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Although he is a novice author, the character design of the protagonist is relatively complete. This kind of character selection is very novel. As long as it does not collapse later, there is a probability of gaining a certain degree of popularity. In short, come on, author, I am optimistic about you.

So far: I feel pretty good. At least the character dialogue is not written like many authors talking to themselves. Talking to myself. The characters who speak some vernacular and dry words seem to do some ginger OOC behavior for the sake of plot arrangement. I can't bear to watch it and it hurts my head. The character of the protagonist is also very interesting to me at the moment. I can stand it. There is no obvious sense of déjà vu (meaning that the character's behavior does not conform to the character design given by the author. The character is flat and weak. As long as the character design is not broken and the plot is not unfinished, there will be no sao operations (such as cruelty for the sake of torture, etc.). I will see the ending without any accident. Come on, this is my first rating [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ]

The author's writing is very good, but the update speed~ Come on, keep an eye on you! [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Please give more updates][Please give more updates]

The thinking logic is good, and the character design seems to be perfect at present, but some places can be refined. I think this book will be a very good book as long as it doesn't collapse in the later stages and is written well [laughs] Good luck to the author! ! !

Come on, it's very interesting. Give me 100 chapters per day! !

I feel good. In terms of the plot, the author did not deliberately write a very sexy character to let newcomers realize the authenticity of the game, nor is it a combination of most newcomers and old people. The supporting characters have distinct personalities, and the protagonist is well-established. Baichang's feelings for Qianyuan should be explained later. Players belong to different worlds, which I didn't expect. The first copy is finished, I hope the author will not be exhausted [laughs awkwardly] (first time writing a long review hahaha)

Super pretty! ! ! ! The only thing is that there is a little bit [cover face][cover face][cover face]

[Send Hearts][Send Hearts][Send Hearts][Send Hearts][Send Hearts][Send Hearts][Send Hearts][Send Hearts][Send Hearts][Send Hearts][Send Hearts][Send Hearts][Send Hearts] Love it, love it, this book is written in detail ~ The main plot, the protagonist has a beauty charm, ahhhh, it kills me [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts] ~ Come on, author [shy]

Super, super good-looking! The protagonist is a cold and ruthless little killer, and he's also super cute. Just a quick question, is it true that there can't be one more chapter?

How can it be so beautiful and so slow [cry][cry][cry] This is a story where I really like the dungeons, the live broadcast, and the supporting roles. These can easily become points minus points in other stories. This dungeon is so interesting, the live barrage is not mindless and strange, the supporting characters are particularly interesting and attractive, the protagonist's character and ability are so likable, I want to see more attack and reception posts www Update quickly [shy]

It looks good so far! I really like this type of romance. It's the first time I've read so many books with dual male protagonists in Mugenliu. It's very novel and I like it very much. But, there are just too few updates, not enough to watch, woo woo. Damn, for the sake of giving you perfect marks, please give me more~[crying][crazy]

It's really good-looking, but there are so few unknown monsters. I really like watching him interact with Qianyuan. Also, come on, author!

Ahhhh the plot is great! ! The description of the first copy aroused my great interest in both the plot and the scene. The background and development of the story are great! If it were a game, I would blow it up! The Cold Beauty Killer is really good. I don't have many appearances so far, but I really like the characters of these two people and look forward to more interactions. I'm so excited! Work hard to update! !

I really think this book is well written. There are many refreshing aspects in the plot of the protagonist. The protagonist also has many exciting solutions when facing a dead end. Through the plot, a cold and smart character is created, and the character is slowly revealed based on the plot. It does not rely on simple writing to describe the protagonist. What I like best is the collection addiction setting, which adds a touch of cute humanity to the cold character and makes it different from other people. And although there are few descriptions of Baichang in the plot, I felt a kind of relaxation from it. The protagonist does not need to rely too much on Baichang's power, which is more conducive to shaping Qianyuan's personal charm. The emotional drama is relatively slow, and I think it is just suitable for Qianyuan's cold personality. There is also a sense of indifferent doting. Baichang's weirdness is more in line with my imagination of weirdness. The action and character creation have abandoned the color of humanity, which will be more suitable and reduce the sense of separation. To be honest, a year later, I can't remember much of the plot in the book. But I still remember the feeling of heart palpitations when reading the plot. I hope that I will have the opportunity to see the ending of this book in the future and understand the foreshadowing in the book. I will wait for your update.

