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The plot is novel, the plot is smooth, and the rhythm is tight. However, I did not give five stars because Severus and Sirius were probably written as a couple. Many readers like to clap, but it depends on the situation. Whether it is from the perspective of the original text or the fan, for Severus, he should like girls. Of course, I am not saying that it is wrong to like boys, but regardless of whether his cp is a boy or a girl, it should not be Sirius. In my opinion, Sirius is the bully, he and Lupin, Harry's father, and little Peter Star bullied Severus when he was a student. To me, the relationship between Severus and Sirius is that of the bullied and the bully. I personally would be very uncomfortable if they were together, regardless of Severus. No matter how Ross is doing now, he can't erase the bullying and hurt caused by Sirius. If the author sees that Severus and Sirius are not together, it will destroy the coded outline, just pretend that he didn't see it, but if the impact is not big, I still hope that Severus' CP will not be Sirius

I feel good about myself, hehe, I hope everyone likes it~

It's beautiful, it's beautiful, it's super beautiful. As the first person to review this book, I can only say it's very beautiful. This Harry is completely different from the Harry in the original book. The Harry in the original book has messy hair, but this Harry has a buzz cut, and he met Draco at the beginning. The two entered Slytherin together, and Severus and Sirius were in love together. And Ron will not fall in love with Hermione, but will fall in love with Blaise, and Pansy may fall in love with Hermione (probably, not sure) I can only say a few words. Treasure books are really treasures. If you don't read them, you will be at a loss.

Personally speaking, it looks good and the plot is lively and interesting. The daily life of the two little ones is very sweet. Harry (not the original Harry, but he is in his world) is slowly making Draco better, changing his prejudices and becoming strong. [I am a simple fan of movies, the above are all my personal opinions, please read the article for details]

Very good. Really good. The character of the male protagonist and some of the interactions between them. The characters are all very complete. However, I just feel that Astoria's character is not as gentle as in the original book. I feel that it has been changed in this book. It feels weird to see Astoria lose her temper like that. Everything else is okay. Very sweet. Recommend nice. Another one is the pairing of Sirius and Severus. This book is about the two of them liking each other. But I feel that Sirius, as the bully, and Severus, as the bullied person, were not so easy to forgive the pain at that time. The writing here is too easy. Just like this and that, eh, I forgive you. I love it. The wounds of bullying are not so easy to heal. Otherwise, why would Severus hate James Potter so much? But it also feels very sweet. It's just a little evil [thinking]

This book is really great. I just want to ask the author, is this book Hader or Deha?

Dear author, is this book Deha or Harder? If it's Hader, please tell me. I like Deha better, thank you😊

Dear book lovers, don't be blinded by the cover. It's really super, super, super beautiful.

Just summarize. First let me talk about what I like better. First, the emotional line between Draco and Harry was laid out very naturally. Nothing particularly blunt. Moreover, this book is the first book I have read in which Harry is sorted into Slytherin. It is really great. The second is that GGAD, a pair of CPs, are finally in the same frame, and the writing is particularly good. It can be regarded as making up for the regret. Third, well, I would like to thank the author for giving a happy ending to most of the difficult characters in the original work, so that at least they did not become my second time. Ah, at the same time, what is the most important point at the same time? It's because that disgusting thing from Umbridge didn't appear, really. Just this terrible thing, regardless of whether the author's writing is good or not, if this thing appears in a large part of the article, it will really affect my reading experience. Fortunately, there is no Umbridge in this article. Damn it, I am much happier reading without this terrible thing. Then let me talk about my personal suggestions for this book. One point is about the pairing of Professor Snape and Sirius. I personally think that Professor Snape, as the bullied person, may not be easy or possible to forgive Sirius, the bully, given his character. Then there is the author. Since he wrote this pair of CPs, they should have a beginning and an end. However, the author did not explain clearly why they broke up in the first point, and did not explain their follow-up clearly in the second point. So I think this may be one of the failures. Then the second one is about the exchange student who slid over. After explaining clearly what happened to him in the end, the person mentioned later completely disappeared without any clear explanation of his consequences. Oh, finally, here are some blessings from me. First, I hope the author's writing style will get better and better. Second, I hope more people can read this article.

Damn, this is the best book I have ever read (maybe not) but I have to say, thank you for bringing all my favorite characters together! Maybe they will meet in another time and space. I hope my CP can be together forever. I wish all endings can be happy!

It's very exciting. I think it's well written. It has written a different savior and lived out his own way. I hope the author will continue to work hard [adoration][adoration][adoration]

It's very interesting, very interesting, but it's a pity that Snape and Sirius should have another episode about them, and then see how they quarrel and then get together. I really want to see it!

