Elf: Star Bond Journey

It's great, I hope the author can keep it going for 150 chapters. I'm too lazy to say anything about praise, so I just suggest it. 1. The Pokémon under the protagonist can evolve as much as possible. Failure to evolve will inevitably make people think that they are actually weak. Failure to evolve will make it difficult to explain the subsequent plot. 2. The length of "Traveling with Xiaozhi and his friends" can be increased, and the relevant plot effects will be obviously better. 3. Don't use romantic content, as it may not be effective and may collapse easily. In addition, even if there is one, it cannot be female. Silver is fine, but it is best not to be female. (Readers who can give suggestions to the author about male-female romances will run away. Asking is Internet misogyny. Bi-man has short-term feelings for it, but it will fade away, and he will run away when he gets bored while reading.) 4. The problem of setting is not only the reader's reading but also the author's writing. The character setting is too awesome (beyond the original protagonist) and the character setting is too high (life experience leads to the highest-level character). Silver is Omu's son. Not only is it difficult for the author to write the following plot, but readers can't feel much emotion either. I don't want to explain it in depth here, just reply if you want to hear it. 5. The problem of character arrangement. Generally, the protagonists are in groups of 1 to 2 people, regardless of gender and personality. In this book, a group of 3 people is the limit, but it also involves love. Yin and a certain girl (forgot her name) must never be together. I believe the author will not be so brainless. It is impossible to solve the problem of unrequited love that has been revealed and to fade away. Fans will not have one heroine in one area. You can try to change your thinking, such as letting a girl give up and "mistakenly" think of a pair of stars and silvers. There are many problems with this approach, but it is the best I can think of, as long as you don't face them openly. 6. Just a thought. Silver Crossdressing Stars are also acceptable, but they must be within 3 chapters. Can a Monarch be placed on the Pokémon behind the star? Although probably not. Oh, yes, the author and his team must not have mythical Pokémon. The last thing is the expectations of the work. Generally, if it doesn't collapse after 150 chapters, I'll be thankful to God. It's best not to let me have a cardiac arrest and realize it's about to collapse. Okay, I already know the beginning of Mewtwo's low-level performance and confusing plot. [Smile]

Wonderful, the protagonist star can take the route of fighting and coordinating equally. He can not only fight, but also be a musician or singer to participate in the gorgeous competition. I hope there will be more updates every day

I hope the author can keep Star and Silver going

Will Fomeloetta be included in the future? After all, the main character knows music!

It's very good. I thought it would be very abrupt to add the meaning after the Pokémon's cry, but it is the finishing touch in this book. The writing style is very comfortable and a little refreshing. But I want to ask one thing, doesn't the protagonist know Yin's life experience? He is obviously a Pokémon fan as well. By the way, is the protagonist's goal to become a Pokémon master or the strongest? If there is Chi Hong, he is the strongest. If the protagonist wants to have the strength to defeat Chi Hong, it will test the author's writing skills, otherwise he will be easily criticized.

Silver Star CP is too awesome! ! ! Let me knock! ! !

This is the first book that I praised as soon as I read Chapter 11. It's really well written. Good luck to the author! I think if it continues in the future, it should be classified as a sacred book in my heart.

Author, why did you stop updating? How can I live without you [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

It's very beautiful, author, come on! 🤩🤩

Although it is good in all aspects, there are still many areas that need to be filled in. Please give it a try.

Very good, it ranks high among Pokémon books. Good luck to the author.

Is the CP of losing the protagonist silver? If possible, please be silver

Four stars, the Pokémon are very well-characterized, but I don't really like traveling with Silver.

A very good book.

Let me give you five stars first. Come on, the author. It's so degenerate. It makes me feel really uncomfortable to see it...

It is better than most elf novels in Tomato. The disadvantage is that the narrative ability is poor and some descriptions are inappropriate.

Gorgeous strength is indispensable

The main character is male, I always thought he was female

I hope I can find Gala Gala soon

If you bring more Elf Masters with you as a research doctor, you will be more energetic. Anyway, if you have merit, you will get more gold. Just wait for you to bring a few more daily articles. How many more should you bring? Gardevoir hehe duck doesn't like myself

It's very interesting and the characters in the content are all interesting and unique. The connection and relationship between them is also very good, and the three views of the protagonist are also very good.

I enjoyed watching the first part, but I haven't read the second part yet. I'll give you a review after I finish watching the second part! After seeing page 237! My most intuitive evaluation of your work is that it is more innovative than ordinary Pokémon fan fiction, and the concepts expressed are also very good. That is, the physical abilities of the protagonist are also different from some fan fiction, and it is more innovative in comparison. The writing at the beginning is very good, and the foreshadowing at the end is also very good. I suggest the author to work hard and keep writing! And as I read and write, I got better and better, and it became more and more interesting! Anyway, I feel great now! Hope it doesn't end badly! It would be best to extend it to chapter 300! Here to encourage the author, come on! 👍👍👍👍

It's so beautiful, especially the author's portrayal of Pokémon. Each Pokémon has its own characteristics and ideas, rather than just following the trainer's instructions.

I'm confused as to whether the star is a girl or a boy.

Will the photographer come out?

Not bad, five stars for you

Looking forward to the next story

Interesting, so interesting [laughing evilly]

It's beautiful, good luck to the author (´∀｀)♡

I just want to know who the heroine is?