I'm Harry Potter's Cousin

I have finished reading the current chapters. This book is really good. The heroine is a very warm-hearted person. She is good at taking care of the emotions of people around her. At the same time, she is very clear about what she wants to do. She does not have sudden joys or sudden dislikes, and she does not directly "sentence death" to some characters because of the original work. This is something I think is commendable. For example, among the many fans I read, if you stand on the Snake House side, you will definitely slander the Lion House and Dumbledore, and if you stand on the Teacher House side, you will definitely slander Slytherin. It seems that the two houses must separate good and evil. Everyone has shortcomings and advantages. It is unfair to these characters to infinitely magnify the advantages of one person to denigrate another character or to continuously attack the shortcomings of one person. You must know that "Harry Potter" is not so much Harry's experience as it is about describing all living beings. Everyone is not perfect. Just like Dumbledore once proposed "for the greater good", just like the hijacker also bullied Snape... This book does not deny some of the bad things about a character just because he is good, nor does he erase the good things about a character just because of his bad things. This is what makes me most comfortable. Moreover, the portrayal of the character's psychology here is also very good, especially when I see Penny relieved, I feel that the regret of watching the original work has been made up for. I look forward to Ashley's growth, and I also hope that this book will maintain its current level. I hope the author can persevere, come on! [Love][love]

It's really good-looking. Is the heroine the favorite of the group? Will there be a CP in the future? I prefer the heroine to be unique and beautiful. Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง But lily is also okay, and it's good to eat [eat melon]

It's super good-looking. The father-daughter relationship between the heroine and Sri Lankan teacher, and the family and friendship between the heroine and her relatives and friends are really good. I think the intensity of teasing Black is just right, but I still hope that Black can apologize to Sri Lankan teacher.

This book unfolds in a plain tone, and the author uses delicate brushwork to describe the Dursley family full of warmth. I like the protagonist very much. Although she is not an all-powerful witch, nor a highly talented Dark Lord, she is just a little girl who wants to change the people around her, but everything she does for Harry is touching. Ashley is the harmonizer of the family, Harry's life mentor, and the low-key but touching "flower" lady in Hogwarts. Thank you for meeting you. The healing this book brought me was like a gentle drizzle, which made the hot summer no longer irritable.

Shamelessly give yourself a little encouragement for insisting on updating! [Shy] At the same time, I also want to clear up the mines. [Note] This article uses the movie as the main framework. Fans of the original novel may not like the various private settings in it! The author sincerely hopes that Baozi will enjoy reading the article. If you like it, just read it. If you don't like it, don't force it. You must be happy and relax. Let's just have fun reading the article. Don't forget your original intention! [Love]

I stopped at chapter 44 twice. The early stage is very beautiful, a very warm and happy family, there are frictions but they also become close through the running-in. The character of the heroine is very good, the description of the Dursleys is also very logical and humane, Dudley is also a strong-willed girl, and Harry is also cute and cute. However, since the appearance of the twins in Chapter 26, the overall plot distribution seems to have taken over the main role. It feels like the twins have more plots than the heroines. Also, I couldn't help but jump to read the extras, and it turned out that there was a CP line between the twin brother and the heroine. Once I read the main text with this setting, and saw more intimate descriptions of him, Qiu Zhang, and Luna, it was difficult for me to continue reading [crying].

The author's writing style is very delicate, and the psychological description of the character is very good. Looking at the story from Dursley's perspective, you can see another side. Wow, I cried when I watched the front part, and I really felt sorry for Penny.

It's really beautiful [crying] [crying] The corners of the mouth were raised during the whole process. The author's big words are really warm [crying] [crying] [crying] Like [love] [love]

It's super pretty, nothing bad, not embarrassing, just not enough to look at. 👀

The writing was so good before going to school that it seemed like a different author changed after going to school. The writing style suddenly became childish, with exclamation marks everywhere. The new author also added a useless new heroine. I'm not sure if I'll read it again.

