Star Railway: I Am Definitely Not the Dragon Lord of the Vidyadhara Clan

Very cool! ! ! The Emperor's Chef is extremely satisfied, the characters are not broken and the plot is good. Even in a different world Mr. Is still so powerful. I hope there won't be a female protagonist, besides, it's hard for anyone to control her [laughs][laughs]

It looks good. Zhongli's portrayal is quite good, but there are too few. I'm looking forward to the plot of Xianzhou. Xianzhou and Liyue are both shadows of China, and culturally a copy of Chinese culture. In this way, Zhongli can be regarded as half of Xianzhou, haha. Also, I saw that the author is going to write a plot of Tiwat to remind the author. The power of memory and abundant life should be able to solve Zhongli, Ruotuo's wear and tear, and Mandrill's evil obstacles. I hope there will be related plots.

I want to see Morax raining down rocks, I want to see the sky move, I want to see Morax kill indiscriminately [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration][Sneaky smile]

The article has clear ideas and some interesting points. It's one of the better fanfics I've ever read. I hope I won't be backstabbed by MiHoYo.

This book is one of the best books about iron collapse that I have ever seen. The image of Zhongli in the book does not deliberately follow the depiction of Morax in Genshin Impact like other fanfics about Zhongli, but instead describes a vivid "person". But Zhongli was once a god after all, so he also valued the contract very much. You can write down every bit in the text. The characters all have their own characteristics, and the author outlines them in detail. It can be seen that the author is very attentive (unlike a certain Marvin who loves the protagonists every time he meets them), and he does have a deep understanding of the original plot. There are many more that you can experience by yourself when reading the book (I am running out of words [laughing and crying]), so I won't go into details here. To sum up, five-star praise, very much looking forward to it.

One of the best Star Dome Railway fanfics written so far

The writing is quite good. I don't think it's particularly OOC. It's very like Mr. Zhongli. If I insist on asking questions, I feel that some of the words Zhongli said could be changed to be more Zhongli's language style (what am I talking about [face covering] Yiyihayiyiyi [face covering]), but I feel that the language is too straightforward and not enough for Zhongli. I quite like the later plot where Wendy is played, although the content is not much [laughing and crying] Overall, the writing is quite good and worth watching.

The writing is very good, and I look forward to the Pioneers' trip to Teyvat, but I have a small comment. The old man did all the protagonist's work, which makes me feel that it doesn't matter whether there is a protagonist or not. The old man is more suitable to come forward at the most critical moment like the mandrill in the layered rock abyss, rather than running errands.

The character description is very good, and it is more in line with Zhongli. I hope the author will keep up the good work and never stop updating. However, the plot is a bit scarce now. Don't wait for the plot, then interrupt the update, and then forget to continue.

Super pretty! [Adoration][Please update] I hope there is no heroine. I feel that the old man is not suitable, but the old father is fine.

The writing is good. Zhongli's combat power has improved as expected. If his combat power is very low, he won't be able to pretend to be cool [laughing] But I hope there won't be a heroine who has more daughters. The emperor is suitable to be a father [Thinking] So far, the writing is still very good, come on author! !

There is no OOC in the emperor's character design. In my opinion, the writing is very good. The other characters are also well portrayed, and the author updates it every day. Praise the author

The writing is still very good, the subject matter is very novel, and the future is promising.

Come on, author, I think this kind of subject matter is very novel and interesting, and it will greatly arouse my curiosity. I like it very much, keep writing! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The content is wonderful and fascinating. It can be called a flawless good book. Every point is grasped just right, and some parts are also very novel... It is a pity that the content is still a little missing. I believe there will be more new chapters in the future, and I am very much looking forward to it.

The novel is overall very good, but the plot so far has been a bit flat. There is generally too little blood, joy, and knives. I hope it won't be too bland in the future. Then you can add some creativity to the novel (to attract the attention of viewers) I think it would be better to be more creative in the early stages of the novel, because good ideas are more eye-catching. If it's too dull in the early stage, it will be a little difficult later on.

