Pirate*************

The character fits the feeling of traveling into an unknown world, and unlike others, it feels like someone who was born and raised in the world of pirates. I have to say, there is a book about Pirates that is very over-the-top, called "The Extremely Evil Celestial Dragons, who are frightened by the news." That novel was written early, and right from the beginning, he said that he wanted to master the strongest three-color Haki, swordsmanship, etc. He said it directly with his mouth, and the timeline was wrong. I was really convinced, it was all YY, and there were many people who were happy to read it, and I was convinced. At first glance, it's a score-boosting one, and anyone with a discerning eye will know whether what I'm saying is true. The probability of scoring points is too high. Eternal Flame is good, and Basic Bucky's Pirates is also good, I recommend everyone to watch it.

In fact, I have always felt that Ace's father is obviously a knife player. Ace should not imitate the Monkey family and play with fists. Later, after eating Shaoshao fruit, he even used some fancy skills. If he learns from his dad, he might be very good at playing with knives!

Overall, it's good. Some of the plots are interesting and creative. The plot involving Lu Jiu is quite touching. The protagonist has a warm and masculine feeling at this time, but then recovers and becomes more silly like Luffy, which is a bit immature. But when something crucial comes up, the protagonist shows the charm and responsibility of a mature man. The plot design is okay. In the middle, it can be seen that the author is not willing to let the protagonist rely on the system. This is not bad. [Sinister smile]

Just watch Momo no Susuke, the introduction in the first line is quite attractive to me.

It can also be more consistent

It's real, better than those shady ones. Please support me, Liu Ming in the front row. Make a mark It can be seen that the author writes well, much better than those who write every chapter without thinking. Momonosuke is really dead, but just die, and it also extends the plot, haha, it's so excellent [Like]

Lying high on nine layers of clouds, the truth of Taoism is spread on a futon. Beyond the black and yellow sky and earth, I am the leader of the teachings. The Taoist ancestor gives you a thumbs up [laughs]

So far, I'm quite satisfied with it [you taste it carefully]

With a loud bang, I made my debut. [Cool]