Ah, tentacle play, hahahaha, people say they want to poke my XP, ahhhhhh, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, but it's so little that it's not enough to watch.

I think the dungeon of Infinite Stream is very interesting, and the characters are well drawn, especially Gong, who has a dark appearance. However, the plot of the dungeon is a bit confusing, but it may be that I don't understand it because I don't have enough IQ. It can be said that it is my Top 2.

It's hard to imagine that I'm a newbie, and the content of the plot has touched my heart, so I beg the author to have mercy on the poor child, squatting in front of the phone every day waiting for updates <(ToT)> Please update the author soon! ( •̅_•̅ )

Oh my, it's super, super beautiful [laugh][laugh][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Love][Love][Love]

How should I put it? It's wonderful. I really didn't expect the author's imagination to be so big. I was horrified when I read it in the middle of the night, but he has two male protagonists, which fits the setting very well. The whole plot and introduction are similar. I couldn't stop when I read the last chapter, but it's finished. As a new book, it's really great. The 8.3 In 58 chapters is worthy of the name [shy] (this is the first time I have written so many comments)

So far, Gong Shou's character development is very good. (I personally like it very much, Shou is a cold beauty, Gong is a sultry unknown object [snickering] [smirking]) The key is the first article written by our dear author! ! I can't believe it! ! [Shocked][Shocked] The writing is good, and you can tell at a glance that the author is very good at Chinese! The plot of the first dungeon that has been updated so far is very interesting, very good! It's not a loss to invest in shares! Sisters. Well... And the author, please give it a try! ! Did you write really well? Already given to my little sisters. Hehe [smirk] [snicker] I love you😘😘 [love] [love]

I really like it. Yuan and Bai are really great. I just want the author to update it as soon as possible [please update]

This book is really great and the plot written by the author is also very interesting, but the update speed is a bit slow [shy]

It's really good to watch. I didn't expect some of the plots, but the author was able to fill in the gaps perfectly. The supporting characters are also very important. The characterization is very detailed, and there are beautiful words. I love it to death!

The highlight is that the story line is quite complete. It doesn't belong to the thriller genre, and I don't think it's a group photo essay. The concept and description are quite detailed. The thing I dislike the most is probably that it is actually a "Holy Father" story. No matter how strong or weak you are, good or bad, you have to save them. Of course, those who are too bad will die, but those with bad intentions will be the last to receive the box lunch. What I don't understand is that except for a few regular friends, everyone is so deeply hostile towards the protagonist. I really don't understand [face covering]. Those who have the patience to read it should think the article is good, each copy has 60+ pictures.

New to this? It's a lie, right? The author writes well! ! It's so enjoyable to watch! ! ! ! !

Absolutely, the author is too slow to update, but there is a reason. It is understandable that a book of such high quality is updated slowly, but I still have to say that the author can be faster. [Adoration] It is really not enough.

The protagonist attacks Bai Chang and is called Qian Yuan. The storyline is very exciting. Please update it (~￣▽￣)~

The plot is closely linked, there are foreshadowings, and the content is exciting and diverse. It is the best unlimited streaming copy I have ever seen on Tomato. I also like Qianyuan's character very much. The protagonist Qianyuan has brains and wisdom to pass the level. Like it very much! ! Like it very much! !

I prefer the kind of infinite flow, where the shou is indifferent and naturally dumb, and the attacker is a loyal dog of the gods. This kind of setting is very nice! I just hope the author will update it faster! Anyway, it's my husband +2

Good-looking and good-looking [Adore] [Adore] The beauty of writing is lively, elegant and natural, with unique charm. The writing quality is superb and the attention to detail is impeccable and stunning. The writing is very artistic, the writing techniques are changeable, and full of creativity and imagination. The writing is beautiful, smooth and easy, which is amazing. Very good