Very Detailed Cultivation

It's interesting. I'll give it five stars. After all, the rating is really "touching". I hope the author can stick to writing it until the end. Let's talk about the shortcomings first. The first volume is really average... [Laughing awkwardly] The language is rough and the characters are not very well established. This is probably how many book lovers were persuaded to quit. The beginning is really no different from the traditional cultivation of immortality [laughing awkwardly]. With the introduction, it is a bit more complete. It feels like trying to sell something like a sheep's head [laughing awkwardly]... The author has ideas, but the writing is not strong enough. If the first volume can be carefully polished, the book will not have such a low rating [smile], or it can be more concise... After all, there is no fan base, and it will be too slow to warm up in the early stage and easy to cool down. Kudos to the author for his perseverance. [Like] Until some new things appeared in Chapter 20, it started to feel a bit like the so-called "enlightening the Tao and cultivating immortality", and gradually getting better? When it comes to subverting tradition... There is a long way to go. After all, there are so many articles on cultivating immortals, and many things have been written by predecessors. Then... Raise the book. If this book can get closer to 9 points, I will probably come back. See you again if we are destined. Come on, author

Except for the name of the realm, a completely different system of practice The fighting strength has not collapsed The further back she goes, the more flavorful she becomes, just like she is so attractive This is the most reasonable training system in my opinion Indeed, as the author said, it becomes more and more special after 100 chapters (•̀ᴗ•́)و̑̑ It's not the special kind where the setting changes a lot, but the special kind where the worldview becomes more and more complete. It doesn't feel like it's about evil for the sake of evil, it feels like it's a higher level than the previous stories about mortals cultivating immortality.

It may subvert your understanding of cultivation! This is one of the best novels I have ever read. The more I watch, the more exciting it becomes, and the more I watch, the more I get excited. The whole book is unique for understanding Taoism and cultivating immortality. It was a bit unremarkable in the early stage, but it turned out to be for a reason. Later on, the protagonist gradually revealed his identity. If this author had written this book earlier, why would there be other novels? After reading this book, I read other books, which were completely bland and without any meaning. Come on, author, this book will definitely be a masterpiece in the future.

This novel has a slow pace and a plain plot, but it truly shows the protagonist's journey of slowly becoming stronger. Although there are some flaws in the plot, the flaws are not concealed. I hope it can bring a different experience of cultivating immortals. Great support, author [Like]

The content is unique and exciting.

The author has his own ideas, which are worth reading.

It's good to watch, good to watch, good to watch, good to watch, good to watch, it's dull in the early stage, suitable for people who can withstand loneliness and temper, and then it gradually becomes not dull but full of charm, and then I don't know how it will be until I watch it. This book also tries its best to highlight the differences from other books. It does not have those tired routines, so it is worth reading. It's a pity that the audience is a bit small, otherwise there shouldn't be no traffic

Why can't the person who raised the protagonist for so long call him daddy, but he calls his brother's parents very naturally and seems closer to him? It's pretty good, support it with five-star reviews [I understand]

It's worth a look to change the way you think about cultivating immortality.

The writing is good, very detailed, and engaging. It's not the kind of text that can be read at a glance.

The writing is very good, especially how to improve foundation building. The method is the road, the road is the direction and the end. It is very enlightening and has a huge impact on my work. Thank you to the author.

Tell the truth, a different fairy tale

Not bad, at least it can be beaten in Tomato

I have read novels for more than ten years, but in recent years it has been difficult for me to persist in reading them. I have read more than twenty chapters of this book, and I feel pretty good about it so far. It feels like it will be popular, author, come on!

The author writes very well, very novel and unconventional

The novel is like a cup of warm tea. It is slightly cold and a little bitter in the mouth. After savoring it carefully, it is slightly sweet. The tea leaves a lingering fragrance in the mouth. It has been brewing for a while, but I don't know why the novel's rating is so low. It stands to reason that although the writing is not good, the content is very good. Take the content of sentimental people and ruthless people in the book as an example. A ruthless person may not be truly ruthless, and a sentimental person may not be truly sentimental. I hope the author can keep writing, come on

It is not consistent with the public. I hope the author will work hard. Readers are looking forward to it!

Logical, five stars.

The content is well written, it is easy to read, and the taste is very light. It is suitable for a drink after reading a cookie-cutter book.

It's well written, clearly organized, and makes you want to read more.

The novel is very good. Listening to this novel gave me the same feeling as when I first listened to Xiu Sheng's novel. What's even better is that the protagonist has a good outlook on life and good character. The purpose of cultivating immortality is to change this cruel world. We want justice for the weak. The strong influence the stronger to wield the sword.

A different article on cultivating immortality, very interesting

The book is good and very interesting

Not bad, bookworms can take a look

Good-looking, different story of cultivating immortals

Great, great, great

Although the writing is a bit rough, it is generally good

A very detailed and detailed cultivation novel. It's great.

Very good, I recommend everyone to take a look

Still relatively objective.