Fumino: I Want to Hit the He Line

I think the book is very good, but the structure is complicated or incomplete, and the core is missing. Although there are some gaps in the book, it is still not complete. The character design is very well prepared, it seems silent, but in retrospect it has an eerie feeling. The style is very calm, but it also reveals weirdness at every turn. Is there an explosion that I'm looking forward to? It feels new to me. I have to say that if you don't think too much, this book must be great! I am looking forward to the author's big update and the subsequent plot. But if you don't understand it, I suggest you read it a second time. It feels very bitter.

Good book📚The whole article is detailed and not boring. Now it seems that there is indeed some strong promotion of Zai Chu at the beginning without cp, but it is only the beginning without ambiguity. I don't know what will happen next, but I only offer gentle help to others. The character of the protagonist is well developed and has the flavor of the fourth natural disaster, but it is not that crazy. He does things in a systematic way and does not act randomly. The protagonist also has a bit of madness without losing his tenderness. The theme of the article is clear and innovative, without embarrassing plots, and the image of the protagonist is created from various places. So far this is a good book. The beginning is quite appetizing and the middle part is not bad either. But too little. None of them are written completely. The story framework is just a front-end. The center of the story is also somewhat lacking. The protagonist's image is not fully developed. There are also some small messes in the worldview, like fragments, one piece and another, which are very interesting and should be sorted out after writing, and it will become a highlight. The relationship is somewhat foreshadowed, but not made up. I haven't updated it for a long time and I should finish it for them, right? [Smile][angry]. Comprehensive comics. Very well written. Keep it up like this. It would have been a great book if it hadn't collapsed. I hope to update soon [laughs] and stop being a dove.

Good, good, good

Super pretty! But why no one read Ꙩ⌵Ꙩ? The writing is very good and I cried while watching it (maybe because I have tear incontinence?). Don't give up on the article, big brother!

Come on, don't give up! ! ! Very well written! ! !

Your writing style is really good, please write quickly [sending my heart][sending my heart][crying][crying][crying]

It feels really good-looking (๑•.•๑) And it suits my taste.

It's very beautiful, cheers [love]

I really like it. Please, the author, please don't cut off the roots.

It's so beautiful. I like Luo very much. The author, please update it! [Cry]

The setting is super interesting, it looks great, I love watching it!

I saw in other books that someone urged me to add more updates. It's really beautiful, but why is there only so much π_π