It's very interesting, but it's a pity that there are some unfinished ideas, such as how did Sif and Sirius break up? Li Chenglin's follow-up, what happened after Rael was picked up by Taoism? And what happened to the girl (forgot her name) who liked Draco? Didn't she say a few words to Draco who turned into a dragon? What happened to her then? Can consciousness still emerge at Hogwarts? Did Harry's sister get her birth pill? What happened to Voldemort's Black Mist? What's going on between Voldemort and Severus? Why does Voldemort say something with extended meaning? Has Fudge fallen? (Fudge is not important) What is important is that the ending is a bit rushed T_TT_T Although a lot of foreshadowing has been resolved, such as Old Bee letting Beetle Girl reveal the news, the projector given by Li Chengyue, the role of the necklace and summoning card, the nightmare and dragon matter, etc. Have all been resolved (I really want to know if Draco has two roots in the end [thinking])

Whether it is Hard or Deha, I prefer the original one. I still feel a bit uncomfortable with being worn. I blame myself for not reading the introduction carefully. The author's writing is very good, but I can't get the pleasure of this setting myself. I'll see you again when I'm destined.

There are a lot of typos, but the plot is okay be, there are a lot of typos, magic correction, when will Tomato get a negative score [laughing awkwardly]

If you come to see Deha, it is indeed worth watching. The sub-CP is also very good, but Snape and Sirius are a couple... I was shocked (I can't accept it, so I can't stand it). I'm not here to complain, I just want to make those who can't accept this couple mentally prepared. Okay, I'm done. If you can accept it, just go ahead! I'll leave first [salute]

First of all, this novel is very novel and interesting from the beginning. There are some small thoughts of the author interspersed. There is more energy and richness in writing this post. But the reason why Harry fell in love with Draco is not very clear, I think. Anyway, I watched quite a lot. I originally thought it was Hud. Then I suddenly realized how Draco was taller than Harry again. Then I scrolled through the comments section and found out. Author, if you remember the introduction of the book, can you put a tag on it? In the end, I stopped watching it because it was different.

Overall, I liked it very much. The only regret was that I saw the sbss I was fighting, but I didn't see the dog chasing his wife in the crematorium, but the sssb, and the professor was mostly tolerant. Mainly because the time traveler plug-in was too large, so I personally felt that the progress was very fast, and it ended in a whoosh. I was a bit unfinished.

Very beautiful, with a lot of CP, I like every pair, especially Deha and GGAD. The ending and the twist are also very good, but I am not very satisfied with it at all, because the relationship between Sirius and Severus was so bad [smile][cry][cry][cry] Finally, thank you for the great article, which smoothed over the regrets and made people unforgettable. It is a very happy and beautiful story! I hope you will continue to work hard. (Getting up in the middle of the night: Why did the author double-write be [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry])

This book is really brilliant, and Draco and Harry are really sweet! ! ! It's just that Harry woke up a little late. And Drindwall and Dumbledore are also very sweet! ! ! In a word, this book is the best one I have ever read [Adoration][Adoration][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

This is the second most beautiful Harry Potter fan novel I have ever read. It is very sweet and has a different savior. Moreover, I did not expect that there are Sect and Sirius in it. It is a bit disgusting but also a bit interesting. Although it is a bit weird, they still don't get together in the end. Then the author also wrote a side story about Dumbledore that I want to see. I really love the author~ I hope the author can write more exciting Harry fan fiction

Just from this sentence "Bringing an old couple together" I give you five stars [blowing kiss]

Yes, it's very interesting, but I want to see the follow-up of Severus and Sirius. Have they reconciled? [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

Very well written. Hold high the banner of Deha CP hahahahaha (ಡωಡ)

It's super good (there are still 7 chapters to go and I've finished reading it~ I can't bear to read it)

I really like reading Harry Potter fanfics. This is the first time I have met an author like this author. I also really like the author's big-written books. I like them very much. I feel very sweet about myself. There is a little hope that the stories will become more and more exciting. I am not a pervert, but I prefer car stories and pornographic stories.

After reading a few chapters, I couldn't help but comment first. My family, it's really good! ! ! The plot is getting more and more exciting! ! Like it!

Really, this is the best book I have ever read in Tomato. It is very well written. The interaction between Draco and Harry is not sloppy at all. It is a fast-paced book. I personally really like this book. There are many CPs. They are all very easy to read without losing the main theme. The plot is also fascinating. Really, I love reading it. I have the urge to read it again. I never get tired of reading it.

Author, I love you so much! (*˘˘*). .:*♡

Listen to the author's words and comment on the book. It's really good. That Chinese exchange student can't be the main character's sister, right?