Super pretty! ! ! To be honest, I am really picky about reading books. You can tell from the fact that I set up a bookshelf specifically for Harry Potter fan fiction. This one is really my favorite! ! The heroine will make mistakes like ordinary people. Excellence comes from past efforts and accumulation. It's all step by step. There is no golden finger. It all depends on your own efforts. It's really amazing! The emotional descriptions in the book are also very accurate, very delicate and easy to understand. All in all, it's worth watching, highly recommended! ! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Like][Love]

The plot is ingenious and reasonable, and will not be abrupt due to additions or deletions. The characters, whether the protagonist or the original character, are unique and not rigid. The overall feeling is that the characters are very vivid, regardless of the protagonist or the original clown. It's a very good work, and the writing is also delicate. It may seem that some of the character descriptions feel 0oc, but they are not overly uncomfortable. It reveals more about the reasonable expression of his own personality characteristics in the plot, which is very satisfying to me.

Unexpectedly, it is written from the Dursley family, but it is very well written, but although it is non-CP, I don't really like the plot of over-matching but over-dividing, especially in fan fiction. I originally thought I could convince myself, but I failed, so the mountains are high and the road is far, so we will meet again if we are destined [sending my heart]

Very nice! ! ! It was a smooth read, and I didn't feel like I didn't want to read it halfway through! Basically every character has a change in the ending, including Lockhart who has become better, and the professor has also been redeemed [Love] [Love] [Love]

The love between the heroine and Wood is really touching. Secondly, the heroine saved the tragic fate of many, many people, just like in the original work. The heroine is not pretentious or pretentious, and can protect Harry like a real big sister, and let Harry promote Harry's growth, and it is not embarrassing at all when reading. Finally, it also gives Dali a new setting. It's really good to read. There are some personal details in this book. But there is nothing that cannot be integrated into it. It is as if they are people of this world. It is really touching. Especially when I watched the end, I felt moved, and it seemed that I felt like watching the ending. Really nice

Five stars is my agreement with the author's interpretation of the Dursley family, but this deliberately lopsided way of writing does screen readers. They are fans anyway, and everyone has their own opinions. But I would like to trouble those readers who write book reviews to stop talking and ignore the original work. They are completely carried away by others. The author is also very good at this. At least he has a full sense of substitution, but he cannot always be locked in this kind of circle. Although it is novel, it will really reduce people's desire to read. Although everyone likes to see the flaws of good people and the shortcomings of bad people, they can only see Malfoy's so-called kindness and just want to make friends, but not his arrogance and contempt for ordinary people. They can only see Ron's taste and talkativeness, but cannot see his unconditional help for his friends. The low self-esteem caused by poverty and lack of love. Unless you are like Draco's cousin, you add everyone's favorite private goods based on Draco and add eye-catching things, otherwise, I can only say that it is a fan, but it cannot be said to be a high-quality novel. Including my cousin's book. Covered in the skin of Harry Potter, the core of the play is the romance of Mary Sue. One more thing, if you prefer the details of the original work and don't like to watch the characters, then you'd better turn off the comments, otherwise you will really be pissed off. I obviously found it quite interesting, but after commenting on it, I was almost speechless.

The story is good, but it's a bit long-winded, a bit procrastinating, and has too much psychological activity, but it makes the characters very delicate, so I felt that the last few chapters were more enjoyable to read. By the way, both endings are perfect

How can I put it this way? I didn't expect this kind of unfolding, but this book perfectly smoothed all the difficulties. I was originally sorry that the plot only lasted four years, but along the way, I suddenly found that everything was reasonable. With Ashley's character and hard work, the end of all tragedies should have been at that time and place. Although the writing is not so gorgeous, everything is explained in a calm, peaceful, but natural way. It is a rare good book in fan fiction! Thumbs up for the author's delicate heart!

It's super good-looking, and the angle is very novel. It seems to have a super positive outlook on life. The author is very good at writing. Fortunately I didn't give up on this book because of the cover. (I don't mean anything else, I just don't like this style of cover.) Ah, everything is fate.

It's very interesting. The redemption of Sijiao is really good. However, the heroine and Wood may have preconceived ideas that they are not suitable for each other. I have always felt that they are a strange pair and I am not used to it. This is the first time I read an HP fanfic. This article is really excellent, especially the redemption that puts Snape in the position of an elder. It really poked me. Sijiao Saigao [crying] [crying] [crying]

I like it very much ^w^ The writing style is very delicate. The arrival of the heroine has filled up many regrets of the original work. However, the article is too long (Simi Marseille). The heroine's life does not have any special highlights. Maybe it is because she has shined all her life but it seems a bit dull. Even the last battle with heavy casualties in the article is not much different from the daily fights with large bosses. Benedick's emotional line is also a bit abrupt, not However, everyone still likes the protagonist group, especially the relationship between Ashley and April - it is a feeling of complete trust in each other. No matter what Ashley is doing, April can appear at the right time and bring enough emotional value to her. Although there is no excessive sparkle, it seems that compared to the original work, the ordinary and happy life today may be the life Ashley wants Harry and the others to live.

