I Play the Role of the Nine Heavens Mysterious Girl in the Martial Arts World

The writing is obviously very good and very innovative. It has two lines. One line can pretend to be a boss and feel cool, and the other line is about practicing in a down-to-earth manner. I don't know why so many people criticize it, and the author doesn't want to write anymore. It's not easy to find one that suits your taste. . . I don't know if it's because I have a more sophisticated taste in niche novels (new routines), but I always get some bad reviews. Many people read some old-fashioned novels that are too familiar and clichéd, but I didn't like them after I read them.

It's very interesting, and the author's idea of ​​two lines is very good. Tianyuan brings a sense of refreshment, but it is also very boring to continue playing Tianyuan Invincible. The author can make the plot of the Immortal Realm and the Tianyuan Realm boring for a long time with just two lines. Because having fun all the time will make the plot lose its ups and downs, and readers will quickly lose interest. I've only read romance zone fics before that could make the protagonist invincible and still keep it fresh. As an author of the original section, being able to figure out the right cool points and making people feel happy but not tired really requires a good grasp of the plot rhythm. It's a really good refreshing article, and it has found the balance point between refreshing writing and developmental writing.

I like it, but don't be like that book by Goldfinger. That book is really wise. I don't know what the author thinks. Why do immortals please mortals? I have nothing to say.

Great author, come on (´｡✪ω✪｡｀)

The novel is very good, but I want to ask the author if he forgot about Qi Lanwei. After being taken away by the protagonist, there was no news. I thought she was going to get a half-time official for her. What I was looking forward to was that the setting was eaten? [Shock]

It's been two and a half months, has the author sent it yet?

It's okay. I like this kind of thing. I like this kind of human protagonist. I was almost fooled by the ratings. As expected, Tomato's ratings are not very reliable.

Not bad, looks like he is single, I like it

It's very interesting, but it's a pity that the author stopped writing it! Even! Got it! ! ! [Angry] Hurry up and update it. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh to to to To To to to to to to to to to to to To to to to totssnul but the author to [cry]

Come on, author, code quickly

It's a very nice book. Brother, don't be a eunuch [crying]

To be honest, this novel is really good. I just don't know if there will be a follow-up. I've been following it for so long and haven't updated it yet.

In fact, the chapter about cultivating immortals can be less descriptive. After all, I am still attracted by this martial arts role.

The writing is okay. Some people say there is no B-square, but I think it's pretty good. There's no point in pretending all the time. The author shouldn't be affected by some people's comments. Come on.

It's not bad, I'm looking forward to the next plot

It's really good. There aren't many novels that I can read. This is one

The plot setting is very interesting, but the author didn't control the relationship between Jiu'er's character and the protagonist very well. It's a bit uncomfortable to watch. Fortunately, there are not many scenes, so I can bear it and pass it.

The cover is Hanhua, fast forward to receiving the ingot

The system of cultivating immortals is complete, and the story is quite good, but it is a pity that the author stopped updating it. . . . .

Nice. In the Tianyuan world, he is an enigmatic immortal king who collects cute little disciples and pretends to be 13; in the original cultivation world, he develops in a low-key manner and enters the late stage, switching back and forth between the two worlds.

Come on, author, come on

All I can say is! Novel and enjoyable!

It's a pity that I can't watch it anymore. Silence...

It would be nice to have less content about the world of immortality...

It looks pretty good so far, but it's a little short [eating melon]

It's good to read. I hope it won't stop updating. Is the author single or Lily? I hope he is single. I like to be alone when cultivating immortality, preferably alone [smiles]

Isn't it appropriate to have roast chicken on the cover? [Sinister smile]

The book was pretty good. I almost finished reading it and realized that I had entered the palace. . .

Dada is looking forward to the following plot. Come on Dada. I hope Dada will update it as soon as possible.

The writing is good, but I feel that the rating is indeed low, at least eight points should be improved. When will the author come back [almost crying]