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It's super good-looking, really exciting. It has the Chinese martial arts that I like, and the love between the male and female protagonists. Although they can't be together now, the male protagonist, the male protagonist, the male protagonist will definitely come back. All the aristocratic families want to live in vain!

Such a good book shouldn't have such a low rating. If you want to read more, you should comment more and let the author comment more.

There was a hook in the early stages of this novel, but soon after arriving, it was discovered that this hook was a trap. Just like that sentence, the gift of fate has already been secretly marked with a price! The pig's feet in the back all depend on the author's super understanding, and the practice is simply awesome plus. Of course, if you don't have this understanding, you can't make pig's feet [face covering]. It is also said in the novel that the human race is the most powerful race in spiritual practice, and the pig's feet are the most powerful among the human race. This is the first novel I read on Tomato without skipping a beat. It's much better than those crappy books with lots of nonsense and typos. It's quite interesting. There are a lot of passages about family life interspersed in it, which is quite good. Just like in it, the Taoist mirror and the Taoist mirror are broken, and the space is broken with a slap, and you still have to eat. If this were the case in other novels, it would have been done long ago. What remains unchanged is that many women like strong men, which is worth complaining about. But it doesn't matter. Some people like it and some don't. It doesn't matter. Tomato can be said to be a pile of bad books, but this one is outstanding. I think it is even better than The God of Destruction. [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

I have to say that the author has a great imagination. He has mechas from the stars and the sea, as well as ancient Chinese martial arts, using martial arts to enter Taoism, and the golden elixir of martial arts. I really like this novel by the author, and I hope you can continue to work on it💪It will become more and more exciting.

Is it a novel? There's no need to be too picky. It's fine if it's not a very sharp one. Personally, I think this book is very well written. It's very comfortable to read and there's nothing outrageous. All in all, it's very good [Love]

Author, great. You can indeed arrange a system for the protagonist. Help the protagonist improve quickly. What you write is more relaxed, and we feel more comfortable when we read it.

I have read so many books, and this is the only one that can be said to have made me feel emotionally ups and downs. The writing is concise and without nonsense, and every piece of content is closely related. I skipped a few times in the middle, but I found that I had a half-understood feeling after reading it, so I went back and read it slowly. It is really great! The author must work hard to keep reading and not to end it!

The torture-type articles in ancient novels can be regarded as the fate of the protagonist. He has high understanding, quick cultivation, and walks out on his own cultivation path. Then he repeatedly jumps in the stage of being killed and then resurrected. The earth chapter is about the protagonist's mother being very powerful. Then throughout the whole book, only the protagonist's father is the real winner. What is the protagonist's cultivation level? His father will soon be defeated. I caught up with Shi, and the protagonist died three times, probably, once when he was possessed by a demon, and once when Bendao died together for the last time. What about the protagonist's behavior? The protagonist's character in ancient times, and later on, he started to blame other people. It was the kind of preaching, hoping that others would be like him, reckless, reckless and provocative, and then said that this is called courage to be direct [smile][smile]

The book begins with Gao Wu as the starting point to attract readers' interest in reading. The Lord of the Rings plays a transitional role in leading to the Dao Realm. Later, the construction is centered on the human race. The description of the characters in the book is delicate and exquisite, allowing people to vividly see the good and evil of human nature. There are many emotional dramas in the book, which is in line with the theme of the novel. At the end of the article, the protagonist falls in order to protect his family, the Dao world and even the entire human race. It deepens the level of the whole book. The whole book is a republican society of modern technology + ancient divine texts. It is a model of modern novels. The whole book is top-notch in terms of writing ideas, writing style, and quality.

I have been a bookworm for more than ten years. I have a good worldview and a very innovative cultivation system, which makes me very appetizing. It tells the author's growth path from beginning to end, reflects the real mental state from boyhood to youth to middle age and then to old age, and tells the real life of people around him through different characters. It's really good, and it's a rare book that doesn't have a bad ending and leaves you with endless aftertaste after reading it. I hope this book becomes popular and can be shared with more readers. I rarely write book reviews. I hope the author can continue his work and reach a higher level. Writing a book is not difficult, but it is rare to write a good book. You can also learn more from the creative path of the great master Platinum Gold to understand it.

It's very good. Keep writing~ I hope it won't be unfinished. There are still many people who like your work. Just write according to your own ideas. A piece of work cannot be liked by everyone. After all, nothing is perfect in the world.

A really good read, without a time-travel system (which is fine). The article is cool and not brainless. The protagonist's growth process is clear, the article is strong, and the author has his own understanding of Chinese martial arts (like it). Overall, it is a rare masterpiece of Chinese martial arts.

