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It's so well written, and I really witnessed what it means to give you a perfect score, not because you got a perfect score, but because there is only a perfect score. Regarding the character of Severus, I have read too many fanfics and many analyses, but only this one has won my heart. The fanfic itself is derived from the original work. I have thought about what kind of ending is truly suitable for Severus. Personally speaking, I believe that many people who read the novel with him as the protagonist hope to change the ending of him running to death like me, but later I changed my mind. The greatest tragedy of this character, the most regrettable thing about this character, is his final death. The ending Rowling arranged for him was very reasonable. He is a very complex person, a double agent, who usually treats others with a cold face, but there is an unspeakable tenderness under his hard shell. His childhood destined him to be bad at expressing his emotions. His father, mother, including Lily, no one can say that they love him as much as life. He He is a person who can be said to be very lacking in love. This can be seen from the fact that although he hates Muggles, Lily is the first friend in the world who treats him sincerely. He cherishes her very much. It can be seen that he needs someone to love him with his life. When Christine appears, it can only be Christine. She is the girl who belongs to him alone. To be honest, only a love like Christine can make him sink, and only a character like Christine can make him dare to sink. In fact, both people's views on love are a bit morbid, and only by getting closer to each other can they heal each other. At the end of the story, when Silver walked away alone with the glued photo, it can be said to be the ultimate point. There is no better, more reasonable and touching ending than this. Why do I like this book? In addition to its language, contradictory settings, etc., The most important thing is that the characters in the book are very real, just like if there are really such people in Harry Potter, such things really happen. It is very close to the original characters, including every plot, every foreshadowing, and emotional transitions. Everything is natural and unobtrusive. This is really hard to see in fan fiction. It makes people feel a strong sense of BE and makes you feel a little sad after a long time, but you will not do anything because of it, because everything is really the way it should be. This is the second time I clicked in after reading this book. I burst into tears when I saw I Love You Three Thousand Times.

Ahhhh the author! I was really furious! Why are so few people watching? ! ! I feel that the author was born in the wrong era. I feel like I was watching Big Boss on Tieba. The writing has the charm of Edgar Allan Poe, which is very different from today's online reading habits. Because I really don't want the pearl to be covered in dust, so I have a few suggestions: 1. Multiple segments. This can remind readers to focus on dialogue and lower the reading threshold; at the same time, when viewed on a mobile phone, the rhythm of line spacing will be better. 2. Each chapter title and content of the author are echoed, but I personally feel that splitting the chapters into (1) (2) (3) will be more suitable for the current online reading habits. 3. Recommend more books. The aroma of wine is also afraid of the deep alley! Don't be shy because Wang Po sells melons and boasts about herself! Finally, the author's literary talent is outstanding, his thinking is clear, and his personal style is obvious. I am not trying to find fault with it. I, Su Zundu Zundu, want to use a little caution to allow more people to read this book. After all, the author not only wants to express his own emotions when writing a book, but also wants readers to explore the character's heart❤ (ɔˆз(ˆ⌣ˆc)

It gives me the feeling of a primary school student who mistakenly entered college and cried [crying] How to understand love is an important lesson in life. The author's writing style is truly beautiful. Let's redeem our souls in this madness and brokenness!

The author is really awesome, and his writing style is simply amazing. The content of fifty chapters is condensed into twenty-five chapters. The plot is very compact, and there are many small details with long meaning. The first three chapters are not easy to read, but the more you read from the fourth chapter, the more interesting it becomes. The heroine's disguise and Snape's psychological pull are really super interesting! (Of course, you need to taste it carefully. As it is written in the introduction, this book is only good after you read it. There are many details that you need to dig deeply by yourself, and there is a certain reading threshold.)

