If You'd Told Me My Wife Was Here, I'd Have Rushed Right Over!

If you are a new reader, you may feel confused at the beginning, but trust me, this book will definitely be regarded as a source of food as you continue reading. The rhythm and writing details are very good, and some of the descriptions of the love line really moved me. At present, it seems to be a dual world and dual storyline. It's a reality, with a single female protagonist and a "paper man", which is very sweet. A "dream", a hidden boss, who doesn't know he is very powerful but others see him as powerful. Pretending is like the wind, always with me haha. Should the two worlds merge later or become one world? I want to see how Du Xi and Zhong Qingli will meet. The young girl who regards the protagonist as a god and wants to serve her but is still full of love will behave when she meets the male protagonist. I am looking forward to it. It can be seen that the author really wants to describe a big world. Therefore, there are many characters appearing in the front, and the world view is spread out slowly. This is probably why the front looks a bit chaotic. But the author should have a complete outline in hand. Come on, write it according to your own writing style. It will be a very good novel.

I wish all the boys: ✨Romantic and graceful✨ ✨Jade tree facing the wind, extraordinary bearing✨ ✨Cherish the fragrance and pity the jade, handsome without waves✨ ✨Gentle and elegant, white teeth and bright eyes✨ ✨Handsome and unrestrained, face like a crown of jade✨ ✨Excellent talent and extraordinary bearing✨ ✨Extraordinary appearance, rich and handsome✨ ✨Beautiful and dignified appearance✨ ✨Fresh and handsome, sword-shaped eyebrows and starry eyes✨ ✨Stick nose and thin lips, elegant and suave✨ ✨Easy and handsome, ancient carvings✨ ✨Beautiful and graceful, elegant and peaceful✨ ✨Looking into the fan and smiling, both talented and beautiful✨ ✨The jade tree stands out from the crowd in the wind✨ ✨Excellent appearance with talent✨ ✨Clear eyebrows, calm and elegant✨ ✨Light sweep of Emei, bright eyes and white teeth✨ ✨Excellent grace and immortal jade bones✨ ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ I wish all girls to live well and drink more hot water [Just kidding, don't hit me (dog head)]

Hmm... This book is the one with the smoothest story setting and the best writing power among the similar genres I have read so far. Summary: It is the best among the similar genres so far, but it is too little and not enough to read. Personal Thoughts: As of now, the weird world has begun to show the tip of the iceberg. Both the male and female protagonists have foreshadowing. It doesn't look like what the introduction said. Although the current highlights are still these, it is not like relying entirely on others to demonize the protagonist. It is that the protagonist's self-identification is unclear, and the female protagonist has also laid foreshadowing. She is not simply a disabled person and a bullied identity...

The main reason is that I personally really want to see this kind of plot about raising a girlfriend from a distance (off topic). However, after coming in, I found that the overall situation is different from what I thought. Two worlds correspond to two themes. However, whether the world where the heroine lives is related to the alien world has not been mentioned, which can be regarded as a point that can be made into a fuss. Then there's the explanation of the game on the protagonist's phone: What's the source? Why did you choose the protagonist? What is special about the protagonist? I personally don't like plots that appear out of thin air, as it feels like they are at the mercy of fate. For example, the system reads minds or something, deliberately guides, and then the protagonist passively accepts it, as if another person can succeed, so the uniqueness of the protagonist must be reflected. At present, it seems that the two worlds are still playable in their own way, and the world switching also feels fragmented, which makes it seem a bit laborious. I hope it can be slightly improved in the future. I'll add more when I think of it, just stop it ❤️ At present, it seems to be the boss's routine to regain his memory, so the latest paragraph is all about the inner world. Next, you can devote some effort to returning to the table world. Maybe the return of the mental patient can be used as a foreshadowing to cause a linkage between the inner and outer worlds? Anyway, I look forward to the author's performance.

I also know why the rating is not high. I almost prepared for five-star installments. I hate misunderstanding and missing this kind of plot. The author may want to express that the male and female protagonists are always destined, but readers will feel uncomfortable when they see this kind of plot. I feel uncomfortable giving it five stars. Please encourage me with four stars. Come on, author.

The following comments are for readers' reference only and do not have any command or meaning to the author. I only write comments to provide reference for everyone to read the book. I also hope that the author will just read it and not be directed by readers to write the book❤️ This book is quite good to read, both the real world and the alien world are well written. If taken alone, it is a very interesting novel, but together, there is a sense of fragmentation. I saw Chapter 59. The two worlds are only once connected, and I don't know if they can be said to be connected. Moreover, to be honest, the transition between the two worlds cannot be said to be very smooth, or it can be said to be completely absent, so that I had to spend a few seconds thinking about where the protagonist is. This is Tomato, not a paid novel. It is recommended to add a gorgeous dividing line at the transition point between the two worlds. . . . Okay, the next thing is that the author separated the two worlds too far, which made me feel like I was reading two books (the following is a bit of a spoiler 😂). . Moreover, the protagonist seems to have no memory when he changes world, and the memory in the other world is missing, so there is a feeling that he does not know what he is doing. . . So if you don't watch carefully, you will find that the front is very messy, and you have no idea what the protagonist did. Moreover, many pits are filled in by a plot that changes the world, so that it feels out of context, you know 😂 Then after you finish watching the other world, you will not have the pleasure of filling in the pits. , Or you enjoyed skimming another world, and then found that the plot of the other world was incomprehensible, so you have to go back and read it again. Of course, it may also be because I am not used to the rhythm of this kind of narrative. In short, these things have made some flaws in my originally very good reading experience. That's it.

. . . The author chose two themes for this book. The first one is that the protagonist is a big boss, and he doesn't know it. The other one is raised on a mobile phone... These two themes have actually existed before Tomato. The theme that crosses that line is actually relatively old. I remember that I saw it two or three years ago, and in reality, this line seems to have only been touched by me in the second half of last year. But when combined together, it looks pretty good. It depends on the author's writing skills, but for now it's still okay. Um. . . After reading it, when I was halfway through it, I discovered that the author's post was posted in July last year, and my heart dropped. But fortunately the author didn't give up. I originally thought that after being discontinued for so long, Tomatoes would no longer be recommended, but there are still. All I can say is that the author should work hard. Also, will the protagonist of the crossing line discover his identity? 🤔🤔🤔

To be honest, I rarely review books. Looks like this is my first book review. I have been watching Tomato for about five or six years now. This is the first time I have read a novel that appeals to me. You must work hard to update [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

How could such a beautiful book have such a low score? The author's characters are very well created, including the gentle and helpful Mr. Du Xi; the beautiful and kind-hearted Miss Zhong Qingli, who still loves the world despite suffering. I am also very happy that she can get her own salvation; there are also many flesh-and-blood characters who meet and get to know the protagonist, leaving behind a story that is unique to him. The protagonist Du Xi also grows up in these encounters, constantly discovering the truth of the world: Where do I come from? Which side is the real world? I am also full of curiosity about this story: Why did Du Xi and Qing Li meet in a mobile game? What is the secret of Zhong Qingli's life experience? 🤔 When will Du Xi fully master his abilities? These are all attracting me to explore, and I hope the author can bring readers better stories... Looking forward to meeting Du Xi and more people [Top post][Top post][Top post]

It's a very interesting book. The author is very active. Then, how should I say, let's try reading a few chapters first? There are many surprises about the fact that I have been raising books for a while... What's going on? It's only been two weeks. Change the strategy of raising books (to prevent them from being raised to death). Give them some gifts every day, click to remind them of updates, and then just wait and develop an author.