Failed to Awaken and Was Ridiculed? I Actually Have Two Lines!

Although it feels like it's based on the full-time worldview, the author has made great innovations in terms of plot and abilities. Come on, author!

Yes, the protagonist is usually unreliable and always has a calm personality at critical moments, which is what I like. The author's descriptions have a strong sense of imagery and a sense of immersion. You can't help but worry when watching the protagonist take risks, and the plot is very interesting. Compared with those Bai Shuang articles, I think the main focus of this book is the story. Although the protagonist is a little reckless, his thinking is clear just to get more resources to improve himself [Thinking]

The current system is like full time, but he is a single female lead! [Adoration]

This book becomes more and more exciting starting from chapter 40. The protagonist reveals his talent in more than 80 chapters, which is so exciting. I skipped over and finished reading that one before deciding to take a good look at the previous one.

Five stars, because I am also a full-time fan. Although I haven't read a few chapters, it always feels like watching the full-time mage again. Also, I haven't looked at the protagonist's talent, but it should be similar to Mo Fan. So the author, you have to understand that Mo Fan is not superior in his talent. , Mo Fan's talent ranks fifth or somewhere in the country or the world. Anyway, I knew that Mo Fan relied on the little loach to become so strong. Without the little loach, Mo Fan would not have achieved as much as he does now, so it depends on the author, how you write [Thinking]

Very good, the details described in the article are very good! Come on, author, I believe you can do it! (Author, can you add some plug-ins to the protagonist, otherwise the protagonist will have no life-saving skills. Also, the heroine should appear more often!)

Good looking. Although it is the same type as a full-time mage, the author is still very creative in his settings. I really like to see that kind of magic setting. Come on, author. Both content and design have their own ideas. It's simply super pretty.

I feel that it is okay to draw lessons from the whole novel. As long as the main plot is not exactly the same, it is acceptable. After all, after the completion of the whole novel, I haven't read a similar mage novel for a long time. I just hope that the author can add his own new plot while learning from it, preferably in a larger proportion, otherwise you will already know the plot and it will be boring.

It's a very interesting story, similar to the plot of The Versatile Mage. I hope the author can add some innovations of his own.

Byd author, please update quickly. Can you code 10,000 per day? [Anger] What, I am the author! [Crying] How about four thousand a day? [Grieved]

Author, I think you should not blindly imitate the full-time author, but should add your own story. That's what makes it look good, isn't it? I originally gave 5⭐, but I can only give 4⭐

At first glance, I feel that the system is a bit like a full-time mage. Work hard to update it.

I looked at it and suddenly it disappeared.

There are full-time shadows but not many. I don't know how to write about it later. It feels good and fresh. I hope to continue writing.

It's just that the senior's position is a bit awkward, I feel like it's better to replace him with a senior

Good looking five stars, come on

If I can maintain the standard, I can score 9.0 In 🍅. I can only say that it's okay, but not exciting enough. Let's not talk about the same settings. More importantly, there is nothing new to see. I can see it, okay.

Not bad, the plot is pretty good

I think it's okay, give it four stars.

4 Stars first. . Not bad. . There are still relatively few people writing about the water system. . . . . You can continue not to enter the main plot, and you can participate in it from another angle. . . . Or not involved at all

The thinking is clear and the writing is wonderful. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Full-time mage fans sincerely recommend it. It combines the mage and the author's own ideas to tell the story of the new mage.

Although the author doesn't have much money, it's your fault if you stop updating, right?

It looks good. The more you look at it, the better it looks. Come on!

Very nice looking

It feels good-looking

It's so beautiful. Come on, keep at it✊

I thought the time change was a bit fast, but everything else was great.

I like it very much, it's not a stupid article

When will the heroine appear?