Star Dome************

Let me know if you have any opinions. The author is more biased towards the original work. The character's personality will not change even if the details are kept in mind. Hope someone can point out some of my mistakes, it will help me a lot!

Marry a single person? In fact, I quite like the CP of Kafka and Himeko, as well as Cocolia and Bunya, the strong mother and her weak daughter.

I saw that the amnesia part started to tighten up. Generally speaking, amnesia is a big poisonous point. The author should take good care of it. After all, Cocolia is really big (referring to age) It hurts me to death, I'm so frustrated

I hope I don't regain my memory. I feel like Cocolia is cute like a child.

Wow, this makes me so angry. I hope the author will let Cocolia take action and kill those people for protecting her companions.

After reading it for so long, I am ready to quit. After all, the most taboo thing about writing novels is that the protagonist does not have a strong presence. Generally, the protagonist should not be allowed to have more than two chapters to give readers a low impression. If the author didn't say that this book has a protagonist but showed me a story from God's perspective, I could still reluctantly accept it. Of course, I don't mean to blame the author here, I just express my own thoughts. If there are people who like to read the story directly described in the third person (a simple understanding is that the protagonist has a low sense of existence, like the Bone King), this book is still recommended. The author's fine brushwork is still better than mine, so work hard! I'll give it four stars here! (The above are just my feelings when I read that Jianmu was destroyed, and do not represent the subsequent plot)

The first chapter of Belogeffen is too short and the later part is very long, which makes it feel a bit fragmented. The two personalities of Cocolia are a bit like Yuri and V. The Cocolia that has just traveled through the world will not come back until they are reunited later, just like Vergil. At that time, the protagonist should have strengthened his current strength. I personally hope that the original personality will return soon. I feel a little uncomfortable looking at these two personalities now. This is like purely trying to stuff the protagonist into the train, but now the purpose has been achieved and the personalities can almost be integrated. As for the future, I hope that the author can control the rhythm. The plot of Mihuyou is still not very clear at the moment. The author can open more private settings, which is fine. If nothing happens, it will be okay to post more on a daily basis. Finally, I hope the author will continue to work hard and not be a tj. I hope it is 100. I personally want to see Kokolia and Siluwa posted. Other female characters are also fine as long as they are not married. Come on, author. [Laughing]

Yes, other railway fan fiction just mindlessly repeats the content of the original work. One chapter wishes it were all the original content, so that they don't have to use their brains. The author doesn't say how good the writing is, as long as it is original.

May the plundering beasts love you and protect you, and grant you the freedom of "empty dreams" May the feathers of Du Chen love and protect his body and grant him the tenacity of "floating life" May the scroll of the painted world bless him with love and grant him the innocence of "stars" May the world-devouring snake love and protect his body and grant him the "infinite" desire May the Whistle of Dawn love him and grant him the will of "Rising Light" May the Inch-Breaking Blade love and protect him, and grant him the decisiveness of "a moment" May the eyes of good Dharma protect his body and grant him the wisdom of "God's Wisdom" May the love of evil calamity bless his body and grant him the sincerity of "violent destruction" May the Box of Foolish Plays love you and grant you the miracle of "Spiral" May the song of brilliance bless him and give him the brilliance of "gold" May the love of the deep sin bless his body and grant him the love of "precepts" May the Emberless Sword love him and grant him the ideal of "salvation" May the flawless people love you and bless you, and grant you the return of your "true self"

Yes, but I don't like Cocolia very much. After all, Cocolia is basically bound to the bad guy.

To be honest, I'm really looking forward to the scene where Cocolia and Big Duck meet after amnesia. I'm so excited when I think about it [Adoration]

Good-looking, very good-looking, ten or even nine out of ten

Very good, but the number of words is a bit short

I didn't expect Cocolia to become a cow. The author will update it as soon as possible [Thoughts] The heroine is so frustrated. In the past, the heroine turned into a fool, and in the later heroine, she turned into a cow. The writing was really good in the first part, but just average in the second part. I was very anxious to read it.

I hope the author can let the protagonist regain his memory

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Okay, great, come on! The protagonist's appearance rate in the early stage was not like that of the protagonist, and I didn't finish watching it in the later stage [face covering]

It's nice to read, but author, do you really dare to write it? Aren't you afraid that Lao Mi will be stabbed?

Aha believers are extremely sinful😡

Pretty good~ Come on, author~

It looks great, I hope the author will continue to work hard! (ฅ>ω<*ฅ)

It's very interesting, but the number of words is short.

Really beautiful

Not bad, but there are so few people.

Okay, okay, the author did a great job, I would not give it too much full marks, even a novice can understand it.

The writing is really good, and it's not the kind of mindless and cool writing. Come on, author!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking