One Person: Simplify the Yin and Five Thunders, and You Will Become Stronger by Practicing Dual Cultivation

It's so good. Come on, it's just too short. It'll be more enjoyable to read.

This book is very interesting and worth reading. I hope the author will not stop reading it.

Comes from Shen Ji Bai Lian Beautiful(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ I love watching (⑉°з°)-♡

It's a pretty good fanfic, the emotional line could be a little thinner. In a novel like this where the protagonist is invincible from the beginning, you can focus on emotional portrayal and creation of exciting points. The emotional line should be separated from the main line as much as possible. Everything depends on the author's full play.

It's well written, but it's just too little to read. Especially the female protagonist. I hope it will be handled better later and not too much. The front of TM is fine, but the back is like a harem. Rubbish, ruined another novel. If you don't write about the harem, you will die.

Ah ah ah ah [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] It's not enough, please update quickly. This is the best one I have seen among so many one-person fics. Finally, there is someone who accepts Xia He and starts a harem. Such a beautiful author. This is how it should be. The ones I watched before always gave me a single female lead. Even in the harem, there was no Xia He. I don't understand what they are like. Isn't Xia He beautiful? Do you have to give it to Zhang Lingyu? Those are just very unpleasant to watch [vomit] The author, your writing is good and it suits my taste, but I think you can still accept all the pictures of beautiful women (Feng Baobao, Xia He, Lu Linglong, Chen Duo, Feng Shayan) you posted. Of course, it doesn't count if the ball is not a girl.

It's good to read, but it's too short. The author is short and weak. He wants to keep it for a few days, but is afraid of dying. Lan Shou

The update is too slow, but the writing is quite good. If you can't write the characters well, you should learn from the author and it's better to write a scholar. There are not so many emotions and it doesn't look dramatic. I really like Lu Linglong's arrangement, that stupid guy is so cute

I want a big rating~♡

Each of the Eight Magic Skills has its own negatives. The Immortal Thief of Liuku will never have enough to eat and will eat people. You can practice both hands only when you are disabled in numerology, otherwise you will be disabled for the rest of your life. If you can't practice Fenghou Qimen, you will be stuck in the interior scene for the rest of your life. If you practice it, your body's immune organs will be disordered and you will get many diseases. It is not clear whether the spirit is restrained and the generals are sent to eat the spirit, but there is definitely something wrong with it. The magic machine Bailian cannot be seen at the moment, but if Ma Xianhong succeeds, the third war will begin, and a global chaos will begin. Tongtianlu, Qi source, Daluo cave, there are no problems at the moment

It's really a shocking work, I can't be the only one to be fed💩, this book must be read by more people

No matter what, there is one person I like. When I write fanfics now, I don't revolve around the protagonist. In fact, I don't ask you to target him. But you can't write around him. I have traveled through time and I am sure that I am the protagonist. This book is very good. I can follow my heart and be invincible. It makes me most comfortable and able to face the pressure. Brother, it's hard to find someone. You have to endure it and don't let it go to waste.

I have read a lot of them, but this one is my favorite. Whether it is the plot or the characters, they are perfectly integrated into it. It is really enjoyable to read, author (you are great)

Aihe said The most fragrant among the strangers is the only one with complete nature. The little chubby hidden dragon loves Linglong; since she was born, the world has loved Sister Baoer; I love He's charm but not demon, sexy but not coquettish, protruding forward and backward, beautiful white legs, slender waist, full and can be held, and can be viewed from a distance but not played with. I would say that Sister Baoer is the hermit of flowers; Fengsha Yan is the rich and noble of flowers; Lu Linglong is the gentleman of flowers. Alas! The love of Linglong is rarely heard of by the Dragon Queen; who can share the love of He? Bao'er's love is suitable for everyone! Ahem, I'm not talented, I'm showing my shame.

It just looks comfortable, no other reason Well, the back is so poisonous. . .

Zhang Yuqing: "I don't know, don't worry about him!" Qiu Rang: I am not a chuunibyou! I'm just a fan of Sakura anime! Qiu Rang shouted to Zhang Yuqing, "Zhang Yuqing!" Zhang Yuqing: "Huh?" The indifferent tone was accompanied by extremely powerful Qi. This made Qiu Rang feel numb. Qiu Rang swallowed all the flirtatious words that had reached his throat. Instinct tells Qiu Rang. It's possible for me now, so it's best if I can only tell my purpose! Qiu Rang knelt on the ground and shouted to Zhang Yuqing, "Zhang Yuqing! Please join us!" Zhang Yuqing:? ? ? "Why are you kneeling? Don't you know that there is gold under the man's knees?" Qiu Rang: "Now is the time to cash out!

This book is really well written, the plot is not obtrusive, the characters are well drawn, and the portrayal of the protagonist is even more innovative. The cheats are not scene-stealing, and the protagonist is not a stud. I think as long as there are 2 to 4 female protagonists, it will be good. The plot is really well written. Really good!

Personally, I feel like I want to learn all the Eight Wonders.

