, not enough at all! Author, if you want my gifts to fill your little pocket, update it carefully if you want, do you hear me?

Brothers, you're welcome 😌 Show me more sex

It's a bit like a Chinese novel, not too much description, more straightforward dialogue, and some emotions can be read more clearly slowly.

The character's personality is well developed, especially the one who eats hands is a very special image.

Yes, but hard to rate (

I didn't expect to open a new book [Chigua]

Very good, very satisfied, but why is the score so low?

Old readers of the previous book, come and support this group of authors

I want to see the story of all the ship girls feeling sorry for the commander [sending my heart]

I give it five stars because the ratings are too low. I don't know what to say. Anyway, it's pretty good.

The needle doesn't poke, the needle doesn't poke

Uh-huh, uh-huh, uh-huh... [Laughs evilly]

Come on, I will always support you Ended with four different endings,

Come on yo yo yo

Very well written, good luck to the author

We agreed not to use the knife [crying][crying] Come on [laughing] Author, do you have some misunderstandings about Bu Dao? [Crying]

Hum hum hum ah ah ah ah ah ah

Friends, it's really good

Okay, the ending is good

Very well written