If You Had Told Me My Wife Was Here, I Would Have Rushed Here!

If you are a new reader, you may feel confused at the beginning, but trust me, this book will definitely be regarded as a source of food as you continue reading. The rhythm and writing details are very good, and some descriptions of the love line really moved me. At present, it seems to be a dual world and dual storyline. It's a reality, with a single female protagonist and a "paper man", which is very sweet. A "dream", a hidden boss, who doesn't know he is very powerful but others see him as powerful. Pretending is like the wind, always with me haha. Should the two worlds merge later or become one world? I want to see how Du Xi and Zhong Qingli will meet. The young girl who regards the protagonist as a god and wants to serve her but is still full of love will behave when she meets the male protagonist. I am looking forward to it. It can be seen that the author really wants to describe a big world. Therefore, there are many characters appearing in the front, and the world view is spread out slowly. This is probably why the front looks a bit chaotic. But the author should have a complete outline in hand. Come on, write it according to your own writing style. It will be a very good novel.

Best wishes to all the boys: ✨Suave and personable✨ ✨The Yushu stands in the wind with extraordinary bearing✨ ✨Cherish the beauty and pity the jade✨ ✨Gentle and elegant, white teeth and bright eyes✨ ✨Handsome and handsome✨ ✨Excellent talent and extraordinary spirit✨ ✨Extraordinary appearance, rich and handsome✨ ✨Elegant and dignified✨ ✨Fresh and handsome, sword-shaped eyebrows and starry eyes✨ ✨Stick nose and thin lips, charming and elegant✨ ✨Chivalrous and handsome ancient carvings✨ ✨Beautiful without waves, elegant and peaceful✨ ✨Tan Fan smiles, both talented and beautiful✨ ✨The jade tree stands out from the crowd✨ ✨Excellent talent and extraordinary demeanor✨ ✨Clear eyebrows, calm and elegant✨ ✨Sweep Emei lightly to brighten eyes and teeth✨ ✨Excellent grace and immortal jade bones✨ ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ Best wishes to all the girls Live well and drink more hot water [Just kidding, don't hit me (dog head)]

Hmm... This book is the one with the smoothest story setting and the best writing among the similar genres I have ever read. Summary: It is the best among the similar genres, but it is too little and not enough to read. Personal Thoughts: As of now, the weird world has begun to show the tip of the iceberg. Both the male and female protagonists have foreshadowing. It doesn't look like what the introduction said. Although the current highlights are still these, it is not like relying entirely on others to demonize the protagonist. It is that the protagonist's self-identification is not clear, and the female protagonist has also laid foreshadowing. She is not simply a disabled person and a bullied identity...

The main reason is that I personally really want to see this kind of plot about raising a girlfriend from a distance (off topic). However, after coming in, I found that the overall situation is different from what I thought. Two worlds correspond to two themes. However, whether the world where the heroine lives is related to the alien world has not been mentioned, which can be regarded as a point that can be made into a fuss. Then there's the explanation of the game on the protagonist's phone: What's the source? Why did you choose the protagonist? What is special about the protagonist? I personally don't like plots that appear out of thin air, as it feels like they are at the mercy of fate. For example, the system reads minds or something, deliberately guides, and then the protagonist passively accepts it, as if another person can succeed, so the uniqueness of the protagonist must be reflected. At present, it seems that the two worlds are still playable in their own way, and the switching of worlds also feels fragmented, which makes it seem a bit laborious. I hope it can be slightly improved in the future. I'll add more when I think of it, just stop being like it [Love] At present, it seems to be the boss's routine to regain his memory, so the latest paragraph is all about the inner world. Next, you can devote some effort to returning to the table world. Maybe the return of the mental patient can be used as a foreshadowing to cause a linkage between the inner and outer worlds? Anyway, I look forward to the author's performance.

I also know why the rating is not high. I almost prepared for five-star installments. I hate misunderstanding and missing this kind of plot. The author may want to express that the male and female protagonists are always destined, but readers will feel uncomfortable when they see this kind of plot. I feel uncomfortable giving it five stars. Please encourage me with four stars. Come on, author.

. . . The author chose two themes for this book. The first is that the protagonist is a big boss and he doesn't know it. The other is that he is raised on a mobile phone... These two themes actually existed before Tomato, and the theme that crosses that line is actually relatively old. I remember I saw it two or three years ago, but in reality, this line seems to have only been touched by me in the second half of last year. But when combined together, it looks pretty good. It depends on the author's writing skills, but for now it's still okay. Um. . . After reading it, when I was halfway through it, I discovered that the author's post was posted in July last year, and my heart dropped. But fortunately the author didn't give up. I originally thought that after being discontinued for so long, Tomatoes would no longer be recommended, but there are still. All I can say is that the author should work hard. Also, will the protagonist of the crossing line discover his identity? [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

The following comments are for readers' reference only and do not have any command or meaning to the author. I only write comments to provide reference for everyone to read the book. I also hope that the author will just read it and not be directed by readers to write the book [Love] This book is quite good. It writes well about both the real world and the alien world. If taken alone, it is a very interesting novel. But combined, there is a sense of fragmentation. I saw Chapter 59. The two worlds are only once connected, and I don't know if they can be said to be connected. Moreover, to be honest, the transition between the two worlds cannot be said to be very smooth, or it can be said to be completely absent, so that I had to spend a few seconds thinking about where the protagonist is. This is Tomato, not a paid novel. It is recommended to add a gorgeous dividing line at the transition point between the two worlds. . . . Okay, the next thing is that the author separated the two worlds too far, which made me feel like I was reading two books (the following is a bit of a spoiler [laughing and crying]) . . Moreover, the protagonist seems to have no memory when he changes world, and the memory in the other world is missing, so there is a feeling that he does not know what he is doing. . . So if you don't watch it carefully, you will find that the front is very messy, and you have no idea what the protagonist did, and many pitfalls are filled in by a plot that changes the world, so that it feels out of context, you know? [Laughing and crying] Then after you watch another world, you will not have the pleasure of filling in the pits. , Or you enjoyed skimming another world, and then found that you couldn't understand the plot of the other world, so you have to go back and read it again [Thinking] Of course, it may also be because I am not used to the rhythm of this kind of narrative. In short, these things have made some flaws in my originally very good reading experience, so that's it.