At present, the fan fiction under One Person is relatively good. The main character is strong, does not pretend to be a pig, is not delicate and pretentious, and is not aggrieved. Except for a few relationships that are particularly abrupt, there are no other problems.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I would like to briefly talk about my feelings. First of all, a small part of the author's ideas are slightly confusing. Although it does not affect the plot, but after reading some parts, I need to think about it and straighten it out, but it is not a big problem. In addition, this book is a fanfic of Under One Person, but it only follows the general settings. Some settings have been changed by the author, which is different from the original book. Also because the original book Under One Person is not completed, the author will make some subjective inferences about unknown abilities. Personally, I think most of them are good, and I disagree with a small part. But everyone is different, and people have different opinions. The last point is that this is stated to other book friends, without praise or criticism. Part of the plot of this book is related to The original book overlaps, and the author has made certain simplifications, but also retains a lot of the original content. In other words, the simplified original work is exactly the same, and the basically classic scenes and dialogues are also retained, but there are a few parts that are not said by the original people or the time is wrong. For example, the words that the old master said to Xia He were what the protagonist said to Xia He, and the scene where Lao Lu fights the old master appears twice, but there are small differences between the two times, etc. But overall it's pretty good Later, I let myself go, and it has very little to do with the plot of the original work. It is a new idea, and many settings have been changed from the original work. It is no longer within the scope of my understanding, but a complete change. Generally speaking, it is okay. If you like the settings similar to the original work, you may not be able to accept it. The turning point begins with the destruction of the Wang family. The protagonist feels quite different before and after. It may change back when the problem is solved later. I am not sure how the author writes it. Finally, this is an invincible novel.

Why do I suddenly want to write a fanfic [cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face]

So many people want the Eight Wonders. If eight copies of the Eight Wonders are given to everyone, including ordinary people. What will happen? [Laughs evilly]

You don't need too many criteria to choose a lover, just three things: not to lie to you, not to hurt you, and willing to accompany you Everything comes if a man will only waitAs long as a person is willing to wait, everything will come 🤺Retreat! 🤺Retreat! 🤺Retreat! 🤺Retreat! 🤺Retreat! 🤺Retreat! I just think it shouldn't be like this if a person gives good intentions but doesn't get anything in return. ——"Blessing from Heavenly Official" All worries are gone 🤺 gone🤺 gone 🤺 gone 🤺 gone 🤺 gone 🤺 gone 🤺 gone 🤺 gone 🤺 gone 🤺! ! ! There is freedom in coming and going, and people who meet may not meet again.

He is just such a nice person, he subdues the enemies over and over again, and then they come again, and he is not afraid of the women around him being implicated. Zhang Zhiwei and the others are all killed. The protagonist is so strong and yet he doesn't kill the enemy every time. He always causes trouble. If the people don't die, there will be more space for next time.

I have a question. Everyone is saying that Xia He has been whitewashed. She is a bad person. So what is the definition of good and bad? In fact, I think there is no accurate definition of good or bad at all. They are relative and sometimes interchangeable. Everything is just because of different positions and different perspectives, so the methods, behaviors, and concepts are also different. If we really take it in and think about it from another person's perspective, you will find that in fact, the concepts and behaviors we believe, adhere to, and persist in are wrong, just like Bai Bai. Yansong believes that the world is a delicate gray, not black and white. Take Ying Zheng, for example. He unified China, unifying carriage tracks, weights and measures, etc. This was a historical feat, but he was hated by the people for burning books, humiliating Confucians and building the Great Wall. In the eyes of the people, he was bad. , But in terms of the overall situation, he built the Great Wall to resist foreigners, burned books and harassed Confucians to unify his thoughts, and he was worthy of being an emperor for eternity. But why would he be a tyrant? It is because his stance is different, his thinking angle is different, and his conclusions are different. Or maybe the wolf eats the sheep. Is the wolf wrong? If a sheep is eaten, should the sheep be eaten? What you think is right or wrong is only relative to you. Everyone is right, just because we have different perspectives. Why should we have so much malice towards another person, let alone a fictional character. Everything has its two sides and relativity. This is objective truth. So I think Xia He is right. Everyone is right and not bad. How can I say it in a clean voice?

If the Heavenly Master dies later and the protagonist finds out that the Wang family was behind the death of his parents, will he eat the Wang family alive? The protagonist knows how to "Liuku Immortal Thief". Who else can cure the protagonist? I forgot which book I read, it was said that those old guys a few decades ago were like grabbing nuclear bombs, Liuku Immortal Thieves, a foreigner without any Qi training experience can quickly master it, and if it is spread randomly, there will be a lot of cannibals. Feng Hou Qi Men is just a fucking picture. As long as you want to learn it, you will be stuck in the interior and can't get out. I don't know about the others, but just two of them can kill a lot of people.

If the brother doesn't want to update, just say so. Why bother to deal with the sister like this? It seems that the sister is being sentimental. The brother is weak and needs a lot of rest. The sister is urging the brother so much. It is the sister's fault. It hurts the brother's body, which also makes the sister feel distressed. Unfortunately, whether the brother is hurt or not has anything to do with the sister?

It's very cool. I'm thinking that Feng Baobao should know all the eight magical skills. Immortality/self-healing = Liuku Immortal Thief, body breathing/taijutsu/amnesia = full hands, using Qi/Colorless Qi = Qi body source, materialization = divine machine and hundreds of refinements, gaoqi/observation power = Daluo Cave Observation, and the others cannot be used actively because of the use of both hands.

Quanxing destroyed the protagonist's family, and the protagonist and Xia He had sex. It almost becomes a love story under one person. I dodge

It's well written and I personally think it's very interesting.