Quickly Wear: the Host Became a God After Beating the Male Protagonist

Nice! Moreover, the author is very capable, and there are some details that make people very happy to see, for example, jealousy is replaced by a single person [like]

Encourage your simple love for your daughter! Hope to create better works👏

Come on, Jiuyuan, give five stars to the women who are redeemed.

When writing fast-travel stories, it is important to avoid making the story of a world too long. It is usually almost over in chapters 15-30. The second story actually has more than seventy chapters (??) And some expressions are too redundant. For example "Mu Yijiu looked at Mu Liu and took the letter. Mu Yijiu opened the letter and it read..." There are a lot of descriptions like this in the second world. It's too redundant and makes people tired of watching it. If it can be said clearly in one sentence, there is no need to split it into two paragraphs. Moreover, the storyline of the second world is basically based on "let's go out for a walk", it is too random! ! Why are they competing for the throne? They are so busy and still have time to go out and hang out every day! Or just "wandering around" without any purpose? There is also the part where the three of them give each other gifts, which is too redundant, too redundant, too redundant, baby. Some words are not necessary at all. But the article about loving women is worth five stars. I hope the author can write better and better. Also, if you don't mind, I'll make some minor changes. If you mind, just tell me and I'll delete the comment.

It's a bit bland, but I love my daughter enough, and I listen to the readers' advice. I feel better when I open the comment section and read it.

The wording is very comfortable, I love female writing. I watched several worlds in a quick glance, and they were all stories about the heroine helping the women in the original world to awaken and fight for their careers. The intention was very good. The writing style is a bit poor, it is all straightforward and not attractive enough for me. But after all, it is a pioneering work, and it is already very good. Five stars encourage it, and I hope the author can finish it.

It's so good. I wanted to give up reading this book after reading it for 24 years, but I didn't expect it to be so good. Moreover, the author is really very detailed. There are no neutral words, no words that insult women, and even the words next to the stigmatized word "female" have been changed. Really, author, I love you so much. Moreover, the women are well portrayed. The heroine helps the women in the original books to awaken step by step, seize power and strive for profit. It's so pretty [admiration]

Recommended by other girls, good things should be read by girls together [Learned]

Come on, I finally saw a different kind of fast wear! Looking forward to further development

I have finished reading the first story. The author's writing is a bit childish, but he is very good at loving his daughter. Keep up the good work!

Not bad, give me five stars, cheers for the author

I heard that five stars don't count as a rating. I originally wanted to give it four stars, but that didn't work. The author wrote it so well that it deserves five stars! Please come back soon and continue writing, we really can't live without you. [Cry][cry][cry]

It's pretty good, but it's a little bit lacking. Come on [eat melon]

New world view Save thousands of trapped women really nice Highly recommended

There is no CP or female rivalry between strong women. The women in the article are all very dazzling and beautiful. I hope there are such women in reality, preferably more and more.

Love women's novel, without humiliating women's lyrics, the wording is praised. The protagonist is like a reliable big sister, strong and patient, helping to guide the sisters to awaken their own consciousness and live for themselves instead of becoming someone else's stepping stone or plaything. The interaction between the characters is very tacit and friendly, I like it!

For female-oriented terms, you can see

Wuwuwuwu, beheaded and safe, it's a girl, just look at her!

Except for some middle school students, everything else is pretty good.

I hope there will be more female characters in the novel~

Love women's literature, there are many female-oriented words.

It's very good, thank you to the author [laughs]

Damn, come on, the heroine is so in love

It's getting better and better, keep up the good work💪

An excellent novel about women's awakening and women's mutual help.

Well written, the heroine and the supporting cast are both good

Highly recommended, I really like the author's view on equality, the baby girl is very good [flying kiss][flying kiss]

Good-looking, love to see excellent

Five stars, five stars, must be five stars

Good review! It's about loving women!