Quick Travel: I Became the Protagonist's Licking Dog

[Thinking] Wow, I wrote so well . . . . .

Although it is a licking dog system, Zhang Yun's way of completing the task is not licking. In the first chapter of the ancient world of Yun Kingdom, Zhang Yun and the protagonist first met. When I saw the system saying that the protagonist was so miserable in order to atone for his sins, I guessed that it was definitely not the first time that the protagonist and Zhang Yun met. Maybe there was a relationship dispute in the past life, where they had to make amends for their mistakes, and then repay it in this life. After reading the origin, it turned out to be very different. In the second star episode, the two of them were really fast together, and the Rockets were not as fast as the two of them! [Shy] Oh, needless to say, although our memory is fuzzy, the feeling is there, hurry up, hurry up [laughing and crying] In the third apocalyptic chapter, the two work together to eliminate the zombies, well, the usual apocalyptic routine. The fourth chapter is the origin, which is a flower and a tree falling in love, separated and reunited. I somewhat admire Ling Shen and Sun Dasheng. Their paths to becoming gods are unique. It's a bit short, but overall it's pretty good. Looking back, Zhang Yun and the protagonist have to deal with quite a lot of tasks. There are so many tasks in the entire galaxy, tsk tsk tsk.

The writing is pretty good, and the quality is above average for the same genre (sweet, three-dimensional characters, non-toxic, non-cruel, and funny) The plot details are good, the writing is good, and the characters are three-dimensional There is just something wrong with the plot synopsis (it always feels a bit awkward) Also, I was deceived by the chapter. I started watching it at nine o'clock after dinner, and planned to go to bed at ten o'clock. Twenty chapters of a world should be enough in one hour. But I didn't expect that one chapter was so long, and I didn't finish it until after eleven o'clock. Another point is that you can make a directory. Because some worlds are long and some are short. For fast travel stories with one world and one short story, and multi-world stories, the sequence of the table of contents is not as good as the subtitles at the back.

I haven't seen an article with such smooth logic in a long time. Good luck, author💪

The writing is very good and I also like the rhythm. I just can't get enough of it. [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] There is too little in the world. The author's style really appeals to me [Admiration] [Admiration] [Admiration] [Admiration] Come on!

It's great to read. The author's worldview is quite grand. I think you can open another book and continue writing this story. It's not easy to come across a wonderful fast-travel novel. I haven't read enough [I'm about to cry] No loss in investing! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

The night is so romantic, but still not as fascinating as you

This is a pure and sweet fast-traveling article, and the characters are not naive. Although they are very traditional character templates, they are well-shaped and not awkward. The writing is also very smooth. I don't feel like I can't read halfway through. The love between a flower and a tree haha.

The small world is very beautiful. The two of them are very sweet. There is basically no abuse. I can obviously continue to write. It is a bit short. The final original world setting is very large and not that interesting, but the logic is very good.

It's good and very interesting. The author greatly made me see the various situations in life. Even gods can't help themselves. As ordinary people, we only need to live every moment in front of us, no matter whether fate makes us rich or poor and miserable. Even if we die in the future, no one will remember that we existed, but we still left a mark in the big dye vat of the human world. People can't remember us, but if the world remembers, it will prove that I have been here.

Wenwen is very beautiful and sweet. I really like this type of film, but there are so few of them. There are only four worlds, which is really not enough to watch! It's so good to watch, why didn't I write more about it? It's really sad. The point is, I didn't add more extras so that I could watch more. I really can't bear to end it. Goodbye Lian Yao and Ye Chen, let's live happily in a place where I can't see! ! ! I really can't bear to say goodbye. I hope there will be another quick-wear version next time. This one is really not enough! ! ! ! !

The writing is very good! Watch the plot flow to the end in one go. Come on, happy updates!

The first two worlds are beautiful. I like to read the emotional lines. The author's emotional lines are handled delicately and boldly. Too bad the world doesn't have enough. The endings of the latter two worlds are too big and will be a bit boring. Although the title of the book is "dog-licking", in fact, the two protagonists both have love brains. Love brains are not terrible, and they lead to the same destination through different paths. In short, the ending of the world is quite positive.

Lao Tianlao feels comfortable in front of me... Although I am temporarily aggrieved because the protagonist is not strong enough, the ending is good and I turn around... But the truth of the ending... It is strange and uncomfortable to watch... Lovers have infinite possible futures... But what about relatives and friends... I can only say that it is not a perfect ending (I am not saying it is bad, I mean it is not perfect).

It's nice to read, but there's just too little of it. It would be nice to write more about the world.

It's really beautiful and complete, but it's really too little. Yechen owes so much debt. Has the author really stopped writing more? [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

It's really, really good to read. It's definitely worth it. If you don't like it, read it first and then come to me. (Of course, those who don't like this kind of writing and those who don't like CP writing, don't read it. If you want to read it, it's okay but if you don't like it, don't come to me. Although it's possible that after reading it, you suddenly like CP writing.)

Sweet, not cruel, not bloody. The progress in the first few worlds is faster. I think it's because the love is too unforgettable, so even if we don't know each other, we can't forget it deep in our souls. I recommend it to everyone.

It's good-looking, and the main character is very emotional. Moreover, the plots of each world are very interesting. I like the plots of the last world and the first world the most, which are the last two world points. They are interlocking, there are no pitfalls, and the hidden lines are perfectly arranged. It doesn't feel confusing and is very clear. [Sending Hearts]

It looks great, keep up the good work! ∵

I'd like to give you some advice: be more refined in your copywriting.

Such a great book, I don't know why it only has a 6.6 Rating, I don't understand [what]

It's very interesting and enjoyable. I can see that the author is very serious about writing the story line, and it's quite complete.

Well written, good luck to the author! [Like][Like][Like]

Just read it in one go [Blow a kiss]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Are there so few people? [Cover face]

Not bad, still quite sweet

Good-looking, very good, very sweet

It's very good, you can take a look!