This is a very, very worth reading book. From the beginning to the end, the writing style is very wonderful, especially the heroine. It is really touching to keep killing people for Sif, but I am really sad at the end. The ending is the last thing I want to read. , But this is their destined ending. Two people who are already in darkness, even if they get a moment of light, will still sink into the abyss in the end. The biggest villain in this book is Voldemort, no one else😭😭😭When I saw the part of the suit without the picture of the heroine, I really cried. They all love each other deeply, but in the end, Sif didn't even think about it.

After reading it, I still can't get out of it. Whether it's the close relationship between the two at the beginning, the estrangement and awkwardness when the suspicions arise, and the bloody love at the end, every stage is very interesting to read. My wife's writing style is simply amazing. She should be considered the best in Tomato... The only shortcoming is that the first three chapters are not easy to read, but now it seems that it is full of details and foreshadowing, and it is still very good!

The plot of the story is gripping, full of suspense and surprises. The themes of love and crime are intertwined, revealing the complexity of human nature. Two people in darkness embrace each other and long for the light, but in the end they fail to escape the trick of fate. Their love is like a flower blooming in the dark, beautiful but with endless sadness and regret. Snape and Christine, they comforted each other in the dark, but they were never able to truly express their deepest love. Severus may not have understood his true feelings until the end, but the unspoken "I love you" has become an eternal regret. When he said "you are a monster", could he have predicted that this would become his lifelong regret? What should have been lilies on the table were replaced by yellow roses, which seemed to hint at his undeclared love. However, just like the characteristics of Slytherins, they are best at missing their lovers. Their fate has been full of ups and downs and helplessness from the beginning. The dark background and complex emotional entanglements seem to have already destined them to not have a happy ending.

It's actually hard to describe how I feel about this article… The author's writing style cannot be ignored, it is very beautiful. At the beginning, I just continued reading simply because of this beauty. When I started to be held in more than ten chapters, it was a wonderful feeling. Every foreshadowing and every move amazed me. It is a kind of string composed of words that wraps around the heart, suddenly tightens when it is not prepared, and the sadness comes unexpectedly😞. Every emotional line between Christine and Sev was written very delicately by the author (I think so) In fact, I really hope that they can be together, but after thinking about what they have experienced and what they may experience in the future, this may be the best ending. This can be said to be the first Sifu fanfic I have read. It is really amazing and beautiful, but it is a bit brain-consuming. Once again, I admire the author's writing style and plot. It is a very good book👀! ! !

The be aesthetics of this article are really beautiful. In just 25 chapters, each link is very vivid and vivid. Some of the careless places are filled with details! The sentences written by the author are particularly gorgeous and beautiful, and it is really hard to put down! ! !

This should be the second time I've rated it since I started using Tomato. The author's writing style is very shocking to me, and the romance between the lines is touching. The storyline may not be engaging enough at first but it will be memorable after reading it. I was impressed by the bland and sad ending. Tip was underlining like crazy when reading this article The songs recommended by the author of tips2 are also nice and very atmospheric (if I am not mistaken)

Very nice to look at. He has the charm of Western classics. Many Harry Potter fans are generally written from a Chinese perspective. And this book is written entirely in accordance with the writing style of Western classics. I have to say, it looks good. The plot does not drag on, and there are no missing lyrics. The author is suitable for writing Western masterpieces.

My wife's writing is magnificent, warm, powerful, and has a unique sense of desolation and depth, which makes people feel as if they are reading European works in the Middle Ages. The plot of the story is compact and the writing pace is very fast. It slowly reveals the truth among the true and false, and eloquently explains the complexity of human nature. The author depicts the image of Christine in a delicate way: she is paranoid, crazy, possessive and pathological, and jealousy is her original sin. She is the gorgeous Belladonna, she is Venus under the Holy Light, and she is also the son of Satan who tramples on the cross. She is charming and dangerous. But what is undeniable is her love for Sif. She could have destroyed her "beloved thing" like Salome, but she carefully arranged a bouquet of lilies. And will her Sif know that the bouquet of yellow roses that he didn't have time to replace and the unspoken love will become his lifelong regret? They rely on each other in the darkness and mud, but they can only watch helplessly as the cracks spread and trust disappears. Perhaps this deformed, devilish love was destined not to be perfect from the beginning. If there is an afterlife, they will love each other three thousand times.