So pretty! ! ! ! ! ٩(๑ᵒ̴̶̷͈᷄ᗨᵒ̴̶̷͈᷅)وGreat

Finished reading! The author has a good grasp of the good and evil of human nature, the plot does not have any major poisonous points, and it is basically not jumpy. The writing is also strong enough, but the rating is too low. Personally, it should be at least 9.5 Or above!

I like big books very much The characters are created very well flesh and blood It's just that the pace of the later stages was a bit too fast. I hope the author can help I still want to be as serious about shaping my character as I was at the beginning. The most important thing in the end is not to end it! Don't mess up! Don't mess up! Say important things three times

The author combines mecha and traditional ancient martial arts, which is very creative! Moreover, the author should have a better understanding of traditional culture and have his own ideas. Love it! The character design of the protagonist is in line with my taste, the progress is also very smooth, and the overall image is definitely not broken, great! Give it five stars!

The plot and specific ideas are very good, but the emotional scene... Is really hard to describe. I feel like there are no or less emotional scenes, and it should be a 9 if it's more direct. The above are all personal opinions.

It's possible that the plot is relatively novel and the writing style is okay, but I still have to complain that the emotional scenes in the first 50 chapters were too painful to watch, but the writing in the following chapters was so good that it makes people wonder if they were written by the same person. I felt that the emotional scenes in the following chapters were well written and the plot was very comfortable to watch.

It's a very good book. Although the emotional line is a bit rough, it's still quite delicate and it's a bit unfinished at the end. The articles are mainly about combat, and there is less space for the wives, especially Blue Star's eldest wife and second wife, I can't get enough~

It's good-looking. In the early stage, it is fascinating with cancer, in the middle stage, super power turns into fantasy, and in the later stage, fantasy and myth are added. The ending is acceptable. Looking forward to the extra story (which can explain the ending of the protagonist from other perspectives) [code live] [code live] [code live]

To be honest, it's really good-looking, and the imagination is also unusually big. Although the front may be a little bit poisonous, but when you see the back, you will know that it is all for the sake of the front. The author hastened to update it and I can't get enough of it! !

The concept of the book is okay. In the end, the protagonist and the saint die together, which echoes the author's desire for the saint to be immortal and the thieves not to stop. However, the saint refers to moral standards, and society cannot operate without standards. Because of human nature, I don't like the author's misuse of ancient Chinese sages and some cultural symbols. These are the cultural foundation and have been integrated into the blood of the nation. The country and society are built on culture.

To be honest, it's still possible. Some places are handled rather abruptly, such as the part where the problem of the aristocratic family was introduced and the pig's feet entered the chaotic star. There is also the episode about Chaos Star being destroyed. It can also be made smoother. It's the first time I've seen this Chinese martial arts written so well, and I feel pretty good about it. The argumentation process of various martial arts is also good and opens up a lot of imagination. Come on.

It's very interesting to read, the plot line is very clear, and the content is very high-quality, which satisfies the appetite of an old bookworm like me. I hope the author can polish it well, mainly focusing on quality, and I hope it can have a perfect ending.

I'm almost at chapter 200 so far, and it's pretty good so far. The protagonist is a growth stream, and the various plots are enjoyable to listen to. Overall, it's over 90% of the book. I recommend everyone to give it a listen.

This article contains verses from traditional Chinese culture, which shows that the author has written the article with great care; the content is fresh and the world view is great; the martial arts content described in it is immersive; the protagonist is decisive in killing, and there are descriptions of family, teacher, and friendship; the plot is not a brainless article, the content is ups and downs, there are foreshadowings, foreshadowing, and inner descriptions of other characters. The important thing is that the protagonist is not the only one practicing martial arts. The above is my review after reading it, please don't criticize if you don't like it. Everyone, may your martial arts be prosperous!

Yes, the protagonist is selected by the Lord of the Rings, learns martial arts after failing to undergo cancer, and is then used by a family to discover the truth about the family. After the truth about cancer, he overthrows the family, breaks into the universe, and pursues the truth of the universe. Generally speaking, there is nothing toxic, the emotional scenes are also very real, and the protagonist can also see his growth, strength, emotion, and character growth.

The characters are perfectly drawn, and there is no brainless villain. Although the protagonist is not always smooth sailing, he does not deliberately suppress the protagonist. The ending is more in line with my ideas. I feel that the score should be at least 9.5 Or above.

Very good-looking, not brainless, the villain has a brain, what is written in the front will echo what is written in the back, the author will fill in the pitfalls, there is no knife, the heroine's words are okay, and there are emotional scenes.

Wow wow wow, he's so handsome, he's so sexy I now silently recite Qingxin Jue every day, close my eyes and feel my breathing It's really useful, brothers, and Xiaoliuzi is so handsome.