It's a pretty good perspective, but I think the heroine is very tired.

I think the rating of this book should be around 9 or 8 points. The characters are well-developed and the heroine Ye is very smart. This is the first time I have been able to read it. There are no skipping chapters. The full text is high in sugar and no swords. The heroine has a clumsy personality. It is a good thing to read in your spare time. , And this article also has some interactions between the heroine and Professor Snape. Personally, I feel that Professor Snape is a bit deviated from the original work, but it does not affect it. It will only make people feel more interesting. As a proud professor, I recommend reading a dozen chapters first. If you like to read the heroine's interesting stories, then you can join if you are a bit of a group favorite.

This is the first HP fanfic I've seen that has nothing to do with love! Salvation is not necessarily about love, it can be about family affection or friendship! When I was watching the Harry Potter movies as a child, I sometimes thought that Aunt Petunia was actually not bad. If someone could enlighten her, he wouldn't be so bad to Harry. After all, he was her sister's only son. And as I grew up, I suddenly felt that the old principal had gone too far in some things. Let people raise their children and give them the money. Don't say anything. The child looks like he is very tall when he is thrown to others. If it were me, I would be very unhappy! Okay, that's a long way off! Thanks to the author for opening up a warm rescue route in the HP universe! Let all regrets become complete. [Shy][shy][shy][shy]

I think it looks great! ! ! At the beginning, I thought the heroine would be Gryffindor... I didn't expect to end up in Hufflepuff (but it feels pretty good (≧∇≦*). If I were in Hufflepuff, I might have become a ball at this age - no way, I can't stop my snack addiction)! ! ! In fact, when I saw the Kelly family appearing on the stage, I was a little unhappy at first. I had an inexplicable feeling... Emmm, how should I put it? Probably because I don't want to intersperse unfamiliar characters among familiar characters. Then I gave up writing. Later, when there was a book shortage, my tolerance was infinitely magnified, so I continued reading. Suddenly, I felt that the friendship between six good friends was enviable and warm. So without leaving a chapter, I insisted on reading the latest chapter. I really like this kind of young high-spirited writing, it gave me a lot of inspiration. This book review is really lacking (//∇//). The reading time was less than 30 minutes. That's because I read it on another mobile phone. One was logged in and the other was not logged in. After reading it with the one that was not logged in, I ran over and posted a comment with the one that was logged in! Come on (ง•̀_•́)ง

In the early stage, the relationship between the heroine and her family is really nice and delicate, and it is also very common sense. I feel like it was written too well in the previous part, so when the heroine came to Hogwarts later, I was a little unmotivated. I'm not saying it's not good, but I feel like it was better in the earlier part?

Another Potter fanfic with a happy ending. The new character created by the highlight turned out to be a cousin who did not exist in destiny. With a prophetic plot, he took the opportunity step by step to resolve conflicts, fill regrets, and save everyone. The descriptions of family, friendship and love simply cannot be too beautiful. The appearance of Hua Xia in the article is really unexpected but reasonable, and it stirs up something in the blood~ Looks good! 2024.06.16 Jiachen. Gengwu. Xinhai. Dingyou Qinghe read it.

The story is very immersive, and I was really excited to see the Dursley family enjoying themselves! ! The writing is good, the plot is good, the ideas are good, all the stories are beautiful, and the writing is very real. There is not so much intrigue in the world of children in their early elevens. I am very happy that the author will not write villains in order to advance the plot (of course this should be considered a personal problem of mine). God knows what kind of happiness I felt when I saw that there are still many plots to watch! !

Family and friendship are well described, and the plot is also very interesting. [Sending Hearts] 94 Love... Is a bit baffling. It should be because it is not written in detail. Anyway, this book does not focus on writing about love. [Stare] Overall very good. [Laughs] Very nice! ! !

I haven't seen Harry Potter in detail, but I can only say that I have some understanding of the plot. But that didn't stop me from reading it all in one go. It's really good. The only thing I don't like is April. That's Chacha's character anyway.