Except for the long paragraphs, it's hard to read on a mobile phone. The writing style is very novel. It feels like reading a British medieval article. It's retro, gorgeous and dark, and the plot is pretty good. It's just a bit of a test on reading ability. Sure enough, be is the norm, but life is too real. I still like to find he in novels. The characters are full-bodied. I really feel like I can't love you when I write it. I will cry to death. I still like he sweet [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

It's very interesting. The author's writing style and setting are very enjoyable. This should be the best ending between the two of them. However, there are a few points that need to be cleared up (the clearing involves spoilers): ① In the article, Voldemort likes Snape and there are some descriptions. . Yes father and daughter like the same person. . ②The heroine has a very low sense of morality and her only affection is given to Snape. Many good and bad people were killed. ③The early stage of the article is too brain-burning and feels like an English classic. ④Sijiao personally thinks it is OOC: ⒈In the later part of the article, Sijiao's pure sense of morality is gone. In the original work, it is for the sake of righteousness. ⒉ Sri Lanka also has a strong tendency towards violence. He kills the heroine once at the beginning and also beats the heroine later (although the heroine is not a good person) ⒊After the heroine killed Lily, she also used this incident to stimulate the Sri Lankan teacher, bullied and tortured her classmates, killed countless good people, and won over the old Death Eaters to kill people. Under this situation, the Sri Lankan teacher fell in love with the heroine and was willing to take the blame for the heroine. . Uh, hard to say ⑤ Comments on the Sili party and the Fus party and the demons dancing wildly. Open with caution! Overall, I can give 9.5 Points for the writing style and setting. It is very fresh. But everyone has their own preferences for other radish greens. My acceptance ability is very acceptable. If there are readers who do not like bloody scenes and some descriptions of murders (similar to The Ten Deadly Sins and Forensic Doctor Qin Ming, which are unacceptable), read carefully. Final score: 7.8~8.3 Thank you very much to my wife for being the food maker (this comment is a warning and not a lightning protection. I like the setting of this article very much and will read it more🥺🥺)

(Sunshine and healthy running) (Hurdle) (Sunshine and healthy running) (Three-point pitch) (Colorful radio gymnastics) (Twisting the hula hoop) (Three-point pitch into the frame) (Dancing) (Floating in the wind) (Confidence) (Happiness) (Bathing in the sun) (Sprinting) (Comfortable) (Not dizzy) (Chest No discomfort in the mouth) (Invigorated) (Increased appetite) (Light on the feet) (Gentle) (Heart-warming) (Tranquil) (Loving life) (Breeze coming) (Excited) (Working hard) (Strengthening the body) (Heat flow surging in the body) (Go to the house to reveal the tiles) (Dancing) (Out of the Milky Way) (Energy) I'll give you some funny comfort to comfort you [laughing evilly]

This is the first book I want to read twice. It's really, really good. "If there is an afterlife, he will love her three thousand times..." (Woooooooooooooo I don't know what to say, but show me everything!!!) (A little thought: Is it possible to have a book group in Da Da?) (Also, I want to be the biggest fan!!!!*▽*)

The writing is very good, and the writing is very touching. It is a bloody and tragic story. . . It's a difficult subject matter to watch... It makes me sad to watch it. Christine is undeniably a lunatic, but it just so happens that I like to watch it like this. It makes me sad to watch it. . At first, I thought it was about family ties, because I didn't expect that the heroine was five years old at the beginning.