This book is very good. The author of this book is also my ideal author. I also like this author very much. This author is worth dealing with [laughing]

To tell you the truth, this is the most restored book I have found after the emperor traveled through time. I didn't write Zhongli Invincible deliberately for the sake of exaggeration. It's very nice. After all, the original world view is still lower. Fengshen has become the enhanced Pro max version of Yaya, and it's great to be serious when it's time to be serious Anyway, keep working hard

Looking forward to the meeting between the dragon-form emperor and dragon-form Dan Heng [sending heartfelt wishes]

It's really good-looking, and Zhongli's character is not bad at all. Suddenly I thought of one thing, what would Zhongli's reaction be if he found out that he couldn't dance in this world? As we all know, the characters in Collapse Star Railroad have no knees [Eating Melon] I've already figured out 10,000 words in my head [Explore] Really, I feel that my aesthetics of online writing has been overestimated by the author, which has led to the fact that except for the really good ones, which I can read through the ones I like, what else are there? Woohoo, come on, the author. My children can't find good books, so I can only place my only hope on you. The author greatly brought Zhongli to life during the Demon God War. He took action when it was time to take action, and he was not panicked at all in crisis situations. He also wrote about Zhongli's daily life very well. After looking around, I found that Zhongli written by other authors was more or less broken, but the author's writing was very fitting. Big boost to the author! Keep reading first, otherwise you won't be able to read enough [crying]

It's very interesting, I hope the author will continue to create! Really love this setting! Modo Modo! ! In addition, I would like to make a small suggestion. I hope the author can describe the character Zhongli more in the article ∠( ᐛ ∠)＿ (I am looking forward to the plot of Xianzhou. The inspiration or prototype of Liyue and Xianzhou comes from Chinese culture. I don't know what Mr. Zhongli will think after seeing Xianzhou...^ω^)

It's very interesting. At least it's not as brainless as some books. There is no harem. The author himself said that there is no heroine! ! ! No harem, either! Let me make a digression. I am Zhongli's fucking dog. Wangwangwang. Wangwang. I love to chew Master Zhongli's ass. I chew, chew, chew, chew (இωஇ )

The ending is a bit rushed, but I do blame the main plot [laughing and crying] The author has a good overall grasp of it, and it is completely worthy of 9+. It is a pity that I was looking forward to the extra Teyvat chapter, and Wendy's follow-up suddenly disappeared... I plan to start chasing the author's new book [Blowing Kisses]

It looks good, and fits Mr. Zhongli's character design (referring to the character's tone), but it's a little short, and there's no plot linking up with Teyvat that I want to see😭😭😭, but the salmon plot is free to eat (there are always underground authors who dare to face the official backstabbing hhhh)

Very good, and I am also a person who likes Zhongli pushing Zhongli. The plot in it is a bit funny. The author writes it in big letters and it is very fitting. Zhongli likes to show off his image, but he can always play a role at critical moments. I really like it [Adoration] [Blowing Kiss]

Personally, I think this book is quite interesting for me to read! Especially from the perspective of the emperor, the behavior and language are very similar! But the language may still be a bit lacking. The imitation is very similar, but sometimes some disclosures are unavoidable, such as using some words that are biased toward young people. Overall, the senses are okay! Needs improvement. It is recommended to improve the language art to be more like it, and at the same time add some movements, so that it will feel more vivid and impressive!

It's really great, it's really great. I've rarely seen such a good-looking book. The characters written by the author are not broken at all, and the rhythm of the plot is also very good. Full marks! It's just too little, not enough to see! ! ! The author will update soon! ! ! ! !

Ok, brothers, all eyes are on me, look at me, look at me, let me announce something: the author is short and thin. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

The writing is very good, and it has brought Mr. Zhong into it, including his calmness, calmness, and care for some people like elders. But can you update it faster?

Now Zhongli Transforms into a Dragon, the plot is quite good, not too draggy, and the writing has the flavor of an old man. It still takes some time to save. I read 20 chapters in one go today, and it was gone in a flash [I almost cried]