Rebirth**********

Give yourself a five star! This is my first time writing a novel. Please point out the bad points. I will read all the main reviews. In addition, if you have any characters you want to add, you can post your name, cultivation level, power, age, etc. In the main review. The more detailed the better, and I will adopt it. [Working on draft]

This young master thinks it's good, what does Tai Tai think? [Laughing evilly]

As a new author, the writing is very good. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

It's very well written, I hope the author will continue to do so.

It's not bad. I suggest the author develop his own clan properly. I'm a bit tired of watching the development of the Qi family all the time [Like] [Like]

There is nothing wrong with the general plot outline, and there is nothing too boring. When the protagonist suddenly has the ability to protect himself, the family will develop steadily and continuously. I hope the protagonist will have a baby soon, so that he can truly have a foothold...

Keep up the good work and create brilliance

Let's see how an eagle leads his family from a small place to become invincible all over the world.

Very good and well written. Judging from the character of the protagonist, it is the same as ordinary fantasy novels, but the content is very exciting and the plot is compact and reasonable. It is a good book to recommend.

I give you five stars to encourage you, but I don't think the score will be very high. The plot is too anxious.

A very good novel about the different world of cultivating immortals. Highly recommended.

The iron-feathered eagle is not bad either [laughs crookedly]

Good-looking, good-looking, good

It looks good, come on, author

What you wrote, author, is okay. I think it's quite interesting.

It's okay. I hope the author can improve the golden eagle clan more.

Come on, author, I still think highly of you.

You can keep writing, five stars for you

Encourage writers to write carefully.

I have been paying attention, because there are too few chapters, so I am keeping it up. Come on, author, don't give up.

The pace is too fast. It's like building a foundation for free. The system is so powerful. It's a great read.