Bright and corrupt yellow roses, public but hidden love I love this book so much. Crazy love with some restraint, so cool A moment of light in the darkness will eventually pass us by, if there is In the next life, I hope two people can be happy

QAQ Christine really loves Severus. They love each other equally, but they were destined to be impossible from the very beginning... The author's writing style is great! I really like that kind of real and irreversible be, the broken lovers who can't embrace each other in the end, the uncontrollable madness and the deep-rooted love. What can I do to embrace you?

It's very interesting. Let's look at this fanfic from another perspective. It's very interesting. It's so interesting. This article is about the character of the heroine and the author's writing style. It is very good. At the end, there are letters and the so-called broken box photos that make me want to read it. I almost read this book. It is a bit too short. However, because the author's superb writing style is so short, it can also perfectly interpret the relationship between the heroine and Severus.

I love you 3000. The front part is a bit brain-burning, but when you see the back part, it all connects together. The author is so awesome! The ending was so good that I cried. I had a headache after reading it at 1:23 Beijing time [crying] [crying]

Very novel. This is the most novel HP article I have ever read. I just like to read he However, this article has received a very high response from readers. This should be the third article I try to write with a be ending. I am a person who is deeply touched by the plot. The first two be endings made me burst into tears, but I didn't cry in this one. I don't think the writing is bad. On the contrary, this feeling is really good. It's strange, because Dada's novel is very unique, and I was easily attracted to it. When it came to the scene where the heroine died, my heart was very, very painful, but I just couldn't cry. When Severus was saved in the end, I really felt very sad. Dada's article may have made me understand that maybe the ultimate sadness is not crying. But a silent heartache Finally, I am very grateful to the teacher for writing this work. It is really super super super beautiful ٩(๑^o^๑)۶

I didn't read the front, but looked at the last few. Holy shit, the writing is really awesome because it's so sad. I didn't dare to read it. I didn't dare to read it. The author is very good at writing and has a very rich imagination. It's very awesome. I only have two words. Awesome reminds me of a short story about Cedric that I read before. , But his transliteration is he. Your heroine's soul is gone. It's so sad if I go [cry][cry][cry][cry]

It's very interesting. It feels a bit like British detective novels to me. Maybe the author also reads British novels. An extreme and crazy love. If there really is an afterlife, I hope that Christine and Severus can always be loved, feel love, and have the ability to love and create...

Not bad at all, super sweet, highly recommended to watch

I cried through the last few chapters. Some of the logic in the middle was not clear, but it did not affect my tears at the end. Professor, someone really loves you, someone really loves you. I have read so many fanfics, and the authors all want to give you a good ending. There is someone in their heart who has you. Even if this article is be at the end, but the author It's better to let Si Jiao live. People who love you want you to live or be loved. Although there are some points in this book that I don't like, I still finished reading it. The author's writing style is very good. I cried. This is the first time I read Si Jiao be [crying] [crying]. There are too many regrets in the original book. In reality, there are really many people who love you Si Jiao

Super super super super super super super super super... Super good-looking, the author's writing is super good, the descriptions are very delicate, and there are so many foreshadowings. In fact, the ending of the two of them was doomed from the beginning, so let's blow it!

It's super good-looking, and the author's writing style is very good. Both the atmosphere and the plot are very good. I can't believe there are only 25 chapters, but the content of these 25 chapters crushes a lot. It is not like other works. It gives me the feeling that it is full of regrets, but this regret is actually the best side. It's a bit like red wine, a little astringent but with endless aftertaste. You can't help but read it again and again, constantly looking for the foreshadowing that the author has laid, and constantly being fascinated by it.

It's a good book that needs to be read with your brain. I've read a lot of Harry Potter fanfiction, and this one stands out. Although it's short, it's complete and the content is not watery at all.

The taste of "Hannibal" is too strong. It makes me feel funny when I watch it. The cup cup comes to mind. If you haven't watched "Hannibal", the experience should be better. The author's writing style is very good, but I personally feel that there are too many descriptive contents like scenery. It is a bit too much and will make me tired, but overall it is still very good.