To be honest, I rarely review books. Looks like this is my first book review. I have been watching Tomato for about five or six years now. This is the first time I have read a novel that appeals to me. You must work hard to update [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's a very interesting book. The author is very active. Then, how should I say, let's try reading a few chapters first? There are many surprises about the fact that I have been raising books for a while... What's going on? It's only been two weeks. Change the strategy of raising books (to prevent them from being raised to death). Give them some gifts every day, click to remind them of updates, and then just wait and develop an author.

How could such a beautiful book have such a low score? The author's characters are very well created, including the gentle and helpful Mr. Du Xi; the beautiful and kind-hearted Miss Zhong Qingli, who still loves the world despite suffering. I am also very happy that she can get her own salvation; there are also many flesh-and-blood characters who meet and get to know the protagonist, leaving behind a story that is unique to him. The protagonist Du Xi also grows up in these encounters, constantly discovering the truth of the world: Where do I come from? Which side is the real world? I am also full of curiosity about this story: Why did Du Xi and Qing Li meet in a mobile game? What is the secret of Zhong Qingli's life experience? [Thinking] When will Du Xi fully master his abilities? These are attracting me to explore, and I hope the author can bring readers better stories... Looking forward to meeting Du Xi and more people [top post][top post][top post]

It's a bit uncomfortable when the protagonists in the two worlds don't have the same memories [awkward laughter]

Hmm~very good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡. I watched it offline. There is logic, depth, and the pace is neither urgent nor slow nor impetuous. What he catches is poking his wife and the top godhead with one hand, but not with the needle.

Overall, it feels okay. The one drawback is that there is no explanation when switching world lines in the early stage. I can see it later - switching worlds while sleeping (probably 👀), which is quite attractive to me. Also, can you update it faster? ! ! Not enough, not enough at all.

It's very interesting. I think it would be better to separate the reality line and the dream line into two books.

You can do it, your writing is good, and you deserve everyone's recognition and praise. The stars are moving and the stars are dotted. Come on, my friend.

The subject matter is relatively new, and this is the first time I've seen the dual world setting in Tomato. The setting is good, but I hope it won't collapse in the later stage. The writing is a bit off, and the descriptions are stiff in some places, but overall it's good, at least better than most of Tomato's novels. I haven't found any poisonous points yet. In addition, Laodeng speed update

In my opinion, this book has three lines The male protagonist's daily life line Interactive lines between male and female protagonists Male protagonist's adventure line in another world Very well written and very sweet ｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧ (´∀｀)♡ When can the heroine really see the hero (//∇//)! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Heartache(´-ωก`) Cheers for you! ! ! ! ! ! ☆ * . ☆ . ∧＿∧∩* ☆ * ☆ (∀)/ . . ⊂ ノ* ☆ ☆ * (つ ノ .☆ (ノ

Give me a five-star support. Although I have basically skipped the different worlds, I came in with this title just to read Paper Man's Wife [face covering] [OK]

The plot is a bit protracted, but the writing is quite good. It is suitable for people with patience to read slowly. If you just want to read a fast food article, I don't recommend reading this book. Except that the details may be a bit inappropriate, the writing is really good [laughs]

To be honest, the subject matter is very good, and the writing is also good, but I don't know why it makes me feel sick to my stomach. It doesn't matter if there are many story lines, and it doesn't matter if the character relationship is complicated, but the center is missing. The protagonist feels very Tang's (bushi), maybe it's other cool articles, I've read too many mindless articles, and I'm not used to reading such an article occasionally. I hope the author doesn't give up, and I'll come back to you if you support me (doge)

Believe me, this author's writing is really good

Very good novel that makes my brain spin. ————Love comes from the Netherlands

Sweet, sweet, very sweet. It would be nice if there was more interaction between the male and female protagonists.

Book reviews that are true and objective, have multi-dimensional descriptions, clear structures, and substantial content can help more book lovers. The characters are well developed and the plot is very twisty, but it's just a bit confusing and sometimes the reactions can't keep up.

It's a good read, but there is always a sense of separation between the two worlds. I hope the author can integrate the memories of the two worlds. Of course, the most important thing is to add more scenes between the male and female protagonists. I feel that the progress is too slow. I came to read the love story. I am not interested in other worlds. But the author can follow his own ideas. I just hope that this world can be connected in the end, or the protagonist can really meet the heroine.

It's very beautiful and very sweet. I hope the author will keep updating it (literary level is limited, so I'll leave it at that [smile])

It's a good book. It's interesting to switch between the two worlds, and the author is also very cute.

I like it very much, cheers for the author

I want to keep an electronic pet After watching it, the person was split into three parts

It's so shameless, Zaizai is so shameless (music)